Author's note: "I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u". If you have any problem with the story you are free to express your thoughts with me on the thread. but if you have anything else to discus other than the story such as grammar, spelling mistakes, tense problems, structure PLEASE PM ME. Chapter 14: Making Love (Part A) Theywere driving back from the restaurant. Their uneasiness clearly showing ontheir faces. Especially khushi's Wasshe really ready to put their friendship on stake? But why was she thinking ina negetive way anyway? Arnav has told her many ...
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GoGreen @GoGreen
+ 2
11 years ago
So they still not yet started their date...let us know when they start from RM.may be in a week or two.
sidhu285 @sidhu285
+ 8
11 years ago
Loved it...
another nice story..please update soon
asmaali0987 @asmaali0987
11 years ago
Congats on new thread waiting for next update :-)
lovelike @lovelike 11 years ago When will you update? It's been more than 12 hours since you said that a few hours are left :( Please updateee :( I want to read the next part
ash @astridd
11 years ago
Hey u r making us wait to much
kriti_angel1819 @kriti_angel1819
11 years ago
just read all parts!!!!!!!! wow this is truly amazing writing!!!!! eagerly waiting for your updates now!updat soon
Neha @cherieLover
+ 3
11 years ago
Hey Please Update soon yaar!! i am waiting eagerly!
sam88 @sam88
+ 2
11 years ago
appy waiting for u to end these few hrs sam882012-09-13 12:02:21
GoGreen @GoGreen
+ 2
11 years ago
Few hours from past few days.Appy better you won't make it few Weeks now
priyaganesan @priyalovely
+ 2
11 years ago
waiting yaar update soon..not gonna sleep till u update and finish reading...
priyalovely2012-09-13 10:19:02