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Hey guys here i am with the 11 part of my FF. Hope you enjoy it.
Friend: Hi, what up? what are you doing?
Muskaan: Well i am in a temple with HIM and Jiya...I mean Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada and his daughter. (Arnav didnt fail to miss their conversation.
Muskaan: I will call you back later. and quickly disconnects the line.
Arnav: Where you talking to your friend?
Muskaan didnt answer.
Jiya: Pa i am getting down to get chunri.
Arnav: Be careful princess
Jiya: Ok pa...M.A are you coming along with me?
Muskaan: Looks at arnav...ya i will come with you.
Arnav: Just take care of her Muskaan.
Muskaan smiles ya sure.
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Jiya: Namastey kaka meri chunri?
Shopkeeper was stunned to see Muskaan. Khushi bitiya?
Jiya: Nahi kaka she is M.A i mean Muskaan Aunty my aunty.
Shopkeeper: But she looks...
Jiya: Just like my mom...but she is M.A.
Arnav joins in...
Shopkepper keeps quite in front of Arnav. who has the balls to open his mouth in front of ASR.
Jiya: Kaka you have given only one chunri. today i need two. one for M.A
Shopkeeper: Here you go and smiles.
Jiya and Muskaan turns to go while arnav pays the shopkeeper.
Shopkeeper: Betay you should never keep your head open when you visit any mandir...take this chunri...
Muskaan: Thanks but...
Arnav: Its ok you can add and return the balance.
Muskaan: But Mr. Raizada...
Arnav: I know you have forgotten your wallet. I will deduct it from your salary.
Jiya hold's Arnav's and Muskaan's hand goes inside.
Jiya: Hey DM, how are you? I am very very happy today...you know why cause pa has entered here with me for the first time.
Arnav was surprised with this behaviour of his...he thought whats wrong with him? How could he? He looked at Muskaan but see her engrossed in her prayer. She was looking beautiful putting the red chunri on her head.
Arnav couldnot stop himself to admire her innocence as usual.
The pandit came to give arti. Jiya was about to take the arti but it was about burn her hand. Both arnav and muskaan quickly gave their hand before her to save her from burning. Arnav's hand touched muskaan's in this process. both of them removed it impulsively.
Jiya not realizing what could have happened her she ends up saying...
Arrey wah DM pa has taken your blessings today...
Arnav: you were about to burn your hand...stupid i just saved your fingers...
Jiya: Chalo yehi sahi...it is all DM's plan you never know it was destined to happen.
Arnav: turns and leaves the temple. Jiya come fast i am getting late for office now.
Arnav was pacing in front of the car waiting for them to join him...he see...
Muskaan coming down the stairs jiya on her lap giggling as usual...Arnav felt happy to see both of them bonding so well. He sees jiya kissing her in every alternate words...
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In the car
Arnav: So baby what did you ask her today?
Jiya: Nothing pa. i didnt have anything to ask today.
Arnav: Muskaan you cannow remove your chunri.
Muskaan: oh ya. just when she was about to open it...
Jiya: wait wait wait...M.A you are just looking like my gudiya (doll). You are beautiful...isnot she pa?
Arnav: Jiya sit straight and wear your selt belts...why i have to remind you all the time? Some habits can never change.
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In the evening while Muskaan was busy with Jiya's homework arnav enters his room.
Jiya: Hi pa...runs to him and hugs him.
Arnav picks her up...jiya you should study on the library...i have told you many times baby...
Jiya: Sorry pa...just today please...
Arnav: Ok i am going to change...how much time will it take?
Muskaan: Maximum 10 mins.
Arnav open's his coat and goes inside the bathroom.
after 5 mins...
Jiya: M.A i am just going to see ice cream which we have made.
Muskaan: Jiya this is the 20th time you are seeing it. Like this your ice cream with not freeze baby. Have patience...
Jiya: M.A please let me go na...pls pls pls.
Muskaan: Ok but come fast.
Jiya: Thank you M.A she goes while shutting the door.
After sometime muskaan could hear that the shower has stopped...she became a little tensed...she could count her heart beat pacing up. she was uneasy...she got up from the floor and went towards the door.
Out of her surprise she found it locked from outside (the tower bolt was loose it got locked when jiya banged the door.)
