PART 28

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Part 28


FARMHOUSE

Choti: Please Mj,u also come with us with sad face.

Maan side hug to choti: Sry choti,next time I will come with u.

Vicky placed his hand to Geet shoulder : GB,first time I come to south India right, u show me everyplace ...with smirked face at maan.

Maan dead glare to Vicky..Vicky ignored his glare nor remove his hand from Geet shoulder.

Geet: yes vicky,we roaming everyplace..with teasing look at maan..

Maan smirked face and  tongue licks his m shaped lips with winked eyes.geet cheeks changed to pink as remembering previous kiss.

Geet murmuring : dustdanav always teasing me..with blushing face.

Janumaa come to maan side and carrying maan cheeks: maan beta,take care,dont come late time..have ur food in correct time.dont shout anyone with motherly love said to maan..maan nods his head silently

Geet laughed loudly: maa,last one impossible one for maan.he never control his anger. Every 10 minutes atleast he yelled at 5 members otherwise maan have any ill with teasing tone

Maan grinned teeth : geet...

Geet: see maa,just now only i said but he proved as yelled at me with chuckled face

Maan: maa,she teasing me with pout face.

Janumaa: geet,he is ur husband,give respect with little angry face.

Geet : oh husband..(look at maan) patiji,take care ur health,u r alone in big mansion with happy face.we all going to Chennai except u patiji with dramatic way. plz have ur blend pasta in correct time with chuckled face

Janumaa twisted geet ears: this ways u respect ur husband..u teasing him.my poor son already feel low but u make him more sad.

Geet: maa,its paining with little pain voice

Maan: maa,plz leave her ears..( he cannot tolerate her little pain)

Janumaa remove her hand from geet ears: geet beta,he cannot tolerate ur little pain but u teasing him.

Geet twisted her lips and maan smiled seeing her child angry

Every one luggage placed their car,maan give instruction to his bodyguards..

Maan: shiva,be careful,dont allow anyone alone.U always surround them mainly geet and swara.if any problem call me immediately..with strict voice

Shiva: yes sir, i will update after we reach Chennai sir.

Maan nods his head and looking everyone..he never saw their faces like this much happiness.he proudly look at geet..because of her..he got his lovely vision infront of him. He is very emotional even he sad as geet going away from him.

(Wait i think,dearies u not forgot our chandu right..chandu who servant of km..he such stupid and innocent ..he always irritating maan through his stupid question.)

Maan room

Chandu: maan sir

Maan remembering geet smile antics not concentrate what chandu saying: hmmm

Chandu: i know sir,u sad because u not come with us

Maan : hmm

Chandu: dont worry sir,i will come back soon,dont miss me maan sir,i know u miss my cooking,my sweet talk with sad face

Maan: ha i miss ur smiling,ur soft touch.

( guys maan saying everything about his mishty but chandu thought maan saying about him LOL)

Chandu gives confuse look: my soft touch but my hand so rough one.maan sir said my hand so soft ,oh its means my hand soft one because my maan sir never say lie with pride voice.

Geet also enter maan room

Geet thought: he never miss me but he missing chandu with angry face

Maan: miss ur teasing,miss ur caring

 Chandu big eyes moist hearing caring word from his mouth (mind voice): don't praising me maan sir,iam crying

Geet mindvoice:what happened to my maan if any virus attack  him

Maan: miss ur almond eyes,miss ur cute face

Chandu cheeks become red hearing cute word ( mind voice): iam so shy maan sir.

Geet mindvoice:it means maan not straight guy with popped eyes after second chi chi what iam thinking.

Maan: i miss ur kiss

Chandu and geet unison: what with shout voice.

Chandu went out immediately with blushing face.

Geet come infront of maan and hit maan shoulder: how many time u kissed

Maan : i did not count my kiss mishty..u count it with teasing tone ( poor boy thought mishty and himself kiss moments but geet asking about chandu and maan Wink)

Geet: chi chi babaji,why u give me this type of husband for me.if anyone know about this ..what they will think about him with worried voice.

Maan cupped her cheeks: why u disturbing ur babaji.noone think wrong..its mutual for us.

( once again us means geet point of view chandu and maan but maan point of view -maaneet)

Geet: u easily said its mutual for u,why u did it with me..what our family thinking about me..

