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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Anokhee
Zappy,

Any update today???
Say Yes or No..
Dont say maybe, please!

yes.. but it maybe incomplete! 😛😆

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ssh57
The second half was also very cute. Loved it. The way you've described Riddhima's awkwardness is spectacular. Honestly I wouldn't have been able to write about it. I find it very difficult writing about their intimacy. You write it so beautifully without making it seem vulgar. Here also it sounds so realistic. Especially his teasing her about it. Men are like that only. They enjoy making their woman feel embarassed about such issues. I really admire the way you work with words. You are one awesome writer.👏 I really am your greatest fan. keep up the wonderful work. Love, shardha.

Thanks Shardha for letting me know that it doesnt seem vulgar.. i was a little apprehensive about posting it initially coz i thought people might object or take offense.. hence the warning and stuff.. but the thing is that they have come a long way in their relationship and seen what all they had to see.. so it is obvious that the level of intimacy and their private discussions would go one step ahead.. and i am glad that you and everyone else who had commented so far doesnt have a problem with that change.. 😊 keep reading.. will put up next in a few hours!

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

oh i havent written anything yet to put up an update now.. still planning on what all AR can do while they are away and together in the beautiful Singapore.. hopefully i'll manage something by tonight!

have a nice day!! 😊

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

i know i had promised a long part but i havent been able to write as much as i had planned to.. so i have put up another small installment.. it isnt that ineresting or great, but required to be put in.. it may feel dragged, but i have my reasons.. so for now.. hope you enjoy reading the small installment that i have put up on pg 115

Edited by zephyrr - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

a hello to everyone who's reading this! am finishing up.. will try to post before 12.. but i have loads of other things to do too..

To everyone who has commented on the part so far.. thank you so so so much!!.. i am glad to have gotten a positive feedback from all you guys.. i know this part got stretched too much and has become too long and may seem dragged with a lot of unnecessary details.. but i am glad you guys are so sweet to have given such nice comments.. and i am encouraged to finish writing again! i am also thinking of replying to everyone this time.. i'll try if i get time after the part is complete.. coz its been long since i have done that!

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

doesnt look like an update night tonight.. i just came home half an hour back.. and its really cold where i am.. i just feel like snuggling up in my blanket and going off to sleep.. cant complete the part today.. but i'll surely plan an update for tomorrow.. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: vaishiksg
that was a long upd8 of 19pgs........hehehehehe
awesm yaar........ nice upd8
bt nw i m jus tired of both of them always being insecure..........

pls let them b free of all these insecurities... make them live like normal ppl. at times it becumz so xtreme taht its hard to digest.....
i mean ohk i can understand after all dat happened in d past they r scared of losing each other.........
bt nw. they r engaged..... n married frm their soul.....so i guess they shud handle their. professional n personal life quite maturely........
n nt cry over it like u r going for 2 days n hw will i live......i mean that goes to an extreme level of obsession in love........i mean usme love kum aur obsession zyaada nazar aaraha tha.....
all in all i want u to relieve them out of their insecurities.......
n them to hav faith in the love......

totally my pov.

19 pgs?? 😕 oh of WORD.. i use OneNote so i wouldnt know.. my god! its 19 pgs.. 😲

and about the whole criticism.. i take it in my stride..

i can understand where you're coming from.. but i'd like to defend my characters here.. they are certainly not obsessing over each other.. nor are they being unprofessional.. Armaan is going to Singapore and Riddhima is not trying to stop him.. both are just hoping that this be avoided if possible.. and that too only coz, if you've noticed in the story, its been only one week since he came back and they got engaged.. i know i took much more time to pen all that down.. but even then in a week they hardly got time together coz of Shanky and his Breakfast-Dinner routine.. so technically they are allowed to be insecure, especially about going away from each other and that too to the same place that had become the reason for their separation.. i bet they would have been not this disturbed if he was going anywhere else but there.. and this i did mention.. what they went through was huge and quite extreme.. so according to Newton's third law, i think their reactions to it will be equally extreme.. Time is the only thing that will free them of their insecurities.. which i can speed up.. but i wanted to put something else in.. which i cant reveal atm..

plus i think you wouldn't feel this feeling of theirs being dragged if i would have put up all the updates continuously everyday like i was supposed to..but i didnt.. that was my bad!! 😛

but i do agree with you that i overdramatized their insecurities for each other.. and it may be tipping over to the obsessive side.. but then there is a reason behind me doing that, which will be clear in the next installment.. which hopefully is the last installment.. 😊 and i hope you enjoy the next installment and the parts to follow.. and thank you for sharing your views.. i appreciate criticism as much as the praises that you people shower on me.. 😃 Keep reading!!

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Hey!! sorry ppl! but no update tonight! work and stuff..

and Anokhee : Thank you for your reply.. a long one after a long time, which actually started with 'I have NO words for this part'.. lol!!! thanks a ton though. its great to receive feedback in the way you've put it.. makes me want to sit right now and start writing the next part.. maybe i will.. lol!! but yeah.. the title was the only thing i had in mind before i started writing the previous part.. and i put it up in the end, coz i thought it will be a give away.. that's the disadvantage of giving installments. but i guess my tight schedule calls for this style and no other.. hopefully the next installment shall come tomorrow.. keep reading and posting your encouraging replies.. cheers!!😃

And a Big big Thank You to each and every one of you who has taken the time to post your comments which are the only thing that keeps me going on.. and the crazy love for the characters that i had watched and then what i made them into.. lol!! doesnt make sense.. well.. its 1:15 in the night and i m extremely sleepy.. so dont bother figuring it out..

but what i really want to say is, THANK YOU so so much!! 🤗

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z.e.p.h.y.r

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

hey people. well first of all to all of you who have wished me a recovery - i havent fallen sick yet.. i am just not feeling too well.. everyone around me has finished falling ill this season.. now maybe its my turn.. lol!!

for those who've asked me to take rest : i hardly can.. i have to go to work whether i like it or not! 😡

and to all of you who've 'liked' and commented and those who've silently read the latest update.. : i had put up the part in a hurry in the morning.. had not expected all you guys to read it coz i forgot to put it up on the title of the thread. but to see all you guys here, i am pleasantly surprised! 😊 Thank you for being so nice to that small little update that was too small for all its worth!

Edited by zephyrr - 14 years ago