*Its very lenghty... don't tell me I didn't warn you* 😳
Okay so where do I start... So much to say...
Firstly... I love the title of this FF. Walking Wiith you. Its not only creative, but it also defines the whole FF. You have definitely given this FF the best title. It makes you smile everytime you read it. :)
Coming to the story. You have written an amazing FF. The journey of Mayank-Nupur. You have not only written a story, but you have also given a written example of how a marriage really works. You have gone to the depth of every aspect of marital life, and written it very beautifully. Its not only an FF you enjoy reading, but also one you can actually learn from.
Coming to the story. Mayank & Nupur's journey from the moment they lifes got tangled together till the end where there souls got connected. Each and every chapter have been a pleasure to read and you have written it int he most convincing manner, it all seemed less like story and more like a real life...where you can visualize everything.
From the very first moment you have showed Nupur's emotions in a very realistic way. From the time her life's biggest decision was made. Her hesitation, her anger, everything. I've to admit... the way the marriage was settled, I was not at all familiar with it. Mere liye yeh sab bohat naya tha. Haan hamari family main bhi, auratein parda karti hain, aur auratein aur mard ek saath nahi baithte.. Par shaadi k maamle main itni sakhti... K ek tasveer tak nahi dikhaiy Nupur ko... Kya aaj k zamane main aisa hota hain?
Kyunke I've seen jho kuch rishtey kuch log pakistan say bahar reh kar pakistan main karte hain... Phir bhi itne tareeke hain, baat karne main. Like Facebook, twitter, MSN and now even skype aur cellphones...
Jab aap ne yeh likkha tha, I was quite shocked k itni sakhti hain aur woh bhi aaj k zamane main.
Khair moving on... One thing I have always adored by you FF is the sisterly bond between Dia-Nupur. Dia ki shaadi ho chuki hai, toh woh Nupur ki kaafi madat kar sakti hain... Aur ek baat bohat he achchi lagi k Nupur jho bhi karti hain woh pehle Dia say ijazat mangti thi.. Iss say yeh pata lagta hain, k woh Dia ki izzat karti hain.
Another sweet relationship was the one between Adi-Nupur... he was very supporting, and fulfilled all her wishes which Dia couldn't... Behnoi say ziada woh Bhai tha.. :) That wasvery beautifully potrayed.
And of course the few snippets we got of Dia-Adi. Along with MayUr I enjoyed reading their scenes. :)
Okay then coming to MN.
Kya kahein... I think throughout the whole FF aur throughout their "journey" the most innocent part was their e-mail communication part. Unki rishtey main yeh sab say ziada khubsoorat lamhe the... Thori se hichkichaahat, thori se sharam, aur woh thora sharmilapan...😳 Woh waqt mere hisaaab say, bohat he khubsoorat tha. From both sides. Mayank being the naughty one, while Nupur shying away. Those updates were truly the best ones. I enjoyed reading those ALOT. 😳
And then the wedding prepreations starts. Then again the rituals started... Another side note...Mujhe yeh kaafi achcha laga, kyunke kuch aisi rasmein thi jinka mujhe nahi pata tha, aur jho humari family main nahi karte... So it was nice to know. And it brought Mayank-Nupur one step closed to each other.
And then finally the grand wedding came... That last step they were taking as strangers towards each other, and on the other side they took the first step into the marriage. For me that pre-wedding journey was no less than a blessing. :)
Then the wedding night... Okay.. Looking at it chapter wise... This was the sweetest one. 😳 And the most remembered one... Mujhe kabhi bhi... itni sharam nahi aiy koi FF parthe waqt. I seriously wanted to close my eyes at that moment. Aisa lag raha tha, k sach much main kisi couple k bedroom main hain. It was bit too realistic. 😳 And I think.. you wrote in a very special manner, issiliye it seemed so real. :)
And then their journey began.. They had their shares of ups and downs but they came through every challenge "together". And it was all very realistic. All from settling in a new house, to the first little misunderstanding between you and your in-laws. Kaafi achchi tarah say aap ne likha hain... Showing not only the good side of marital life but also the bad side. And even within all this you have constantly showed the unbreakable bond between Mayank-Nupur in such a special way. That whatever may come their way, it could not break their bond. But it just made it al ot more stronger. 😳
And I must add. They might not have verbally said they love each other, but it was always there. Lafz shayad na istemaal kiye ho unho ne, par unki khamoshi bohat kuch kehti hain. Iss say zaida, Nupur ka character shuruat say khamosh he tha, woh khamoshi main bohat kuch keh jati hai. Mayank usske opposite hain, woh express karta hain. Aur uss ne shayad kaha na ho, directly confess shayad na kiya ho par uss ki harr ki hui harkat say muhabbat saaf saaf nazar aati hain. Toh woh na keh kar bhi bohat kuch gaya, same case with Nupur, theyway she responded. :) Inke rishtey main lafzon ki zarurat nahi, shayad yehi inke rishtey ki khaasiyat hain. :)
Oh and I also liked SG. Especially Gunjan.. You showed us two different marriages, and how the different realtions grow and how they cope up with each other. Another fact to love about this FF. :)
One thing I missed in this FF is the journey of becoming parents and the day they became. And then again, how life is after your blessed with a child. You did show us a few snippets of it, in the last chapter but for me skipping that "special joruney" and reading after that was a bit incomplete. I wished you showed us that. I don't mean 15+ chapter showing that, but just some few glimpse of that period. But then again the flow you have in your story, that might have ruined that, and the journey itself... so maybe it was better this way. :)
Okayy..yeh bohat ziada hogaya hain... So I'll stop.
In short... You showed Mayank & Nupur walking hand in han together in every phase of life. Be it the good times or the bad ones. They're always walking togther.
Beautiful FF Fiza, you have written in the most beautiful manner, that made every chapter a pure pleasure to read.
Oh and I forgot to add the most important part. Reading this FF in pure urdu has been amazing. I really enjoyed it. Especially updates that were only in urdu. Thank you so much, I know it was difficult for you to write so much in urdu considering your other readers. But still you did write a lot for me, and I'm very thankful. Urdu just made the FF a whole lot more special. :)
Thank you so much for writing this, I've loved reading this. And enjoyed Mayank-Nupur's journey to the fullest. :)
Thank You once again for writing Walking With You. 🤗
-SilentPrincess-
PS: Added a few lines...
Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago
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