Maan: u already know about kiss,u also accept my kiss right then why u said like that,without ur permission,I never kissed .

Geet: u r shameless,maan.When i give u permission to kiss chandu bhai with frustrated voice

Maan eyes open widely: what the hell,i kissed chandu..are u mad why i kissed that stupid chandu.

Geet: u liar,i know u both r ..

Maan: mishty,shut ur mouth. I dont know when u got this type of weird thought

Geet: really u r not ga..without complete her sentence..maan captured her lip with his lips

Maan harshly bit her lips,sucking her lower lips,geet also forgot everything concentrate only his passionate kiss.maan tounge enter geet mouth.his tongue taste every sweet nectar of her mouth..both need oxygen so he leave her lips.

Maan head touched geet head : now u say iam g..geet closed his mouth with her palms..nods her head negatively..

Maaneet laughed : stupid mishty,i saying about u not that stupid chandu..few seconds my heart stopped hearing me and chandu..yuck face

Geet giggled : sry maan, i thought u love with chandu bhai..

Maan: when u see chandu have soft hand with chuckled face..u saw his eyes right..he have cricket ball size big eyes..and his talk omg he such ass voice..i cannot tolerate his single word with irritate face.

Geet pinched maan cheeks: maan,chandu bhai and ur combination really super one with teasing tone.

Maan: mishty...with grinned teeth.

Geet: everyone waiting for u..lets go outside.

Maan nods his head and both went out parking area

Everyone settled their respective cars.Geet popped her head  through car window..she gestured maan come near to her..

Maan bend down to her car window level : what mishty,u want kiss me..i dont mind if u kiss me now

Geet murmuring: dont worry maan,i will take care ur chandu with naughty tone

Maan glare to geet and car moved out to farmhouse..

Geet flying kiss to maan and sign language said i love u maan.

Maan smiled seeing her child antics.

****

 Airport ,Flight

Everyone chit chat with each other,choti totally avoid Annapurna maa,she hurt insake of choti rejection but happy atleast choti infront of her.geet missing maan.she not engaged with everyone..

Flight landed on Chennai airport.

Everyone come out from airport .Already maan arranged Bmw car.bodyguard escorted them.

Geet rolled her eyes: he never changed.he arranged heavy security like prime minster come to chennai

everyone settled down to car.A car stopped infront of geet house.

Geet house not big like mansion.A beautiful building have 10 rooms,garden and backside swimming pool.

Geet ,choti,pinky helped pickup luggage from car back door.bodygurad stopped girls

Bodyguard: mam,plz leave it, we do with slow voice

Geet: bhai, it just our dress bag, we hanging ourself.

Bodyguard: mam,please if sir know about this as he shout us

Geet: but bhai, ur maan sir never know about we pickup our luggage.

Geet phone ringed yeah of course her hubby call

Geet: hello,we reached safely

Maan: hmm,I know that go inside,bodyguard pickup ur bags

Geet murmuring: dd,I don't know how he found out what iam doing 

Maan: because iam ur shadow,mishty.i always following u whenever u go..

Geet twisted her lips: I miss u with slow voice

Maan: u must say I love u not miss u.

Geet: good bye and cut the call.

Geet : choti,pinky lets go inside ur jiju order with grinned tone.

Hall

Sam: Pam aunty,we stay in small house with disgusting look at every corner of  house.

Brij: don't worry sis,I will arrange 5 star hotel for us

Pam: no we all stay here..noone go anywhere With hard voice

Sam: I hate this place. I don't know this people how to live this type of place. Iam sure they have no Air conditioner..without AC  as I cannot sleep.

Pam: I said right,we all stay here,u both mingled with them with warning tone.

Everyone settled down to sofa,chandu and champaa already occupied kitchen.

Chandu prepared juices for everyone.champaa served juices to all.

 First room sanskar and Vicky shared,next room -pinky and choti.dadi and champaa shared one room,Janumaa and raguram one room, pammi have separate room, swara and sam shared one room.geet have separate room.two rooms for bodyguards.brij occupied last room.chandu occupied kitchen.

Swara : why I stay with that devil.i cannot stay with her even single minutes,no i am going stay with geet bhabhi or choti room.

Swara enter choti room with her stuffs: pinky bhabhi and laddoo,I stay with u .

