Thank you so much for your lovely comments...i am over whelmed...Here you go with the next part.
Muskaan: Its ok anjali di, I think Mr raizada is right...even i think so.
Arnav: Nobody has asked your opinion and your opinion doesnot matter to me...do as you are told.
He leave banging the plate and leaves to his room.
Anjali chotey i promise i will not say anything and do accordingly please coma back and have your food...please...you cant be empty stomach...chotey chotey...
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Knock Knock
Can I come in.
Arnav: Please leave me alone
Muskaan: Mr Raizada
Arnav: How dare you Muskaan? Just get the hell out of here
Muskaan: No, first you have to listen to me...
Arnav: I can believe it...GET OUT KHUSHI
Muskaan: Glances it arnav...MUSKAAN...its Muskaan.
Arnav: Grabs her on her shoulder...bangs the door with his hand and throw her out of the room. Shuts the door on her face.
Muskaan: All teary...you will never change Arnav ji...still so much anger...so impulsive...and she couldnot hold her tears she runs down to the living area where she bumps into jiya...
Jiya: What happened M.A
Muskaan: Muskaan Aunty...Call me Muskaan Aunty...a weeping.
Jiya: Pa ne danta? (did pa scold you)
Muskaan: Looking at her innocent face no baby he didnot say anything to me.
Jiya: Then why are you crying? Are you missing your mom dad?
Muskaan hugs jiya tightly and cries like a mad person. Oh baby...
Jiya wipes of her tears...wait i will go and talk to you...why will he not let you eat with me? he have to.
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Jiya: Pa this is not right...frowing her eyebrows...
Arnav: Jiya please baby leave your pa alone for sometime...
Jiya: No no no...(like khushi told arnav during holi when he refused to drink bhang)
Arnav: Jiya stop behaving like khushi. I dont tell you anything that doensot mean you can behave the way you want to...
Jiya: Starts pouting her lips...
Arnav: Quickly changes his anger...ok what do you want to tell me...say
Jiya: Why cant M.A eat with us?
Arnav: Jiya thats your Pa's decision
Jiya: But why pa? she is so nice. Why are you so rude to her.
Arnav: Jiya..jiya..jiya we will not talk about this...ok
Jiya: No pa you have to tell me...
Arnav: STOP IT, how can you talk to you pa like this? Oh now i get it this is what you are learing from you Governess?
Jiya: Muskaan Aunty. and i am not learning it from her...i have quite offen saw you talking to bari nani like this...
Arnav: ENOUGH...He shouted at jiya...just go and have your dinner...
Tears roll down...arnav was unable to handle her for the first time...she runs...
Arnav: Jiya Jiya...Jiya runs after her
Jiya goes down and hugs muskaan who was standing...
Jiya: Pa has scolded me...i am not going to go to him...he scolded me...I dont like him when he is grumpy...
Muskaan hugs her back...
Arnav: Jiya come her
Anjali: Leave it chotey...how could you behave like that with such a soul?
Arnav: Di...
Anjali: Please chotey leave her here...she will be fine...
Arnav felt bad...very bad...this is the first time he behaved in such a manner with jiya. he looked at muskaan (its all because of you)
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After few minutes jiya enters the room.
Arnav: Come here baby
Jiya giving him a silent treatment. Arnav new it very well that she is not in a mood to talk to him. He is in a fowl mood and whenever he is in a fowl mood she goes and sits near the pool side (just like her mom) and looks at the water splashing it with her legs.
after few minutes muskaan enters...where is jiya? she didnot have her lunch.
Arnav: Call Di she will feed her...she doesnot eat from anyone when she is grumpy.
Muskaan goes to the poolside. and sits beside jiya just like how she sat...
Muskaan: hmm, so daddy's baby (arnav looks at muskaan) still grumpy?
Jiya: Go away M.A i dont want to talk to anybody.
Muskaan: hmm...Hi jiya...its me...your Twinkle right from the sky came to visit you...
Jiya's expression changed...TWINKLE...
Muskaan: Yes and picks up jiya on her lap...long time since we have spoken...
Jiya: How do you know? Even i forgot...it has been longing...
Muskaan: Hmm. you spoke to me whenever you wanted to...today seeing you upset i came to meet you as you have stopped talking to me.
Jiya hugs muskaan oh twinkle i needed you badly...
Arnav stays calm watching them listening to each and every word...
Jiya smiles...wait...she runs to the room and gets a star and places it on muskaan's forehead exactly where a mangtika is placed.
Jiya: Wow M.A you look beautiful...and smiles
Arnav's heart melted, a sigh of relief that jiya has come out of that mood which he hated himself. he knew it very well that habit she is got from him.
Muskaan: So Princess, i have heard from muskaan that both of you made ice cream today but you didnt have your dinner...did you?
Jiya: No twinkle...jiya ia sad...pa was rude to her...
Muskaan: hmm you should never take out your anger on food she shouted so that arnav could here that too...this way you hurt DM who has given you the luxury of food to eat...there are people who cant eat because they dont have money...
Jiya: Sorry DM for hurting you...
Muskaan: When you were not in the room pa came to me (Arnav frowned his eye brows) and said twinkle my jiya didnot have her food today please make her eat (she meant the stars)
Jiya: Pa went to the stars? But he never liked thoses...he feels those will make the room clumsy...
Muskaan: No jiya how can you pa dont like your best friends?
Jiya: Even you are my best friend, why pa doesnot like you?
Muskaan: He doesnot hate me too...does he and looks at arnav. here you go with you ice cream.
