Chapter 14: Making Love (Part B) Finally they broke their kissing spelland laughed out load. They have never imagined each other like this. It wasweird at the same time it felt different. Not really so sinful as they thoughtit would be at the back of their mind. Both really enjoyed kissing each otherno matter what kind of relationship they were into. And today they broke thatbarrier. Kahin na Kahin they wanted to break it long back but they always heldthemselves back just at the cost of their pious bond. But today the whole thing got adifferent dimension. They now cannot deny the fact that they have neverexperience such a passionate kiss in their past. May be their ...
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Knsk @Knsk 3 years ago Nice story. Please pm me the part..
kuts @kuts
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11 years ago
wow,what is it that whenever am freely drooling over my favorite fictions,i come across my favorite 3 writers on my favorite fictions!yes,am talkin bout you with RTlicious di.Appy_Indy and Madhu di and you of course are my favorite. . .i completely agree that it was a hot update. .i already read it 4 times fully,and have so much to share,but waiting to type it using laptop,i can't risk typing all on my mobile,coz in between it gets stuck. . .waiting to comment. . .and ya,i too am glad to read a happy mud making session instead of a shy and embarrassing one. .Appy_Indy Di is the best. . .and you and Madhu di too. . u 3 with full heart,i May be late,but i never miss any of your updates. .never,ever. . .keep writing Appy_Indy Di. .love Shraddha. .
kuts @kuts
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11 years ago
uff,Appy_Indy Di,plz don't like my reserved post yar,otherwise when i edit them later,how will i know you have read my comment,tell me.,do i bore you with my long comments?then i will try and keep it short. .
kuts @kuts
+ 7
11 years ago
reserved again,only for my comment. .
Edited..
Sorry sorry sorry for late..
Plz bear me,it will take a while..
Sorry for late comment'
Kya karu,mera dimag he bandh hojata tha'. aur baki k time,I dint have my lappy!!altought I comment using my mobile always,I loved this part,and wanted to give u my every take on it,so with out much bla-baring,here I go'
My comment for Part B'
And they kissed!!! '.
And then he gifted her something'ahem ahem'mera gutter mind mode is on now'.
And when she protested to open the packet and arnav said-
if you open it here khushi, then I will make sure you wear it in front of me
I was blushing and both'
And OMG di,this nighty is really so sexy!!
Am having a big on my face thinkin bout next'.
And when I read that this was the first lingerie he had ever designed that he gifted her I was like wow!!
Khushi is herself such a perfect frame,and uon that his work on her art!!my my'
No doubt that arnav thought that she was look so f***ing gorgeous'
And then he picked her up'.am here,I am getting all hot!!
Phew'
And now it starts'for what all were waiting from when'.
His body touching hers,this thought itself started heating my parts and gave me goose bumps'.
Here,there,her skin was burning,and here,my thinking capacity!!
The kiss was too loving'OMG!!
I could imagine his bites and his tounge on her very well'
And then he moved down'and my head was spinning'I was all time and blushing'.i know many times I would have said that till now'.bt ya, what can I do'aap ne lika he aisa hai!!
And I liked this wild side of her'A WILD CAT'
And then,her fear of not showing herself to him'its so cute of her to be so innocent'I loved it how perfectly and maturely u made him handle the situation di!!
Very well '
His dailogs were making me go'awww again'I just loved this side of Arnav'
Each words were playing a havoc inside me,yet soothing them at the next instance..
And then what she said.. "then suck it damn it"
I
kuts @kuts
+ 7
11 years ago
reserved for my comment
Edited..
Sorry sorry sorry for late..
My comment for Part A'
Phew,finally am able to comment after reading this almost 6th to 7th time'
Plz bear with my late comment'
Kya karu,mera dimag he bandh hojata tha'. aur baki k time,I dint have my lappy!!altought I comment using my mobile always,I loved this part,and wanted to give u my every take on it,so with out much bla-baring,here I go'
It was obvious for her to get scared, her relation was going to change'no matter how much they both would say, but they both knew somewhere inside them,that things are changing'
And WOW,her dress,which her Arnav presented her'she must be looking way 2 hott 4 Arnav to keep her hands off her'I am sweating her,imagining his situation'.
And then started their journey to the hotel!!
I have always read these few lines of their drive from home to the hotel,with utmost patience'with a sweet smile,I continued..
And when they reached the hotel,and he looked at her,not only khushi, I was getting nervous too'but still,the smile covering my lips dint move'
And when he asked why aren't u talking 2 me,I was like'awww..she is taking,she is just nervous yar'
And the way he asked her permit to kiss her,mai toh wahi pe marr gayi di'kash mujhe bhi aisa koi mill jaaye'haay'
but then she questioned him bout him being all lovey dovey,and the very next moment he called her "moti"'.
and then their first "actual passionate kiss"
and then he picked her in his arms!!!so perfect beginning'.wow'
so romantic,so touchy!!
She is dating her best friend.
This very line was so known to me,yet,vey much more came to me while reding it'
Well,I cant see,but definately imagine the look on her face when they both enteredred the presidential suite of the hotel!!
Arnav so much understands her,well, least he realized,loves her too'.
And then,another Awww moment for me when Arnav said-
I know I am not your husband but I am going to be your baby's father
Sonia Sharma @Sony_1234
+ 2
11 years ago
I just started reading this FF and I am loving it. I am just in the first thread. I will comment as soon as i finish few parts
Arati @RTlicious
+ 7
11 years ago
Searing Hot Appy! Wow...m sweating here! lolLoved the update...glad you finally wrote about their night together and I'm so glad that it was pleasurable for both of them and not awkward!Looking forward to the next one!xoxo
ISensedYou @ISensedYou
+ 2
11 years ago
omg they finally do it...am waitin for their mornin reaction,...awsum double update...tanx 4 d pm...continue soon
Badtameeez @Badtameeez
+ 4
11 years ago
FInally they did it; idk about Arnav-Khushi but I have waited long for them to do it Arnav is so cute... like how he fulfills everything she wants I guess its gonna be awkward the morning after lol Great update!! thank you for the PM
anika saha @aks555
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11 years ago
wow..super HOTTT update...update soon the nxt part.n thnx fr d PM BUDDY