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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part...
I hope Rishima may bring Ridz back to Armaan soon.
this part was amazing Punam.
You write so beautifully.
I liked the way rishima got amused seeing her mama so beautiful and playing basketball so well.
Please update the next part soonest..
love u
Take care!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
update soon... waiting for ur update. wen r planing to update yr???:-(
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chapter --13





"aap ki koi beti hai kya dr.?



Riddhima startled to hear it,she looked at rishima ,but found she was too staring her..like been seeking of its reply……


Riddhima didn't give any answer and placed gazar ka haluwa into her plate.



"dr. kya meri jaisi pyari aur masoom koi bachchi hai aapki? "Mischief on her face could be seen clearly.


Riddhima touched her cheeks…."hmmm…aap masum nahi,bilkul saitan ki nani ho..


"pappa bhi yahi kahte hain.."rishima caught riddhima's hand and made a soft kiss…


Riddhima smiled…."aapke pappa thik kahte hain…aap khud apne baare mein kuch nahi batate aur mere baare mein janna chahte ho…you are very smart na?…



Rishima pretended to be sigh…"ok…mai kuch dino baad chali jaungi,tab aapko bahut dukh hoga ki ek choti si bachchi ko….

Riddhima at once shut her mouth and pulled her close…"aap dono kahin nahi jaoge…



Angel :"but dr. ,hume to jana parega na…humari chutti khatam hote hi..


Tears came in riddhima's eyes… "kaise rahegi wo in dono ko chodkar! Bas 5 din hi hue they,but lagta tha janmon ka rishta hai riddhima ka unke sath…"




Rishima uttered with a wet voice…"I will miss you dr….will miss you a lot….


Riddhima whispered…"me too beta…kash!aap dono mere paas hi rah jate!!"



Suddenly rishima yelled with joy…"idea!!!!!!


Riddhima (surprisingly) : "kya?


Rishima : "keun na aap bhi humare sath chalen?"


Angel : "yes!!! Chaliye na dr. humare sath…hum dono sabko mana lenge…koi aapko kuch nahi kahega…



Their childish talk made riddhima smile…"nahi beta,aisa nahi ho sakta..mai kisi dusre ke ghar me..




Rishima cut in the middle…"means agar aapka ghar hota to jati?



Riddhima made a light smack on her cheek…"pagal! …mera ghar to ye hai..ye orphanage…


Angel :"orphanage kisi ka ghar nahi hota dr. …hume pata hai ,yahan jinka koi nahi hota,wo rahte hain..dr..kya aapka koi bhi nahi hai?


Angel's words made her to think about it…"kya sachmuch uska koi nahi? Nahi nahi…uska to sab hain,papa,ma,nani,di,atul jaisa dost aur jiju,rahul,muskan,nikki jaise pyare dost aur sabse pyara uska arman aur unke pyar ki nishani armina.."


She heard angel's voice…"bolo na dr…kya aapka koi nahi?"


Riddhima tried to change the topic…"bahut raat ho gayi hai,chalo mai aapko apke ghar chod dun..

Rishima and angel screamed together…"nahi!!!!! …


Riddhima looked at them with a great surprise. Rishima tried to manage…"actually dr..humare mumma- pappa dr.bilkul pasand nahi karte.
agar unko pata chala ki hum yahan aate hain,to wo aane nahi denge.so plz…


Riddhima :" but beta,raat ho gayi hai,mai aise aapko nahi chod sakti…

Angel made a quick solution…"ok,aap kaki ko bhej do humare sath…

Riddhima (pleasantly) : "that's nice…mai kaki ko bulati hun….


After going riddhima from the room,the two girls shook their hands….


Angel whispered :"that's great rishzi…kaki aa rahi hai humare sath. Wo humari help karengi is plan mein….


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Today,the children did not come, riddhima was looking so sad . she was habituated with them . after meeting them, she again started liking her bored life. She used to play basketball with them at morning and in the evening they came the orphange and riddhima used to made both's fav dishes…she told them stories cause they were very fond of stories…. Her stories were about a princess who had a loving papa…who used to bring teddy for her…she had a pretty nani, who used to make her fav dishes….she had a loving mom…she had a sweet ,loving di ,who scolded her on her silly mistake,but loved her a lot…..she had loving friends and she had gotten a prince,who had loved her more than anything in this world.



Kaki came : "beta,andhere mein keun bathi hai? kya hua?


Riddhima (sighly): "kaki,aaj princess aur angel nahi aaye…pata nahi kaise hain….kahin beemar to nahi ho gaye?


Kaki : "apne mom dad ke sath time spend kar rahe honge…


Riddhima(quiet upset): "kaki,aap to unka ghar janti hain..chalo na mujhe lekar..dill nahi lag raha unke bina..

Kaki :" nahi beta,aap wahan nahi ja sakti…

Riddhima (eagerly):" lekin keun kaki?

Kaki : "beta,pata nahi keun uske mom-dad doctors ko bahut hate karte hain.. agar unhe pata chal gaya ki wo aap se milne aate hain to unka aana band kar denge."


