Place: pollachi, Coimbatore district in tamilnadu
Ragu paa: janu,very long years back , we came to our place.
Janumaa: we have own house,our blood relation in our village but we stay in hotel with crying voice.
Ragupaa: janu, we come for only lakshmi grandma
Janumaa: but, they are also our family members.
Ragupaa:no janu when my anju died,that time, all my relationship broken on with them,we came only for lakshmi grandma , she only supported with me that time.go change ur dress ,we are going to hospital see her
Ragu paa and janumaa enter the hospital building and ragupaa and janu maa go inside lakshmi grandma room.
Old lady sleep in bed, she wore oxygen mask in nose and more equipments attached to her.
Ragu paa sit next to grandma and cupped her hand with his hand: lakshu iam here and look at me.
Grandma lightly open her eyes and raised her hand carrying ragupaa cheeks.
Janu: grand maa , with crying voice.
Grandma nods her head ,gestured with her hand said don't cry.
Ragupaa: don't talk anything now,u need rest.
At same time some people enter the room, ragu paa look at them, ragupaa tried to go outside.one of the lady stopped him
Lady: ragu beta, u not talk ur own maa, u came ur place after so many years.
Ragu paa: janu, I go to see doctor and ask about grandma health condition and went out the place.
Lady:janaki, u also don't talk with me and iam not good mother, he is one said to me first word maa , he is one give me full form women, he is first baby now my son is not talk to her mother. with tears flowing in her eyes.
Janu: maa, plz don't say like that, he is not angry with u, u know very well, he love anju very much that only he behaved with u.
Maaji:ha my anju with crying vigrously
Janumaa: plz don't cry maa, plz forgot past , I tried many time to him forgot the past, but he was not accept my request.
Maaji cleared her tears: how r u and my grandchild
Janumaa: they are fine maa
Maaji: till now iam not see my grandchild face.
Janumaa: destiny play our life maa and all our fate.
Ragu paa enter the room said janu come outside and left out.
janu: maa, I will come back went out.
Ragu paa sitting in bench and janu maa sit next to him.
Janumaa:suneji, plz talk to maaji, that time she is helpless, she never raise her voice against babuji.
Ragupaa: I know maa never raise voice to ayya( ragu paa father ) but iam not forgive them , all are deserves it.iam not save my anju with his eyes moist.
Old man enter the hospital building,old man and ragupaa looked at each other,ragu paa angry glare to old man, oldman blank express look to ragupaa.
Ragupaa: janu ,I will come after some time, after grandma wake up call me and went out the hospital.
Janu touched old man foot and old man blessed and said: god bless u bahu.
Janu: ayya, how are u.
Babuji/ ragu father: hmm iam fine, but where u stay now.
Janu: oh, we stay in hotel now.
Babaji: hmm, we have big palace in our village but u stayed in hotel.all my fate with worried tone.
Janu: sry ayya, he is not accepted stay in our palace.
Babaji: iam understand bahu, he always right
Janu: I will see grand maa wakeup or not.
Babaji: hmm and settled down in chair.at same time phone rings,babuji saw phone ring, but it 's not his phone and pick up the attend the call.
Babaji: hello
Geet: paa, u not call me till now, u reached safely. How is lakshmi grandma, paa why u not talk to me.
Babuji shocked listen her voice and sit in statue position one word only come out his mouth: maa
Geet: who are u, its not my dad voice with soft voice.
Janu touched his babuji shoulder said: ayya what happened
Babuji: oh bahu phone
Janu look at the phone said: this phone is ur son phone,I think he forgot it, whose in line babuji
Babaji give phone to janu maa said: hello
Geet: maa, where is paa, u people not call us, u reached safely.
Janumaa: ha we reached safely , u, pinky and choti safely arrived, u will take care both of them.
Geet: I will take care my sisters.but whose speak early to me.
Janumaa: I have to go now, I tell u later and cut the call.
Babuji: bahu, she voice same like my maa.
Janumaa: she is ur elder granddaughter.
Babuji: where is she now, iwant to see her.
Janumaa: now she work in delhi and stay with ur other grandchildren.
Babuji: but.. ( ragu paa come hospital)
Ragupaa:janu where is my phone
Janumaa: ji ur phone, ur princess call me now, talk to her
Ragupaa smiled get the phone and went out not even single look to his father.
Janumaa:ayya , maaji called u inside and both are went inside the room.
Place: khurana mansion
Sam enter bua room with angry face and shout bua
Pammi: why are u shouting sam
Sam: u only told go to maan office and close to maan, I went to office,but he insult me,
Pammi: what happened tell me first clearly
Sam narrated office incident and then said: even insult in front of his employees.