Choti: who denied u,come inside,we will arrange extra bed for u.

Swara hugs choti : my sweet ladoo

Vicky passing through choti room hearing laddoo word came from inside of room that enough from him..hero enter in heroine room

Vicky eyes scanning whole choti room and separate choti and swara hug and searching something

Choti: hey Vj what r u doing in my room,why u searching like mad person

Vicky : iam searching laddoo

Swara: laddoo  infront of u, why u searching bhai..with teasing look at choti

Vicky: I don't want moti sry choti..i want laddoo

Choti fuming : get out my room,Mr.vicky

Vicky: but my laddoo

Swara: what u said ur laddoo..really laddoo urs with teasing tone

Choti shout: get out Vicky joker

Vicky run out to her room and swara blast her laughter. Choti hitting swara through pillow.

Vicky : I know my kitten(choti), swara calling u to laddoo..i don't know why iam very happy seeing ur red face in ur angry time.i love irritating u

****

Geet room,night time

Geet called many time to maan but he did not attend her call even she called his right hand (adi).he also not pickup her call.

Geet mind thought: why he so much workacholic person..why he not behave like lover boy..his first wife his business only.. I think  our honeymoon time also he hug his laptop & sleep with his laptop rather than me. Hey babaji, plz give love tips to my hubby ( geetu,u r babaji is god not love guru).i know babaji,he never change.so dont waste ur time .in delhi he always roaming behind me but today even he did not single call for me.every husband behaved like that.if we stay with them..they roaming behind us if they leaving or come to mother home,that enough for them.they forgot that they have wives..

( geetu, if u want curse ur husband,curse him but curse not for every husbands live in earth)

Before our proper wedding time..he behaved like he not interest with me..if my delivery time I come to mother house for custom even after delivery I will stay atleast three months in mother house ,what he will do.he totally forgot me.Hey babaji why u give me unromantic husband.

( omg what happened to geet,before proper marriage madam think about HM,pregnancy time even after delivery ritual )

Swara, choti and pinky enter geet room and they guessed geet cursing maan.

Swara: choti,I think someone not in real world with teasing tone.

Choti: hmm,shona dream world or romantic world

Pinky: no girls,maan singh khurana world

Geet angry glare to girls but they ignore her angry glare.

Choti: juilet missing her romeo with teasing tone.

Swara: ha like laila missing her majnu

Pinky: juilet missing him so much but in delhi  her romeo missing her or he happy as he think without her torture , he got peaceful life for somedays

Swara: nahi bhabhi,definietly Romeo yelling everyone for missing her juilet.

Geet lost her control and throw pillow to them..they defend through their arms.

Geet: get lost everyone with shout voice.

Pinky: she proved that she is GMSK..she yelled like MSK.

Girls laughed loudly and geet irritating seeing their behavior.

Geet pushed them outside to room and choti stopped

Choti: last one thing angel..plz..

Geet thought good night wish and geet allowed them inside.

Choti hugged geet : good night angel..

Choti turns on mobile and play song ..this song dedicated for u angel with naughty tone..went out with girls.

( my favourite favourite song from Mella Thiranthathu Kathavu -  mastero illayarja music)

uru Sanam Thungirucchhu udak Kathum Adicchhirucchhu
Pavi Manam Thungalaiye Athuvum enoa Puriyalaiye(uru Sanam)

( the people of the village have  slept,this chills winds too have passed,

This sinned heart though is unable to sleep,why not? I don't understand.)

Kuyilu Karunguyilu Maman Mana Kuyilu
Koalam Poadum Pat'tale
Mayilu Ila Mayilu Maman Kavi Kuyilu
Ragam Padum Ket'tale Sethi Solum Pat'tale
Ona Eni Nane Ulam Vadi Poanen
Kani Ponuthane En Mamane En MamaneOthayile Athamaga Ona Nenacchhu Rasicchhcchha Maga
Kanu Rendum Mudalaiye Kalam Neram Kudalaiye(uru Sanam)

(My dark cuckoo, my beloved's darling cuckoo,

Draws beautiful patterns with its song,

Peacock, the youthful peacock, the beloved's poetic cuckoo,

Can sing in  beautiful rhtyms when asked,

Can tell the news through its song,

Always Yearning for u,my heart wilts way.