Riddhima :" but kaki..mujhe bilkul achcha nahi lag raha hai…


Kaki : " hmmm..beta ek baat kahun? Bura to nahi manegi na?


Riddhima looked at her…


Kaki : "ye bachchiyan bilkul humari armina jaisi hai na..wo bhi to itni bari hi hogi. Pata nahi kaisi hai!(sighed)


Riddhima (confidently) : "wo apne papa ke paas khush hogi kaki. Mai janti hun arman kabhi bhi usey dukhi nahi hone dega. Apni jaan banakar rakhega meri armina ko."


Kaki : " mai janti hun beta. Phir bhi..papa kitna bhi pyar karey,ma to ma hi hoti hai na…


Riddhima :" nahi kaki…arman ke rahte usey koi kami mahsus nahi hogi."
Kaki :" thik hai mai maan leti hun,but beta, arman…arman ko koun sambhalega. Wo tere bina kaise apne din kaat raha hoga!"


Riddhima : " kaki,ab tak to wo mujhe bhul bhi gaya hoga..7 saal beet gaye na..shayad sabhi mujhe bhul gaye honge."…riddhima said in her tears.


Kaki caressed her hair lovingly…"pagli!apno ko koi nahi bhulta..riddhima beta,wapas lout ja,apni armina ke paas,arman ke paas…


Riddhima smiled in pain…"nahi kaki,bhagwanji ne meri kismat aisi hi banayi hai…


Kaki (a bit annoyed): "tu to manegi nahi kabhi bhi…mai hi paresaan hoti rahti hun…chalo chodo dekhun ,bachche kya kar rahe hain…




Kaki left the room and riddhima threw herself on the bed.today she was missing armina a lot. But armina might have forgotten her…and arman! he got married again or what?No..no……riddhima shievered with a fear…."arman uske siwa kisi ke baare mein sochega bhi nahi. Lekin wo kabtak raah dekhega? Girls uspar marti thi, agar arman kisi ko pasand kar le to?agar phir se kisi ke sath uska dill mill jaaye to?"



Those thoughts were disturbing her so much ,so she got up from the bed. She took out their album,caressed armina's pic and whispered to arman…"arman,please mujhe apne paas bula lo…ab is tarah rahna muskil hai tumhari basket ke liye. Ye akelapan uski jaan le legi…mujhe tumhare sath,apni beti ke sath jindagi bitani hai….".



Love u all
punam



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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rishima is super cute...
I liked the way she tried to make Ridz remember about her family.
Aww! The two girls even requested Ridz to go back along with them...
So sweet!!!
Ridz is missing Armaan and her family...
I hope AR may come face to face each other soon and Rishima may be able to accomplish her task...
Punam jana you are a marvelous writer.
Plz update the next part soonest..
luv ya
Take care!!!
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part dear! loved it!
eagerly waiting 4 next part...
plz cont soon nd thnx 4 pm
take care nd lots of love...
Sunita:-)
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chapter --14





"humey miss kiya kya dr.?" rishima asked riddhima.

"hmmm…bahooot." Riddhima caressed her hair .

"humne bhi.."angel said…"actually kal hum ek bahut old mandir gaye they,mamma –pappa ke sath..yahan se koi 30 km par hai."

Riddhima :" hmmm..haan,maine suna hai ek bahut purani mandir hai,but kabhi gayi nahi."

Rishima :"lekin aap to bhagwan ji ko bahut manti hai na..

Riddhima asked surprisingly .."aap ko kaise pata?"

Rishima bit her tongue and said in her heart…"pata nahi baar baar keun galti karti hun"…and said.."haan,mujhe kaise pata…right question…mujhe kaise pata..wo..actually…baat ye hai ki…(actually its our arman's style,which i love most -- punam)

Angel managed at once…"wo humey kaki ne bataya ki aap bhagwanji ko bahut manti ho."


Riddhima smiled.."achcha! to kaki se mere baare me investigation? "

Angel caught her ears…"choly dr….

Riddhima caressed her cheeks.."koi baat nahi,but aapko batakar jana tha na,mai bahut ghabra rahi thi ki aap shayad mujhse mile bina hi mumbai chale gaye..

Rishima:" hum aise hi thore jayenge,jab tak…"suddenly she remembered what the wrong she was going to do….so kept silence.

But riddhima asked.."jab tak kya princess?

Angel again managed…"jab tak humari chutti hai,hum yahin rahenge..hai na bittu?


Rishima nodded her head in yes and said…"aapko pata hai dr. wahan sabki mannaten puri hoti hai,pappa ne kaha…

Riddhima :" to aapne kya manga? "

Rishima :"jo humare paas nahi ho,wo bhagwan se mangna chahiye na?

Riddhima : "yes…

Rishima : "to humare paas sabkuch hai,bas aap nahi ho…

Angel :" to humne aapko manga bhagwanji se…

Riddhima laughed…"dono ke dono pagal hain…chalo batao aaj aap dono kya khaoge?