Pammi:why he worried about that girl so much.
Sam: iam talking about me but u think about that girl.
Pammi: just shut up, u think only urself but I think about maan feeling to girl, I want know why maan interesting in that girl.i find out quickly.
Sam: u know bua, she is same girl that day partytime maan dance to girl.
Pammi: what, in party time iam not saw her face.dont worry I will clear everything.
Other side mansion , maan study room.
Adi walking one end to other end continuously and maan sit sofa work in laptop and Vicky enter the study room.
Vicky: adi bhai why u walking this time in study room.
Adi glare to Vicky: iam in tension , u teasing me
Vicky: what tension bhai, any important project tension, if any project matter, I will know,but why u walking like in ur wife in delivery ward and ur waiting for child arrival
Maan smiled hears Vicky comment and adi glare to Vicky: maan u also smiled to me.
Maan : what can I do yaar, unknowingly I smiled in his comment.
Adi phone ringed and maan she finally called
Maan said put loudspeaker adi and maan , adi and Vicky settled down nearly in phone.
Adi attend the call: hello
Choti: hello aj, just one ring,u pick my call, r u waiting for my call eagerly right with teasing tone.
Maan and Vicky smiled to adi and adi pout her comment.
Adi: haa saali , iam waiting for ur call but u did not call me.
Choti: I have study holiday for study in busy schedule , iam helping for ur love. U thank me instead of complaint me with fake anger
Adi: sry meri maa, where is pinky with shy voice.
Choti: romeo want to hears Juliet voice, she already hearing ur voice, I already put in speaker mode. Aj u ask about her but my sister blushing hearing ur voice.
Pinky smacked choti shoulder geet said: adi jiju, ur also blushing right with teasing tone.
Maan hears geet voice : my mishty also sit with her self thought
Adi: geet u also teasing me yaar, choti saali ask me question now.
Choti: ok I will ask simple question first, who I am
Adi: ur my saali and pinky and geet sister.
Choti: wrong answer, I give u time, think
Maan gestured to adi and write the answer show to adi
Adi: question
Choti: right , next one I have four finger and one thump but iam not live, who I am.
Maan write answer and show to adi and then adi said: glove
Choti: ok next one I have many tooth but iam not bite.
Maan don't know answer and adi look at Vicky ,Vicky give comb to adi.
Adi said: iam asking u answer but u give me comb.
Vicky slap forehead with his hand and said answer is comb
Choti: aj u cheating me, I ask u question but asked the answer other and give to me.iam not accepted.
Vicky: u helping ur sister and iam helping to my bhai, so adi bhai not cheating.
Choti: aj, whose is this
Adi: my little brother Vicky singh khurana.
Choti: Vicky or monkey.
Adi and maan smiled to Vicky and Vicky eyes wided said: oyie, miss choti or moti u call me monkey , how dare u
Choti: I dare call u ( geet interpet)
Geet: choti, leave it, we help pinky and he is also helping to his bhai
Vicky: I love u GB
Maan angry glare to Vicky now and shout to Vicky,choti voice interpet.
Choti: how dare u said to my angel this word,she started her lecture.vicky help look to maan but maan replies and u deserve look.
Vicky: GB save me from ur sister lectures.
Geet: choti, leave Vicky, he always like that but he is good guy
Choti: he always like mad right.
Vicky: thanks GB for said to me good boy and u miss, don't interfere between me and my GB ok, u got it.
Choti:u, iam not leave u.
Maan shout: both stop now.
Pinky: maan sir with scared tone.
Choti: oh who is he
Maan : ask ur pyaari sister.
Pinky: oh choti, he is our boss with scary tone
Maan: iam maan singh khurana, adi big brother said his name with pride voice.
Geet mind voice: he just maan singh khurana but iam geet maan singh khurana.
Choti: ok , iam rageswari alias choti , iam youngest of my famiy. Everyone love me so much specially my angel love me so much. u don't know whose my angel and my geet di is my angel. Geet kiss choti forehead.
Maan selfthought: choti she is not only ur angel & she is also my angel
Maan: oh ur angel come from any heaven with teasing tone.
Geet eyes opened inselfthought: he teasing me, iam not leave MSK
Choti:oh jiju, she is everything to me, don't tease her, I don't like it and I think ur not same like ur little brother.
Maan: u call me jiju( in heart, maan flying in air, choti calling him jiju)
Choti: ha adi jiju is my jiju and u also adi jiju's brother so jiju brother also jiju right.
Maan and geet unsion selfthought: he/iam is only ur jiju.
