Author's note: "I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u". If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME. Chapter 17: Moments (Revised) Guys i am sorry about this but i have removed this chapter from the last thread and posting it second time because i wasnt satisfied the way i wrote it. I would like to have Avni for pointing out one of my mistakes about a love making scene ...
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Uzii @Uzii
2 years ago
Can you plz finish this story it’s one of my favorite story
Uzii @Uzii
2 years ago
Hi dear I’m so glad that you started to continue this amazing story plz kindly update the next chapter soon .
Kashaarv07 @Kashaarv07
3 years ago
Just read this entire story in one sitting and absolutely enjoyed it... Have married my bf and could so relate to it.. Waiting for more
zebali @zebali
3 years ago
OMG OMG 😍😍😍😍.Loveland of arshi.Such a amazing stock it was.Congrats on the new thread 👍.Please update soon .Don't hang us.TC
286pearl @286pearl
9 years ago
congrates for new thread...cute kid...
sam88 @sam88
+ 2
9 years ago
Appy pls update.i read the story again but still the end is misssing
seeta naipaul @seeta_naips
+ 2
9 years ago
they are so sweet together
bellarosa @bellarosa
+ 2
9 years ago
i read this story on blogit's amazingdid u stop updating it?hope noplease continue and please pm me
Parii... @Parii..
+ 3
10 years ago
WaitingUpdate soon DiPm me
surrazdan @surrazdan
10 years ago
i read this story in one go...this is awesome... hats off to writer... the story s very different...such pure friendship... their bonding.. their love... everything..