Muskaan oh shit now what...he will come out any moment...Oh shit...she goes and hides below the bed.
Arnav comes out of the bathroom...muskaan could see his reflections on the mirror. She tightly closed her eyes...her heartbeat was so vigorous that she thought "I hope he doesnot sense me her".
Arnav was bare chested on the towel hanging on his neck...he goes near the dressing table to comb his hair and he gets tripped on muskaan's legs...
Muskaan: Ouch...and she hits her head on the bed...ouch
Arnav: WT...and bends down. What are you doing her?
Muskaan: Woh Woh nothing...
Arnav grabs her hand and pulls her out...
Muskaan: Ouch...Ouch
Arnav: Are you ok? still holding her hand...
Muskaan: Still keeping her eyes shut.
Arnav: What wrong with you? Why are you standing closing your eyes?
Muskaan: Woh...I mean you are not wearing anything...
Arnav: Very funny i am wearing tracks...
Muskaan: No i mean on the top.
Arnav: Oh that means you have already seen and then closed your eyes...
Muskaan: No i mean yes i mean no, i mean i didnt do it purposely...
Arnav: Comes close to her...she still with her eyes close...he whispers then why are you here muskaan?
Muskaan: extremely nervous...playing with her fingers...no i mean i wanted to leave but the door is locked from outside...
Arnav: O really? But i can see the pool side window is still open...
Muskaan: Quickly opens her eyes and sees the french window which was actually opened...she was about to rum...but arnav grabs her hand...
Aranv: You didnt answer me muskaan...why did you wait?
Muskaan was speechless she didnt know what to see...her start was not pacing down...she was breathing short...arnav pulls her near him...muskaan moves back...arnav moves ahead...
Arnav: you didnt answer me muskaan...why did you stay back? pinned her on the wall...still holding her wrist...he brings his face near he eyes looking at the wall he asked again...why muskaan?
Muskaan felt his warm breadth and closed her eyes...
Arnav moved back...he witnessed his effect on muskaan. Muskaan was standing there all surrender to him...like khushi all the time whenever he came so close to her.
Arnav left her hand...he smiled seeing muskaan panting clutching her jeans eyes shut tightly...
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Jiya: M.A whats wrong? Pa did you punish her?
Mukaan opened her eyes to find jiya standing in front of her with the ice cream continer...and arnav sitting on his couch with his laptop...leaving muskaan totally confused.
Thats it for today guys...do let me know your views and likes...dont forget to put your valuable comments which i always look forward.
Appy_Indy2012-04-06 04:26:24
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Jai Shri Ram @SoniRita
+ 32
1 years ago
Wow what an update. Loved it
s s nair @..SSNAIR..
+ 5
12 years ago
Hey thats great...i have made two people happy with my update who were feeling low after today's episode. Thank you for appreciating so much.And yes it was a mistake...lolz even i didnt realise till you pointed it out. thanks...[/QUOTE]
my pleasure dear...nd where is the next part... still waiting... update soon plzzz
rkapoor1382 @rkapoor1382
+ 2
12 years ago
oh god this is getting better n better with each update...loving it..continue soon
aakriti @aakriti120
+ 2
12 years ago
heyaawesome update...loved jiya and muskaans cute relationship..and the way they both protected jiya from getting burnt...who was she talking too...so arnav is torturing her..how long will she be able to resist...will look forward for the next part..continue soon..many thanks for the pm..: ]
Gals @Cute_Gal
+ 2
12 years ago
dat was amazing..i want more arnav-khushi(muskaan) moments..plz plz..continue soon..thanxx for d pm..
bubblycool @bubblycool
12 years ago
wow intersting. continue soon...
thanx 4 d pm.
Ms. Fernandes @PrincessD
+ 2
12 years ago
hey its great. i wish CVs take some ideas from ur FFs its way lot better than the current track update soon, wating. Tx for the PM
kriti_atharv @kriti_atharv
+ 2
12 years ago
totally loved it...thnx 4da pm dear...
khirat_ali @khirat_ali
12 years ago
awesome updates , sorry i didn't comment on last update due to some reason ,and now i have read both the parts together ,i totally loved it ,whether its arnav jiya bonding or arnav muskaan cute scenes u wrote ,and thanx for the pm .plzzz update soon
devia10 @devia10
12 years ago
wow amazing please send PM soon