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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Punam! Thanks for the PM! & Lovely update!!! AR were too cute :P Do continue soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey friends, peachgirl, sweetkajen, destinationn, vidu87, KaJen_addiction, samades..thanks a lot for your like tabs and comments..now the next part..hope you will like it...




recap---

But Riddhima understood his words and ran to the washroom to save herself from her husband……..






now ---chapter--31







arman came in the room to call riddhima but overwhelmed seeing her angelic beauty.


His lips uttered .."wow!!! beautiful lady!!


riddhima was wearing jewelries...arman was fascinated to see his beloved wife but riddhima didn't notice him….she was in a sea -green net sari..her make-up was very simple but charming!!.. she put sindur and placed a bindi seeing in the mirror….a sweet smile was playing in her soft pinkish lips...





arman grabbed her waist from back and kissed her long ,black silky hairs..."mere baare me soch rahi ho na?"




riddhima frowned.."arman ,chodo na...mere hairs kharab ho jayenge...aur mai tumhare baare me keun sochun?


arman caught her more tightly and breathed her fragrance ..."itna sweet sweet smile jo de rahi ho.."


riddhima pushed him : "mujhe aur koi kaam nahi kya jo tumhe sochun? aur sochun bhi to kya about you mr.armaan mallik?


arman showed his white teeth..."wo,raat ko...wo biting...yaad hai?


basket,tumhe hosh hi nahi rahta,dekho kaise marks ho gaye hain!...(with a pouting look)


riddhima gave a glance at the marks on arman's chest ,which was made during their love session, she lowered her eyes with shyness and uttered..."tum bhi na arman! jao,gadi nikalo,mai aati hun...


but arman again pulled her shamelessly and said..."aapki punishment abhi baki hai mrs.mallik...wait for it...and by the way,aapne ye net sari keun pahni?



riddhima knew what was arman trying to say but for teasing him,she made an innocent face and asked…"keun? kya burai hai isme?mai achchi nahi lag rahi?



Arman caressed her cheeks …." You know basket…tum duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki lag rahi ho ,aur yahi mere liye muskil hai,sab meri basket ko dekhenge ,mujhe unki nazren achchi nahi lagti…



Riddhima made a smack on his cheek….."pagal! 3 bachchon ki ma hun mai…tum bhi na arman!



Arman emphasized on the word "mere" and repeated riddhima's words :"mere 3 bachchon ki ma….


Riddhima laughed…"haan baba,tumhare 3 bachchon ki ma…


Arman again uttered …"aur abhi bhi utni hi khubsurat, jaise basketball court me 1st day of internship mili thi…


Riddhima rounded her eyes…."chalo bahut hua,ab humey chalna chahiye burna ab papa khud aa jayenge yahan…



Arman sprung with fear…."nooo!!mujhe dant nahi khani shanky se !!!!


riddhima (with fake anger) : "phir tumne shanky kaha papa ko?


arman nodded his head heavily..."ya,ya...jab tak tumhare papa humari life me interfere karenge,mai shanky kahunga...

riddhima gave him an angry look..."tum kabhi nahi sudhroge!"





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When Arman and riddhima reached at the new sanjiwani,got dr.sashank was standing outside the hospital….today,riddhima was driving and arman sat beside her grabbing her waist…..seeing dr. shashank ,arman moved from riddhima with a jerk and uttered…"mar gayye!! Ye shanky bahar kya kar raha hai?



Riddhima punched him …."arman! wo mere papa hain,mind your language!!!...


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Arman quickly covered his face with riddhima's aanchal…


Riddhima : "kya kar rahe ho arman?


Arman (hiding his face) : "shanky se chup raha hun,aur basket,isiliye mai net sari mana karta hun,dekho chup bhi nahi sakta isme…



Riddhima annoyed…"armaaan!! Mujhe tang mat karo…..tumhe sharam nahi but mujhe hai…chalo mai yahan utar jati hun,tum gadi park karke aao….


Arman (like an obedient husband) : "okay jaan!! But jane se pahle ek kissi de do plz…pata nahi kitna time tumse dur rahna parega…..


But in response ridhima gave him an angry look…and stopped the car….seeing her dr. shashank stepped forward…."beta,kitna late ki aaplogon ne!...


Riddhima hugged dr. sashank …"sorry papa…chaliye,arman gadi park karke aa jayega….



Dr. shashank caught riddhima's hand and stepped on the way to hospital….


Arman mumbled…"ab shanky mill gaya to basket mujhe pahchanegi bhi nahi! Chal beta arman…..teri kismat hi aisi hai!!(sighed)



love you all
punam



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Posted: 12 years ago

wow di wat a part

luvd it 2 d core
but yaar bahut chottu sa tha
cont sooish
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww! so sweet! loved it! Armaan is such a cutie pie!
eagerly waiting 4 next part! cont soonish
thnx 4 pm:))
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Posted: 12 years ago
following friends liked the last part :

peachgirl, sweetkajen, vidu87, KaJen_addiction, samades..thanks a lot friends...now the next part...hope you will like it...







recap


Arman mumbled…"ab shanky mill gaya to basket mujhe pahchanegi bhi nahi! Chal beta arman…..teri kismat hi aisi hai!!(sighed)...






now --chapter 32





Arman came in sanjiwani's hall where puja was held….he saw that all were present there…..arman mumbled…"ab to gaya kaam se!! sab mere pahle hi pahunch gaye hain!!...surely meri band bazayenge ye log...



he heard that his friends were talking about them...means about him and riddhima...


he came to rahul and stood quietly...


muskan : "lo,hero ab aaya hai...guest bankar...


