Author's note: "I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u". If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME. Chapter 15: Some Promises and Some Truths She was tossing and turningon the white bed spread. Her petite nude body covered with a thin sheet. Nowonder why their comforter was lying down on the floor. After the hot night andso much hotness around them who would be comfortable sleeping ...
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desipwincess84 @desipwincess84
11 years ago
aww that was such a cute VM...Can't wait for the next chapter though do update soon
pink_kitten @pink_kitten
+ 8
11 years ago
replied to the PM gulabjamun :-p
Koeli @Koeli
+ 12
11 years ago
no no i will be updating it in sometime. already drafted 3 pages. now i am drafting the most crucial part.
pink_kitten @pink_kitten
+ 8
11 years ago
hey gulabjamun i sent u a very very very important PM plzzz chek it yaar
GoGreen @GoGreen
+ 2
11 years ago
Got it...Please take time...dream sweet dreams on arhi today and screw it up nicely tomm...okay.
Koeli @Koeli
+ 12
11 years ago
@sumu this chapter is tough to write yaar. i am literally screwing it up
Appy_Indy2012-09-24 14:33:58
deepa @deeswarna
+ 2
11 years ago
simply wonderful. loved the way arnav is trying to bring a smile on khushi's face:)
Preet @Preet.Kc
+ 5
11 years ago
simply amazing. I love this scenes.
Roshkolovemusic @Roshkolovemusic
11 years ago
Wow ! Their relationship is so special. Thanks for the beautiful update and pm.
Prasanna_dhanu @Prasanna_dhanu
+ 2
11 years ago
Hey Appy,Love you for this song and the VM, perfect!I really loved Arnav trying to bring that smile back on Khushi's face.