SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

I have written many short ones for my Maine Pyaar Kiya series(MPK).. which were mainly based on the events turning in the serial.. and I am starting a new one Sandstorm..where I have tried to write a fiction.. a different angle to Maaneet's story..

It just came to me.. if Geet was carrying Maan's child then...I thought about it and wrote a completely new story with Geet Handa and Maan Singh Khurana..

If you like this then do press the button.

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

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teri_susan

@teri_susan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Loved this one and it's nice to continue the fiction in a single thread,and it's easy to read.Continue soon.............

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: shivangi783
When will you update Chapter 11? 😳

Thanks for showing so much interest.... Tomorrow.. I should be able to put.

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

dear ..

4 pm me....dear

lots of &

sach a n sweet n awesome update....

just

4 ur update...

to pm me dear....

sorry 4 late reply dear....really

to u dear.....

lov,❤️

Tama

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

how come maan didnt remember her[/Quote]

Hmm.. itna logical hota toh story kaise develop hoti.. 😭

Maan was also drunk that night.. that's why he doesn't remember clearly.. but as story develops.. you will see his side of story and also how he recollects.. Have patience..dear

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Phew
Atlast Maan got it that it was Geet

He hav GF but still was forcing himself on Geet

Bad guy but good wit Geet😉

Liked how they talk n their unspoken words also

Sameera is his GF that is office people view..Our Maan can never be bad

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: dia_ditz
Maan shouldn't commit himself for the name sake,but he want to accept her knowing all the facts abt her...........its my POV,but its up to u!!!
loved it..........gr8 update!!!
wonderful one!!!

He should listen to his heart...