Rahul (in a complaining voice) : "kya arman ,aaj ke din bhi late! Aaj tera hi din hai yaar,thora to jaldi aana chahiye tha….


Arman : "kya karun yaar! Ye basket..


Before he complete it ,atul punched on his back.."aaj ke din meri Sali ko to chod de…we know tumne hi late kiya hai…


Arman (trying to emotionally blackmail) : "haan haan..champ,tu to Sali ko hi supoort karega na,kahte hain na Sali adhi gharwali…


Muskan gave a smack on his head : " to hero,wo teri puri gharwali hai na,tu keun usey blame karta hai?


Arman ( sighed fakely ): …"mera koi trust hi nahi karta!"


Rahul : "chal chal ,ab natak mat kar…jakar wahan baith,saare rituals dr.sashank and padma ma'm ne kar liye..ab bachchon ke naam ke time to tum dono ko rahna chhaiye yaar!



Arman (as unaware of it) :"keun?aisa kuch rule hai kya?


Muskan (angrily) : "abey gadhe!tum dono ko hi naam rakhna hai na…idiot kahin ka!


Arman was about to say something but before it he heard a serious tone…."dr.arman!!wahan kya kar rahe hain?please come here….



Arman smacked on his head and mumbled…"beta! Ab to jana hi padega…chalo bulava aaya hai,sasurji ne bulaya hai…



Saying it,he made an irritating face ,seeing that all friends burst out laughing..rahul patted his back…"ja beta,dar mat hum tere sath hain….


On the puja mandap,arman saw that golu was in rishima's lap and cutie pie is in angel's…riddhima was performing some ritutials,which panditji was dictating her…arman uttered…"sab kuch to thik chal raha hai ,meri kya jarurat?



Riddhima gave him an angry look and again continued her puja….arman stammered…"nahi,means…ok,mai baith jata hun….


Padma : "arman beta,aap riddhima ke paas baith jao..abhi aap dono ko kuch rituals sath karne honge…



Arman showed his dimples …"okay padma mom! Jo karna dono milkar karenge,ye achchi baat hai…



He sat beside riddhima and whispered…"mai bhi yahi samjhata hun na, dono milkar karna chahiye but meri wifey to mujhse dur bhagti hai…



Riddhima glared him angily and whispered.."sudhar jao arman,burna papa ki dant khani padegi…wo bhi apne hi bachchon ke samne…


Panditji :"uhun! Baat nahi…puja par dhayn den…


Arman (very obedient boy): "ji panditji…


After some rituals ,panditji told…"ab aap bachchon ke naame batayen….mai un namon se mantra padhta hun…phir sab aakar bachchon ko asirbaad denge….



Rishima (quickly): "ji panditji uncle….meri bahan ka naam Armina Mallik and golu ka naam Aryaman Mallik hai…



Pandtji : "thik hai….


He started puja with their names… In half an hour ,puja was finished and all blessed the twins……….



Dr. sashank : "ab please aap sab dusri building me chale jayen ...wahan new wards ke inauguration hain….




………………………………………………




All came in the new building where dr. shashank inagurated the cancer building, emergency ward,special ward and many new wards…




After that they came in the new sanjiwani's hall where dr. sashank was on the stage….dr. sashank requested to sit and started his speech…."hello everybody….thanks a lot for coming here….aaj mai bahut khush hun,keunki aaj meri pyari beti riddhima ke twins ka naming ceremony hai and maine jo sapna dekha tha,wo pura hone ja raha hai…



All were quitely listening dr. sashank….but a person was busy with his fav job….placing his hand on his wifey's waist,searching his way…..riddhima hit him with her elbow…..



Arman moaned.."ouch!!kya kar rahi ho basket!!


Riddhima rounded her eyes…."chupchap baith nahi sakte?yahan bhi badmasi!!!...



Arman (making innocent face):"maine kya kiya?



Riddhima : "sssh!! Papa ki baten suno….


Arman (like an obedient husband) :" okkk jaan!!



Dr. sashank continued…." Aap sab to jante hi hain,ye sanjiwani aaj se 7-8 saal pahle hi ban gaya tha but maine jaisa socha tha ,us sapne ko pura nahi kar paya ,bahut salon tak…..









chapter ----33





Dr.sashank stopped for a while,looked at the audience …everyone's eyes were on him…dr. sashank cleared his throat…and again started…."anyways,ye life hai,yahan humari life me bahut kuch hota hai...maine jo sapna bahut pahle dekha tha,aaj pura kar paya…. Ish new sanjiwani ko apni tarah se decorate karke….2 OT,2 children wards…1 free ward,jahan roj na jane kitne helpless logon ka treatment kiya jayega……and special wards like cancer ward,aids ward…. ab ye sirf mumbai ka nahi,india ka best hospital me count kiya jayega….yahan saarey facilities milenge...





