PART 6

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Part 6

Geet: What he said with hesitate voice

Vicky: dad not leave  champ even one minute with smirked face

Geet:  i didnot asking about papa .oh ..maanji

Vicky: Oh geet iam not hear anything with teasing voice

Geet: Hey duffer iam talk about Manu papa with shouting voice

Vicky: Oh u talk about maan bro but till now he didnot come back to our home


Geet sad voice: Ok I will talk later and take care manu and cut the call

Vicky turned and shocked seeing that person in front of him.

Person: Vicky with angry voice

Vicky: Oh sexy ..iam talking my friend and his eyes looking ground with guilty voice.

pin drop silence room only heard Thudd..sound

Dadi slapped Vicky so hard ( poor Vicky his Hand carrying his own cheeks)

Dadi: Where is she, where is my child ,Vicky with grabbed Vicky collar


Vicky: Dadi iam sry plzz forgive me

Dadi sit in sofa and Vicky placed his head on her lap as tears flowing in their eyes.

Vicky: Plz dadi talk  to me

Dadi: Why u people played with my feeling with hard voice

Vicky: Dadi plz first listen me and then u angry with me

Silent talk( flash back story)

Dadi: Where is she with teary eyes

Vicky: She went Manali for office works.she will come back after two days and champ is ur

Dadi stopped: He is my great grandchild , iam right vicky with pride tone

Vicky: How u know about him

Dadi: First time I saw him , I found out he is my kiddo child , my grandchild


Manu enter Vicky room with  smiling face and seeing dadi crying face

Manu: Badedade why u kai ( badidadi why u crying)

Dadi pickup Manu in her arm and Manu wiped dadi tears with his little hand

Dadi kiss his hand: Ur yasu was making me cry

Manu angry face: Yasu why mak cre mummaa angel (yasu  why u made cry to my mummaa angel)

Vicky: Iam sry champ, I didn't it once again and never make cry ur mummaa angel

Dadi: Whose said to u iam ur mummaa angel

Manu: Mummaa say me( mummaa said to me)

Dadi: Then what u said ur mummaa

Manu sad face: Mummaa said ur darling and angel for her but iam her angel and darling to my. Mummaa

Dadi kiss his both cheeks : Ha ur angel for everyone and ur mummaa said lied  u

Manu tried down to ground but dadi hold tightly

Manu:leave me with angry face

Vicky smiled and dadi confused

Vicky: My champ angry with u because u said his mummaa is liar

Dadi smiled: Oh little Manu iam sry , u mummaa never lie to anyone.plz forgive me

Manu cupped dadi cheeks: Badedadi dont ask  srye . Mummaa said bade no ask sryee chota( badidadi don't ask sry to me, mummaa said elders not asking sry to younger)but mummaa and yasu asking me sry many time  with naughty smiling face

Dadi kiss Manu forehead: I love u my little manu

Manu innocent face: No But I have already grlfrend  ( girlfriend) but i cannot say i love you too 

Dadi mouth open wided: Whose ur girlfriend with shocked face

Khushi enter Vicky room : Iam his girlfriend

Dadi: Khushi beta ur parents helped my geet so much, thank u beta,thanks for everything

Khushi: Ur thanks remember me that she was not my sister.plz dadi dont say thanks once again

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Vicky pinned Khushi in wall: What did u said ur three months pregnant na with smirked tone

Khushi: Arnav , plzz move if someone saw like that thinking was wrong way

Vicky: No problem and ur my wife and children of my mother, right Khushi gupta with mischievous smile and his hand carrying her cheeks with slowly as temptating way

Khushi: Arnav plz...with slow voice

Manu: Yasu with high pitch voice

Both separated their position and khushi left the place immediately with blushing face.

Vicky: Ha champ , why u shout dear

Manu: Where is papu with angry face

Vicky hit his forehead: Oh I forgot, wait I call ur papa

"

Vicky call maan and maan pick up the call

Vicky: Bhai where r u


Maan: Farmhouse vicky

Vicky: Come to mansion bhai

Maan: I need lonely time vicky

Vicky murmuring: I will be trying to  join his family but he want saint life, plz god help me

Maan: Idid not hear anything

Vicky: When will u come back bhai

Maan: Morning vicky

Vicky: Surely morning u will come back to mansion

Maan: Yes iam coming

Vicky: Dont forgot, bhai

Maan : hmmm Good night Vicky and cut the call

Vicky: Champ ur papa will come tomorrow

Manu:tomorrow with sad face and vicky pickup manu to give piggy back ride to forgot his dad

Hall

Dadi try to feed Manu dinner and Manu escaping everytime and roaming everyplace

Dadi: Manu baby eat little bit dear

Manu nods his head negatively

Vicky: If u not eat then iam not give  my phone

Manu sad face: Yasu u r badoo

Dadi kneel down : Manu baby I will give my phone , u eat something dear

Manu kiss her cheek: Love u darling

Priya:maaji he called darling  like our geet calling u with excited voice

Vicky and dadi emotional look to priya

Ram:  today my rock star sleep with me

Vicky: No papa he sleep with me

Priya:no, vicky u cannot handle child in night time so my little star sleep with my room

Dadi: Everyone stop , iam elders in the house so my decision is final decision

Everyone waiting for dadi decision

Dadi: My little Manu stay with me with little bossy tone

Everyone face fell down and Manu enjoyed his family pampering 

 

...

