Part 11
Next day
On dining table, everyone is having their breakfast. Guddan again sees aloo paratha on the table and gets excited. She thinks that Akshat has made the parathas for her. She decides to praise his efforts but soon realizes that she had decided to ignore him last night.
Guddan (in mind)- Yeh Kya karne ja rahi thi main. I have to stick to my words. I have to ignore uncle. And she starts eating the breakfast. The parathas were too yum that she couldn't resist and starts praising it. Yeh paranthe toh bahut mazze ke bane Hain but Akshat doesn't pay any ear to her talks.
Arey uncle hum aapse keh rahe hain- She spoke loudly.
Akshat (ignoring her)- Haan sun liya Maine. Thank you very much aur kuch.
Guddan (in mind)- Yeh uncle ko Kya ho Gaya ,Kal Tak toh hamare peechhe peechhe ghum rahe aaj achanak Hume ignore kyun Kar rahein Hain. Jo cheez Hume karni thi Ulta yeh kyun Kar rahe Hain. Lagta hai maine kuch zyaada hi rude behave Kar diya hai unke saath, that's why he is ignoring me.
Just then Aisha comes there and greets everyone.
Aisha-Hi Akshat. How are you doing?
Akshat- Hi Aisha, what a pleasant surprise and hugs her. Let's have breakfast with her.
Seeing him hugging her, Guddan burns in jealousy.
Guddan (in mind)- Yeh chep phir se aa gayi. Aur yeh uncle bhi koi mauka nahi chhodte iske Gale lagne ka. Par yeh sab dekhkar Hume Bura kyun lag Raha hai. Kyun Hume yeh ladki bardaasht nahi hoti uncle ke saath? Kyun hum chahte Hain ki uncle sirf Hume Gale lagayein? Soon she realizes what she said and bits her tongue. Paagal ho gayi hai tu bilkul paagal, Guddan- Her mind spok.
Just then,Dadi touches Guddan and she comes out of her thoughts.
Dadi- Arey beta kahaan kho gayi,naashta toh theek se Kar.
Aisha- Guddan,kaisi ho tum?? Tabiyat kaisi hai tumahri??
Guddan- Hamari tabiyat ko Kya hona hum toh ek dum first class Hain. Aap batayiye aap subah subah yahaan.
Aisha- Woh Kal Maine aur Akshat ne decide Kiya tha ki hum dono saath mein angad aur revti ki shaadi ki kuch shopping karne jaayeinge. So that's why I am here.
Akshat- Oh I completely forgot it. Thank you so much Aisha yaad rakhne me liye. You are a savior and again hugs her.
That's enough for Guddan. She gets up from the dining table and begins to leave.
Just then Akshat stops her.
Akshat (teasingly)-Arey Guddan, kahaan ja rahi ho?? Naashta toh Kar lo.
Guddan (angry)-Pet bhar Gaya hamara and goes from there.
Everyone gets confused with Guddan's behavior and asks Akshat what's happening??
Akshat tells them everything about his plan. Everyone gets excited except Durga and saru.
Revti- Don't worry jiju,we are with you. Hum sab much bhi karke Dii ki yaadaasht waapis laa Kar raheinge.
In room
Guddan is moving here and there. Feeling worried about Akshat and Aisha's closeness.
Guddan- Himmat toh dekho uss ladki ki. Shaadi hamari behen ki hai aur shopping karne yeh jaayeingi madam woh bhi Jindal Saab ke saath.
Jindal Saab?? Did I just say Jindal Saab instead of uncle. She gets shocked as this name sounds familiar to her. Par humne uncle ko Jindal Saab kyun kahaa?? Yeh word itna Suna Suna sa kyun mehsoos ho Raha hai ? She is in her deep thoughts.
Just then Akshat comes there and sees her moving here and there and smiles.
He clears his throat and Guddan comes out of her thoughts.
Guddan- Aap yahaan,aap yahaan Kya Kar rahe Hain?? Jaayiye na uss Aisha ke saath shopping par. Yahaan Kya lene aaye hain and turns her face towards other direction.
Akshat understands that she is angry with him.And decides to tease her more.
Akshat- Woh actually Aisha apna touch up karne ke liye rest room gayi hai. Ab woh hai hi itni khoobsurat,toh make up karna toh uska right hai na. Waise tumhe Kya pata hoga inn baaton ke baare mein,tum Aisha ki tarah itni beautiful thodi ho. 😜
Guddan gets irritated listening to his words and shouts
Guddan- Bahut khoobsurat Hain na woh toh jaayiye usi ke pass. Yahaan hamare paas kyun khade Hain. Aapki madam aapka wait Kar rahi hogi. Hamara Kya hai, hum toh khoobsurat nahi hai na toh aap hamare saath apna time waste kyun Kar rahe Hain Jindal Saab.
Akshat gets shocked listening his name from her mouth.
Akshat (excited)- Kya kahaa abhi tumne??
Guddan- Humne kaha jaayiye uss Aisha ke pass.
Akshat- Nahi uske baad Kya bola??
Guddan- Apna time kyun waste Kar rahe Hain hamare saath.
Akshat- Nahi,uske baad??
Guddan- Ji.. Jindal Saab.
Akshat- You called me Jindal Saab.
Guddan- Don't know how this name come into my mind. Par inn cheezon se Kya farak padhta hai. Aap chale jaayiye yahaan se. Hume aapse koi baat nahi karni. Just go from here and leave me alone.
Akshat shushes her by keeping his finger on her lip. She becomes silent. Akshat hugs her tightly. Guddan gets stunned with his sudden gesture.
Guddan- What are you doing Mr. Jindal?? Leave me.
But Akshat hugs her more tightly.
Akshat- Relax Guddan relax. Just breath.
Soon her hands reach his back and she reciprocates the hug.
After sometime,they break the hug. While Guddan feels weird but Akshat feels excited with this thought that she remembers his name that she used to call him. He goes from there leaving an embarrassed Guddan behind.
Guddan- Yeh hum Kya Kar rahe the. Humne Mr. Jindal ko hug kyun Kiya? Hum unhe rok kyun nahi paaye. Hey Lord Krishna,yeh Kya ho Raha hai hamare saath. Hum Mr. Jindal ke kyun itna kareeb ja rahe hain. Kyun hum unke baare soch rahe hain.Ab aap hi kuch madad kijiye hamari iss paheli ko suljhane mein.
Part 11 ends
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