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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#291

very emotional part !!!! I really wished that it wouldn't have taken Sara's death to bring AR closer ..but I guess this was important as sometimes pain gets people closer...now I'm getting all touchy ...well it just shows how much of a good writer you are. BRAVO !!!!!!

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548252

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

res:))

Hey the rest of the part was also really well written and I just loved it. I'm glad that AR went to the park and Armaan is sooos sweet to Riddhima and cares for her sooo much. I hope he always be there for her and Riddhima for him:)) and I'm als happy that riddhima didn't told anjali about the real reason for their break up or else she would be between AR.

con very very very soon

take care

love miss93

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Oh Goodness Sanaa, this sentence of your's just made me ROFL.

Sorryyy I HAD to kill Sara off..!!

That sounded so sadistic yaar! Yeh kya ho gaya hai?? HAHA jk jk jk, bura nahin maana :)

I just thought it was kind of cute the way you said it :)

Ok, to the part.

Goodness, who knew you could update so fast! :) I was beginning to think I'd have to wait at least a day :) But you completely surprised yaar :)

I loved the way you made AR come together, thode samayy ke liye hi sahi, but you did! And it was amazing! It felt so nice reading those parts. :)

Sara's death was an emotional one, and it made me sad to think that people deal with this on a daily basis-in real life. It's heartbreaking. You made that heartbreak come out into words and I salute you for that.

Overall, right now, all I can think of is that Armaan needs to get his ass working and get Riddhima back <33

Love,

Kri <33

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Comment edited on Page 20 :)

Haan haan...pata hai you were waiting for it 🤣

xoxo

Aanya

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armaans_desire

@armaans_desire

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#295

tht wz an amzing and super loong part.loved it!!

saras death wz relle sad.. definitely hurt eryone around her

finally thngs r progressing btw AR

cont soon!

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#296

hey...:)
amazing part...:)
but omg...hayye rabba..u had to kill my baby Sara..:( :(
u know i just got back from work at 3am n here i am crying sitting all by myself...lol it's feels weird n funny...;)
but yooo u r an amazing writer... loved how u described the possibilities of AR's closeness... it was soo cute...n specially with the Adi kid part..:) it was adorable...:)
cont soon..;) thanx for the pm.:)
Preet <3

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ANKITA GOKHALE

@armaan_best

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#297

just loved it alot...😊

great one

finally some cute ar moments.they do really make a good couple

ridz is now getting normal.good for her as she has been under a lot of emotional turmoil from the last few updates😭

good to see the fun back

feeling really bad for sara and her family.loved the girl's atttitude

u gave it a perfection

just waitng for ar to confess their feelings...😳

can't wait for it

let the updates be more funfilled,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,with more of armaan and ridz together...

update soon

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shonadesire

@shonadesire

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#298

]hey Sanaa...i come to knw ur ff now when u pm me...i would loveto read ur ff bcoz ur OS were awesome n u write superb, so i will read it...bt it take tym to read whole ff...when i will complete to read whole ff then i will comment...thanks for pm

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roshni_A

@roshni_A

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#299

loved the part . So touching...I don't like Sarra dieing but yea, anything for AR...They are slowly coming back together and I am happy that Armaan is making himself worthy of their love...so cheers for Armaan. I hope they unite soon... updt soon.

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Sanaa,Heart-Touching Update! I loved how you wrote it..Every bit of it! The AR bond becoming stronger,Sara's death,practically EVERYONE around thinking they are together (Jaldi ho jayenge!😉) then that little possessiveness at the hotel,AWWIIEEE! I LOVED THIS UPDATE! One of my favourites! And LMMAAOO that Sid and lovely part had me Crazking Up! I LOVE ur Sense of humour,It rocks! Now Update :)

Love Ya!!<33