Iam only a virgin girl ( and hence the intense feeling),

My beloved,my beloved

Your beloved (aunt s daughter) is all alone, the who admitted you in her thoughts           ,

The eyes don't shut, the proper time has not yet come.)

Maman Odathu Pattu Natham Tharum Kulalu
Nana Marak Kudatha
Nalum Thavamirunthu Nanum Ket'ta Varam
Kudum Kalam Varatha Maman Kathil eratha
Nelakayum Neram Nenjukula Baram
Melum Melum erum Intha Neranthan Intha Neranthan

(The flute producesthe mellifluous music after touchfrom my beloved s lip won't I becomethat flute?

Wont that time come when the boonthat I ask a persisnat penancebe granted?

Wont it reach my beloved s ears

At this timeof baskingin moonlight,there is a heaviness in the heart,

The heaviness keeps building up, it keeping growing at this time,)

 

Ona Eni Pottu Vecchhen Oala Paya Poattu Vecchhen
Ishtap Pat'ta asa Macchhan, na Melum enga Vecchhan (Oru anam)

(I put vermilllon dot on my  forehead thinking for u,I also readied the palm mattress

But my beloved whom I desire,

Only made me yearn more and more,)

After song geet face become red hearing romantic moonlight song..she blushing so much thinking maan.geet phone ringed without seeing phone id attend call

Geet: hello maan with lovely excited voice

Choti: angel,its too much,Always dreaming about my jiju right.how is my song selection for u di, u blushing right

Geet  straight face: iam not

Choti: u know I already messaged adi jiju for dedicate song to maan jiju for my sake.even I send a song through whatsup.

Geet: which song dedicate to my maan with eager tone

Choti: oh u want know na,ask him directly with teasing tone. Cut the call

Geet: Rakshai ( devil) with smiling face.

Other side our hero

Just now only maan come back to mansion..poor adi also tied up with workacholic boss aka big brother.

Maan lied his strong body to bed without changing his office attire..he close his eyes but geet face only come infront of him. Mishty why u left to Chennai..

Maan  hearing mishty voice.

Maan jerked up to bed and his eyes openly widely ..he starring his mishty in front of him.

Maan come to close to geet and cupped her cheeks through his palm.

Maan: mishty,I miss u so much..why u left me

Geet: maan with lovely voice

Maan: i missing u call me my name through ur sweet lip.How sweet hearing my name from ur mouth..his head bend going capture her lips..sudden push,maan fallen to ground.

Maan look at geet: adi what r u doing here,where is my mishty ( his eyes searching geet every corner of room)

Adi fuming: what the hell Maan singh Khurana,if I did not push u,u kissed me..iam not ur mishty,iam adithya,u got it with angry face

Maan: mishty not here..with disappointed face..

Adi tried go out to room

Maan: where r u going,adi u sleep in my room.

Adi: no ways I am not stay with ur room,in few sec,u tried kiss me ..night time what u will do with me..no ways I want save my sanity from u.u sleep alone..

Maan rolled his eyes: ok why u come to my room

Adi hit his head : I forgot,choti dedicated song for u lonely night..with teasing tone.

Adi turns on music player and left the room

( my favourite but i hearing only tamil version -Bombay film - Oscar winner AR.Rahman music)

tu hi re tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyun

(you are the one you are the one how can i live without you)

aja re aja re yun hi tadapa na tu mujhako

(come here come here now dont hurt me like this)

jan re jan re in sanson mein bas ja tu

(my life my life come and just get into my breathes)

chand re chand re aja dil ki zamin pe tu

(oh moon oh moon com at the ground of heart)

chahat hai agar ake mujhase mil ja tu

(if you are in love com and meet me)

ya phir aisa kar dharati se mila de mujhako

(otherwise do one thing just vanish me from this earth)

tu hi re tu hi re tere bina main kaise jiyun

(you are the one you are the one how can i live without you)

aja re aja re yun hi tadapa na tu mujhako

(come here come here now dont hurt me like this)

in sanson ka dekho tum pagalapan ke

(see the maddness of this breathes)

aye nahin inhen chain

(they are restless)

so on...

(songs i got from net source inculding translation)

Maan rolling in bed one side to another side but his sleep not reach his eyes..he want to call his mishty..he don't want her sleep..he already late time..

Other side geet also same state..

