Midnight Ice-cream Date [#IFFA2019]

Midnight Ice-cream Date [#IFFA2019] Completed G

Chapter 1

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khwaishfan
khwaishfan @khwaishfan 3 years ago Fab OS... well written. Loved Mr Shergill's concern for Mrs Shergill.
so sweet of him to find a solution and then take her for ice cream.. Ahh he admires his wife. he finds her beautiful...
so she drank vinegar cos of Lavanya. At least he heard this and will keep an eye on Lavanya.
virka_luv
virka_luv @virka_luv 3 years ago Very very cute OS!!! Please write more such stories :)
Mevsta101
MeV @Mevsta101 4 years ago OMG this is so so so beautiful...I loved it. It was simple but yet so beautifully written. Everything was great from u writing style to the whole idea. After reading this I kinda want to see a scene between lava and Drishti in regards to rakshit (with drishti winning of course 😂)I dunno how I missed this🤦🏻‍♀️...loved reading it ❤️
IAdoreYou
IAdoreYou @IAdoreYou 5 years ago [QUOTE=dakshumhatre]Waw so cute os
Love itThanks for pmUpdate soon[/QUOTE]
This is one shot so there is nothing to update here. Oh but I never sent you any PM. Thanks anyway.
IAdoreYou
IAdoreYou @IAdoreYou 5 years ago [QUOTE=sweetnoori]My first comment in this silent reader
Loved it dear osam drikshit Good job [/QUOTE]
I am glad you picked my story to leave your first comment on. Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading this.
IAdoreYou
IAdoreYou @IAdoreYou 5 years ago [QUOTE=adventure_gurl]
awesome cute os![/QUOTE]
Thank you. :)
dakshumhatre
Dakshata @dakshumhatre 5 years ago Waw so cute os
Love itThanks for pmUpdate soon
sweetnoori
sweetnoori @sweetnoori 5 years ago My first comment in this silent reader Loved it dear osam drikshit Good job
IAdoreYou
IAdoreYou @IAdoreYou 5 years ago [QUOTE=kirrat43]Nice piece of work!
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Thank you.
IAdoreYou
IAdoreYou @IAdoreYou 5 years ago [QUOTE=Sugar_Cinnamon]This was beautiful Harshada I could visualise the entire scene while writing your OSYou've kept DrikShit true to their characterisation and beautifully captured their essence
It's always a pleasure reading your work and hope to read many more from you Take Care,Jess.
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Hey Jess! Thank you very much. Really glad that you enjoyed reading. How sweet! Thanks again! Cheers
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