Manu sleep in dadi room and dadi also slept next to manu

Midnight maan enter mansion and went  straightly to his room and change his dress and slept his master bed

Manu wake up in sleep and searching his mummaa next to him but geet was not here and step down in bed went out room with sleepy face, door already opened 

Manu legs stopped in front of maan room and maan room door also opened


Manu looking big geet photo in his room and it was enough for him and enter his papu room in his sleepy face


Maan room fully geet photo everywhere and above bed placed maaneet big photo frames.

Manu not see maan face and thinking Geet sleeping in bed and his head placed maan chest slept in above maan

Maan sleep disturbed but he not open his eyes and he like that feeling and also thought if he open his eyes that feeling his vanished in air. In sleeping state maan protectively hugs Manu both son and father sleeping very well with other arms.

Morning

The sun rays disturbed maan sleep and maan wake up, hishead raised  seeing beautiful creatures none other our cutie pie

Maan thought: Whose's this sunshine.he so cute  and he look like my jaan and also sleep like my geet


Manu sleep also disturbed in sake of sunrise but he tried to avoid sunrays so his face hide to maan chest more to maan vest

Maan smiled seeing his antics in sleeping state and closed curtain through remote

Manu sleep peacefully in above maan and maan carring his Manu hairs softly but he don't know why he did it everything

Maan starring Manu continuously and Manu wake up in sleep and rubbing his eyes

Maan closed his eyes and Manu seeing his papu in front of him

Manu: Papu with smiling face

Maan selfthought : Papu with closed eyes

Manu kissed face maan fully shout: Mer papu hai with excited voice and maan overwhelmed manu kisses

Vicky searching Manu and enter in maan room and seeing Manu sitting and kissing maan face

Vicky one side happy and other side jealous of maan

Vicky: Champ I searching everywhere and what r ur doing here

Manu: Yasu see papu mere papu hai

Vicky: Ha ur pa before he completed his word

Maan open his eyes : Vicky

Vicky pickup Manu in his arms : Ha bhai when u came back with tensed face

Maan wake up in bed but not liked Manu in Vicky arms and starring manu

Manu also want go with his papu arm but Vicky hold Manu tightly

Manu: Yasu leave me with angry face

Maan: Vicky , baby

Vicky: Bhai he is my friend child and my friend went to out of station so my champ stayed in our mansion for 2 days fastly said

Maan mind accepted what Vicky said but maan heart not accepted that Manu was not for him and his heart said baby is urs only ours

Maan snatched Manu in Vicky arm and hold protectively in his arm

Vicky: Champ come to me

Manu nods his head negatively

Vicky: Bhai give me

Maan nods his head negatively

Vicky murmuring : Both son and father dido and irritating me very well

Maan:Vicky u said anything with little hard voice

Vicky: No bhai nothing , champ come I will bath u

Manu placed head maan chest with sad face

Maan: I bath  him and u go bring his Dress

Manu kissed maan cheeks and show tongue to vicky

Vicky: Champ it is not good  and u change ur team after saw ur papa

Maan: What u said with hard voice

Vicky: Oh I said papu, bhai with stammering voicr

Maan: No u said papa with stern voice

Vicky: Why I said papa and I said only papu

Maan: Why sunshine calling papu to me with doubt face

Vicky: I don't know bhai, why he calling u papu

Manu: I tell u with innocent face

Vicky murmuring: Champ plz don't say  he is ur dad then surely he will kill me through his own hand

Maan: Ha sunshine tell me with eager face

Manu: Ur my papu that only I call papu

Vicky relived: Bhai u not going office today

Maan: No iam not feeling well ( maan want stay with his sunshine)

Vicky smiled: Ok bhai

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After maan fresh up come out bathroom  only vest with towel in his neck

Manu already messed dress table and talc powder, comb everything spread down to ground , and manu combing hair with help of comb

Maan smiled seeing his antics: Sunshine what r u doing

Unfortunately maan hand touch perfume bottle and bottle fell down into pieces

Maan shout: Sunshine

Manu:papu  hearing heavy voice ,he start his crying 

Maan scooped Manu in his arm and nothing sunshine and rubbing his back

Maan twinkled his stomach and Manu laughed  loudly

Vicky: What' s going on, laughing sound hearing on next room

Manu stopped: Yasu lets go

"

Vicky: Ha champ am also ready

Maan: Where r u going.

Manu: Yasu , papu also come with us

Vicky: Champ , bhai not trust god so he not come to pooja room

Vicky: Bhai u not come that place 

Manu look maan with puppy face: Papu

Maan looked his face and kisses his cheeks : Lets go sunshine

...

Three of them enter pooja room and everyone shocked maan enter pooja room and everyone come behind them

Maan and Manu standing in front of idol and Vicky standing in back of them


Dadi murmuring Vicky ears: What magic did my little manu with ur bro , he enter pooja place

Vicky: Sexy wait  and see our champ antics

Manu: Papu , arati

Maan: Sunshine in our house noone name is arati with confused face

Manu hit his forehead and mind voice: Why papu itna buddhu hai.he don't know pooja arati

Maan understood what manu tried to said  him and bring arati plate


Manu stopped: Bell

Maan  hold his left hand to bell and right hand to arati plate.

Manu once again stopped : Papu

Maan: Now what sunshine

Manu: Song

Dadi: Vicky, if maan sing a song  with his hard voice 

Dadi and Vicky giggled and enjoy their cute talk

Manu: Yasu and bade dadi shut up

Both put finger in their lips.

Maan: Sunshine but i don't know arati song

Manu mind voice: What I will do, buddhu papu dont know song , if mummaa here she sing song very well.

Priya: Little star if u give me permission, I will sing bajan song

Manu nods his head with cute face

Priya sing bajan song and maan did arati.

part end 

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