Angel :" kaho na dr…agar bhagwanji aapko order karey humare sath jane ko to aap aaogi na?

Riddhima changed the topic…"aur aapke mumma –pappa ne kya manga?

Angel : "actually unhone bataya to nahi but we know…wo jahan bhi jate ek hi cheezte mangte..unka koi apna lost ho gaya hai usey wapas mangte hain bhagwanji se…….


Riddhima (curiously): "koun?

Angel (sighed) : "don't know dr…wo batate nahi..

Rishima :"dr. hum aur 15 din yahan rahenge…

This thought made riddhima sad but she controlled herself and said…"aap dono ko mai kuch dena chahti hun…yani gifts...

Angel and rishima both :"wow!! that's great!kya doge?

Riddhima : "jo aap chahen..

Rishima : "meri birthday hai 30 th may ko..uske next day hum chale jaynge,to tabhi hum mangenge apni gift aapse.

Riddhima made a sad smile…"ok, jo aap chahen…


Rishima :" jo mai chaun ?

Riddhima nodded In yes….

Angel : "promise?


Riddhima : "ya,promise….


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Riddhima was finishing her work as soon as possible,she wanted to return orphanage fast.the girls were about to come,they wanted to learn "salsa dance" from riddhima.


Princess told that her pappa liked "salsa" so much but there was no one to teach her. She requested her for it and riddhima too wanted to teach them ,cause now she had a desire to spend her most of the time with those girls.


When riddhima returned to orphange ,found that they were waiting for her.

Riddhima : "sorry,thori late hui…chalo hum practice karte hain."

Rishima : "its okay dr...aap fresh ho jayen. Mai aapke liye coffee banati hun..cappuccino..


Riddhima surprised to hear it…"aapko coffee banana aata hai? aur aapko kaise pata ki mujhe cappuccino pasand hai!"

Rishima :" papa bhi yahi coffee pite hain na wo bhi mere hath ki banayi hui ,to mujhe aaati hai."


Angel : " aur kaki ne hume bataya aapko ye pasand hai."

Riddhima : "hmmm..very smart..aur aap mere liye kya banaogi angel dear?


Angel : " mai to layi hun..actually mumma ne aaj matar- paneer aur aloo ke parathe banayi thi,to mai aapke liye le aayi.mumma ko kaha ki meri ek dost ke liye chahiye."


Riddhima remembered aloo ke parathe and matar-paneer made by nani,who had always made it specially for riddhima. She found that the same taste which was bring by angel. Suddenly she felt that she was missing her nani so much…."kaisi hai nani! Kitna pyar karti thi anji di aur usey. Kitna khyal rakhti thi!"….tears came in her eyes…suddenly food stuck in her throat...she started coughing… rishima gave her water…"dr. paani pee lo ..jyada mirchi hai kya?"


Riddhima : " nahi beta, thanks…I am fine now.."


Angel : "pata hai dr.galey mein atakne se koi apna usey yaad karta hai,mumma kahti hai..shayad aapko bhi koi yaad kar raha hai.

Rishima : "shayad nahi di,surely…


Riddhima got up quickly.she wanted to forget those things, those children made remember them again and again…. she said..."chalo,ab hum practice karen?

Rishima and angel : "yeah dr….




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Riddhima was so sad . she was feeling too bad. Now just 1 week left to go back mumbai of the children.nowadays ,riddhima felt lonliness without them.they learnt salsa dance very well and also gave her "guru- dakhshina".riddhima smiled to see their guru- dakhshina...what was their "guru-dakhshina?" they were 2 teddies ,one was white and other was asmani colour.those teddies are same as arman's gifts which he had given her on the name of their friendship and love.


Angel explained.."actually dr…hum aapke liye aur kuch nahi kharid sakte na,to ye humare papa ne birthday me diya tha..aapke paas rahegi to aap humey yaad karengi na…


Rishima : "sorry dr…aap naraj to nahi..

Riddhima : " mai kabhi in teddies ko apne se dur nahi karungi bete…mujhe bahut pasand hai ye gifts…

Rishima and angel smiled in their hurt…

At night riddhima opened her almirah and searched the things which arman had gifted her.but she couldn't find them. When she enquired about it to kaki,she told that they are lost somewhere.kaki said that may be riddhima had left them in previous orphange.




Riddhima didn't say a word to kaki,its not kaki's fault,its her. Now she became so careless that lost her fav.things..lost arman's gift. She came in her room and threw herself on the bed.



Now she was crying bitterly…tears were coming from her eyes uncontrollably…she breathed in her sob…"arman ,maine tumhari sari cheejen kho di,shayad mai kabhi tumhare pyar ke kabil thi hi nahi…maine shayad tumhe bhi kho diya hai arman…shayad..!!!...




love you all
punam


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Awesome part and thanks for the pm
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Hey Punam, nice part! Thanks for the PM and continue soon! :)
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wonderful updt! loved it!
eagerly waiting 4 next part! plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm
love ya
Sunita:-)

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