He stopped for a moment and again started…."now,their name will be announced , who are incharge of this hospital…..



Everyone clapped to welcome his speech…..


Dr.shashank smiled…"now please give attention….dr. atul….dr. atul will be the incharge and head of the department of special ward...


Atul got up excitedly…."thanks dr. sashank….


Anjali whispered : "atul,wahan jakar papa ko thanks kaho…tuhara sapna pura hua….



Dr. sashank continued…"and dr.rahul is the head of the medicine department…and dr. muskan is the incharge of children ward…



Rahul yelled in excitement…."yeee!!



Muskan got up and yelled…"thanks sir…thanks a lot…



Dr. sashank looked at them and smiled…."dr. kirti and dr. subhankar humare Bandra ki sanjiwani ko sambhalenge, as a senior doctor.




And dr.anjali joshi ,dr.abhimanyu modi,dr.nikita modi and mai humari old sanjiwani sambhalenge…dr. anjali medicine and surgery department ki head hongi and rest drepartments dr. abhi,dr. nikki and others doctors sambhal lenge…




and very happy as saying ,yahan new sanjiwani me bahut saare new doctors join kar rahe hain….


all started to clap again...


Dr. sashank's eyes were looking for his loving daughters among the audience…he looked at anjali, who seemed a bit sad…dr. sashank knew its reason,so he smiled in his heart…and then his gaze fell on his riddhima beti…who was listening her papa's words quietly….



Dr.sashank continued…"dr. riddhima bhi next month se join kar rahi hai yahan,new sanjiwani me,but as you know wo abhi jyada responsibility nahi le sakti,so uski responsiblity only 2nd children ward ki hai….jahan special treatment ke children rahenge...




Riddhima smiled and thanked to papa through her eyes …..



Dr. sashank smiled…."and the lastly….mujhe aap sabko batate hue bahut khushi ho rahi hai...ish sanjiwani ke head honge…"dr. arman mallik"……




The hall was filled with clapping sound…..but for whom all was happening…where was he? Dr. arman mallik?...ya,he is here….sitting beside his basket….totally lost in playing with her aanchal…..



Dr. sashank called from the stage…"dr.arman mallik!!!




No response!!!!



"Dr.arman mallik! Come here please…."dr. sashank raised his voice….



All turned to see where dr. arman mallik was…...



Riddhima whispered…"arman!papa bula rahe hain…


But arman was lost somewhere!!nowhere else his basket's beauty!


Riddhima pinched him…."arma—aa—n!!


"Ouch!! "arman whined…"kya kar rahi ho?"



Riddhima (angrily) : "papa kab se bula rahe hain,go……


Arman got up quietly and stepped to the stage…….everyone's eyes were on arman..they wanted to greet him but the 1st right was of dr. sashank….




Arman came on the stage and stood there bowed his head….



Dr. sashank…."kya hua dr. arman? Aapko khushi nahi hui?"



Arman replied in a low voice…."sir,ye to mera sapna tha…but sorry sir,mai ye responsibility nahi le sakta…




love you all
punam


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome parts Punam.
I read last 3 parts in one go.
I don't have enough words to appreciate you darling.
You are wonderful.
starting from Riddhima's labour pain to the inauguration of New Sanjeevani and naming ceremony of AR's twins,everything was mindblowing..
Armaan's concern for Riddhima during her labour pain was described very nicely.
The shock for Armaan with the beautiful surprise of the arrival of twins into AR's family was astonishing for me as well.
I'm so happy for AR.
Shanky ahaan..I can't stop laughing the way Armaan curses Shanky.
AR's cute romantic moments were fabulous.
The whole naming ceremony was very nice.
I love Rishima so much.She is an angel.
Why did Armaan deny Shanky's offer?I'm so much curious now.
I'm extremely sorry for the delay honey.
I hope you'll forgive me.
I've been extremely busy with exams and studies due to which I could not comment.
Anyways plz update the next part as soon as possible.
Love u
Muah!
Take care!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update Punam!
loved AR moments!
why did Armaan declined da head post?
eagerly waiting 4 next part! update soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...Punam sisi...🤗 longgg longgg time yaar...i missed u n ur FF...😳
Wowie...the story is proceding so well.. Ammy is soo cute.. Love the essense of love between AR , still so fresh and rejuvinated..😳 lols.. Mother of Ammy's kids..hayye..har dialogue mein romance n love..so wonderful..😃
Lols..Shanky..yeh word sach mein meri jubaan par bhi chap gaya hai..ismein Ammy ka bhi kasoor nahi..😆 Lovely and amazing work. as always sisi...thanks alot for sharing..Love AR..and love u sooo much!!! Muaahh..keep writing n rocking the way you always do..Tc..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - me fine dear and hope the same from u...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update😊😊
loved ar momets❤️
and thanks for the pm😃
continue soon...:-)
sorry for the late reply🤗

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