Jiya: M.A. i dont feel like having it...
Muskaan: Ok done...jiya will not have it...but she can have one spoon for pa...right? even he didnot have his food and he must be hungry...if jiya doesnot eat how will her pa's hunger subdude.
Jita looks at arnav...ok only one spoon.
Muskaan feeds her.
Muskaan: Waise ek baat batao you pa is always like this grumpy?
Jiya: Not always but when he is it is difficult to calm him dowm...muskaan moves her nose...ya just like you...a tiny miny smile came on arnav's face to that...
Muskaan: Lets try jiya will you help your M.A to change your pa's grumpy mood? M.A has an idea...
Jiya: Oh really? she was delighted...how tell me...
Muskaan: You have to eat one spoon of ice cream and we will see your pa's face.
JiyA: Frown her eye brows...not a good idea...i will eat ice cream and his anger will go away?
Muskaan: Yes i promise you...i will work...the ice cream will melt his anger.
Jiya: aaa she opens her mouth wide...
Muskaan feeds her: This is for you pa's anger which is always on his nose...(arnav's smile widened)
This one for his frowned eye brows...this one for the redness of the face...this one for his brains...
Jiya looks at arnav whose anger was gone and he was smiling looking at them...
Jiya was delighted to see this...oh M.A it worked...
Muskaan: Go and feed him some...
Arnav: Come her jiya (muskaan's eyes filled with tears) arnav didnt fail to notice that.
Jiya goes and hugs arnav...
Arnav: I am sorry baby...i have hurt you looking at muskaan...
Jiya: M.A come here...
Muskaan went near them...
Jiya: Open your mouth pa
Arnav: Why?
Jiya: Just open pa.
Arnav: Ok aaa
Jiya: M.A feed him the ice cream
Muskaan: Jiya why dont you?
Jiya: No your one is more effective...
Arnav: Not like this...just like you fed jiya...
Muskaan's mouth dropped...she scoped out one spoon
Arnav: Yeh meri naak ke liye? right?
Muskaan was all blushing...arnav grab her hand with the spoon and ate. He scoped out another portion holding her hand and this is for my frown eye brows...this one for the redness of my face...and this one for my brain? muskaan was going totally red now...
Muskaan: Woh Mr. Raizada...
Arnav: Jiya can you get pa a glass of water? Arnav still holdng muskaan's wrist
Jiya: Sure pa
Arnav: looking in her eyes...so you have noticed so much about me Muskaan...
The spoon fell...
Muskaan: Stammered...woh..meye...
Jiya: Pa here you go she got her water bottle. Still you are holding M.A's hand?
Arnav: Its time for bed jiya go and change quickly and releases muskaan's hand.
Muskaan: I think i should leave now.
Arnav: Thanks Muskaan
Muskaan: For what...its my duty...
Arnav: Smiled (no doubt...how can you see your baby starving whole night? as well as me)
Muskaan: Good night
Arnav: Muskaan...she turned...gave the ice cream container...have it...you must be hungry...
Muskaan looked at arnav with loving eyes...she knew that the knows that she didnt have her dinner...she smiled...
Arnav: Good night.
Thats it guys for today...hope you enjoyed it...do leave your comments...and also iwould request for from now onwards to rate my updates out of 5. Please do that. Thank you.
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Jai Shri Ram @SoniRita
+ 32
1 years ago
Aww Muskaan ne kya idea kiya to change ASR mood. Poor Jiya
rkapoor1382 @rkapoor1382
+ 2
12 years ago
awesome the way muskaan changes arnav's mood...n arnav knws tht muskaan too hasnt eaten anything...very sweet... loved it
Ms. Fernandes @PrincessD
+ 2
12 years ago
ah..that was so cuuute. i can rate it a 10/5 dear, all ur writings are superb waiting for ur next update
kriti_atharv @kriti_atharv
+ 2
12 years ago
loved it dear...wil give a 5 n thnx 4da pm dear...
heena_raizada @heena_raizada
12 years ago
it was so cute..i ll give 5 out of 5..update soon..eagerly waiting 2 knw abt muskaan.. is she khushi?
Susmita M @sman2195
12 years ago
5/5Hey, just caught up with, reading all th parts 12&13...u r Awesom...ideas r fantastic..."playing statue" and "twinkle"...the idea of melting both Jiya and Arnavs anger, was overwhelming...she knows, which buttons to push...go Muskan;) the statue bit, took back back to my School years...so sweet. Is Muskan actually Khushi? I know, u won't tell. My guess is Yes...but yet still, I would love to read it till the end. Keep writing...thank u for the pm...sman21952012-04-08 01:13:16
Amrita @Amti4u
+ 2
12 years ago
agian arnav and jiya... Loved it.. I will give it 5/5... Thank you so much for that bonding.. I am loving it a lot... and Muskaan... Hope she is the same KKG...in between the medicines in the last part is making me worried... But, now at this time , I am enjoying a lot.. Hopee to see the next part soon.. Thank you for the PM dear... Amritha
hari93 @hari93
12 years ago
5 out of 5 dear...The update was too gud...Awww... Poor Arnav... he is choo chweet...Awesome update... it was really cute...Plz do continue soon...Can't wait to read the next part...
Zania @zaniax
12 years ago
FABULOUS update ..5/5
thanx for d pm.
MARYAM @barun_lover
+ 2
12 years ago
5/5 ...emotions ka treasure in a part ...awesome update thanx 4 the pm ...