Geet : atleast I want hear his voice then only i got sleep..

Geet called maan and one ring maan picked her call

Maan:mishty..kissed above phone continuously..geet happy hearing kiss sound.

Maan stopped: mishty u changed me to puppy lover, I miss u so much, if u infront of me,I make u wet through my saliva

Geet blushing hearing his shameless word few sec she turned to sherni avator : oh MSK miss his wife not bad with teasing tone.

Maan: don't lie,u also missed me,otherwise u did not call me in night time.

Geet: oh ..ha I thought that u came or not from meeting otherwise roaming with any other girl

Maan eyes popped: what iam roaming other girl.When u saw i roaming with other girl (angry voice)

Geet: sry maan,u roaming only with ur chandu right with teasing tone

Maan: mishty..if u talk like that..i will cut the call.

Geet: ok baba sry..u have ur dinner

Maan: yes,u

Geet: I ate stomach full

Maan: I know that u never bother about ur husband strave but u ate fully

Geet: oyie Mister,be careful u teasing Geet Maan singh Khurana..if my husband know about u teasing me.he beat u

Maan: Acha ji,u r hubby stronger than me..he not worth in front of Maan singh Khurana with pride voice

Geet : don't say any word against my maan otherwise I kicked out KC even KM..be careful

Maan: Ok my sherni..u love maan more than me..its too bad with dramatic ways

Geet: yes,l love My maan more than myself ..he love me insanely,he such pure heart,I never seen ever..he is best husband in the world.best human being..he is the best

Maan: I love u mishty

Geet: shame on u, u proposed Married girl..i already married with my maan..geet only for maan not anyone

Maan: I love u darling,maan only for geet..sirf geet ki..i miss u

Geet: I love u too maan..u sleep maan,u already tired.Morning I will call u

Geet kissed  over phone ..maaneet slept thinking about each other.

Next day

Every one packed their bag and going to tripati temple.A car journey,After 7 mountain crossed only,we would reach temple..youngster pulling their legs each other.

Swara: sanskar,what happened why u angry with Annapurana aunty

Sanskar: shona,plz dont take this topics..

Swara: every time I asked same question but u shut my mouth give any fake reason..i don't know why u angry with ur own mom..aunty not like my mom..she always caring about u, worried about u,love u but why u did not understand.

Sanskar: not now,I will tell u after we reach home..

Swara: promise

Sanskar: promise,now sit like good girl,I considerate my driving otherwise our car down to any pit of mountains..

****

Hospital,India

A dark room ..only sunlight fallen in room..a man layed in bed,his eyes closed but his eyes ball scrolling and his lips murmuring some name continuously

lady: sister,whose that  person, why he in coma state and what happened to him

Sister: we don't know anything about him..almost 10 yrs over, till now he in coma state..he have no improvement in his body..but he murmuring some name in his coma state ..god only help him..

Lady: what 10 yrs..till now his relation not come to meet him.

Sister: I don't thought like he have any relation..our chief doctor found out him in bad condition..he almost dead bed condition..that day doctor not save him,even today he was not alive too..doctor brought hospital to him that time he head injured ,his body full wound and bruises.he druged by someone.

Man murmurming : anju...anju...anju..

 

******

After worshiped god in Tirupati temple

Everyone went for outing spot near mountains..everyone looking scenaries.

Vicky: GB, really south India so hot place.

Geet mind fully occupied by her hubby smile, face..

Maan placed his chin to geet shoulder : mishty I don't know india hot or not but my mishty so hot with seducing tone and biting her ears.

Geet eyes open widely shout : maan

Vicky shakes her hand: why u shouting maan bhai name GB with teasing tone.

Swara: chi chi ,geet bhabhi day dreaming about maan bhai..its too bad ..with teasing tone.

Geet run out the place..

Brij called someone said kidnap to geet. ( silent talk)

 

******

Shiva ( maan's bodyguard): sanskar sir with worried face

Sanskar: ha, shiva..

Shiva: sir, geet madam missing..with guility face.

Sanskar: what With shocking face

Brij smirked look at pammi ,pammi smiled evily...

Sanskar: alerts everyone search geet everyplace.

 

Bodyguard murmuring something to sanskar ear and sanskar eyes become red insake of angry.

 

Brij and pammi shivering seeing his angry face.

 

Part end

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