Vicky: iam also jiju for u.
Choti: ha vj with smirked tone
Vicky: don't call me Vicky jiju just call Vicky with flirty tone.
Choti: whose calling to u jiju, I told Vicky joker short form vj ( maan and adi laughed to Vicky)
Vicky:bhai u not supported me instead of laughing me.
Adi: guys stop ur fighting,choti u allow pinky with me now.
Choti: but iam not finished my question till now.
Vicky: ur not finished yet.
Maan : not again Vicky, my saaliji start ur question.
Choti: thanks MJ ,next one iam son of water,if I returns to my parent and I will die ,who I am.
Adi: fish
Choti : wrong aj think
Vicky: another big fish
Choti: mj really Vicky is ur brother.he is such a duffer.
Maan: iam also same doubt and ur answer is ice.
Choti: super jiju.
Geet: my turn.
This is something I offer to u,it will help own relationship survive it,it remains true,it begin with L and come at no cost and surely without it our relationship would be lost.what is this
Adi and Vicky: love
Geet: no
Maan: loyalty
Geet: yes, every relationship based on trust, if trust not there is any relation ship, definitely that relation ship will broke, so adi sir u trust my pinky love.
Adi: more than myself
Choti: super jiju, now agree ur dinner date.and mj I want to see u.
Maan: come to office tomorrow and also come with ur book and this is ur study holiday right.u come and study here.with little bit straight voice
Choti: thanks jiju , definetly I will come tomorrow after noon, I want to go see my friend morning.
Maan: ok saaliji, my cabin door is open for u always and pinky
Pinky: yes sir with fear tone
Maan: pinky iam not ur boss now and ur also my saali so call me jiju.
Pinky:yes sir opps sry jiju.
Maan : pinky and choti call me jiju but in my view u both are my sisters to me, u both have full rights and ask anything to me.
Geet felt happy that maan accept her sisters to his sisters.
Pinky and choti: ok jiju
Vicky: maan bhai, if choti and PB( pinky) are ur sisters means GB ( geet) also ur sister with teasing tone.
Maan angry glare to Vicky in mindvoice: how dare he said my mishty is my no no in my dreams also iam not say that word .
Adi also join with Vicky: tell maan, Geet is also ur sister with teasing tone
Geet cursing Vicky and imagine maan angry face.
Maan phone rings and pickup the phone went out.
Adi and Vicky laughed loudly
Choti: why u people laughed madly yaar.
Adi: nothing , tomorrow I pick up pinky for dinner , bye saaliji and pinky.
Choti: bye Aj and Vicky joker and cut the call.
Place: maan room
Maan talk to his maa photos ( its is hobby of maan and no one know about, maan not aloud any person in his room except dadi ) maan narrated every incident to infront of his maa photo.
Maan: ur bahu is very childish girl.today she pranked me that prank my heart beat stopped any time.surely I give her punishment tomorrow.before our marriage and after our marriage she never change. In vallparai ( flash back starts)
Maan and geet talk each other in phone ( guys I clear told maan and geet don't know each other name, till now both not see each other, maan know only sherni @ geet in arohi friend and geet know maan is arjun friend)
Maan wake up sleep in midnight, he not slept so decided to long drive , maan settled down and drive the car, that rain starts , maan look at outside he see wonderful view in his lifetime. One girl dances with some children and her one hand is icecream and other hand dancing to little girl. That girl perfect structures and curves.maan selfthought iam jealous of rain , it touched to her curves, faces and neck that iam not see her face clearly,but I see her alomond eyes, why god created her sparkling eyes.( maan baba u not trusted god but now talk about god creation wow) whose she what are doing in mid night, I want to see her face.maan step down car, move his legs to girl. Other girl dragged that girl said sherni lets go aleady , its late, my parents wake up in sleep and iam finished.
Sherrni: oh yaar , enjoy ur life ,day after tomorrow ur marriage that only bring out for relax mind, till now tension about marriage.
Arohi: meri maa , lets go please and dragged geet , both are left out
Maan stucked that hears sherni and come back real world to lighting sound: that girl is my sherni but iam not see her face.tomorrow surely I will go to see her.
Back to arjun place , maan think about her sherni and slept
Next day morning
Maan work office in his laptop ( this laptop only real enemy of geet) he concentrate his work na, he forgot everything like food, sleep, even his lovely person that only he is no 1 in business world.
Evening time
Maan complete his work and come back to arjun room
Arjun come in tensed face enter the room.
Maan: what happened why u tensed.
Arjun: maan big problem yaar, u know my marriage is love marriage, now my marriage is problem yaar.
Maan: but arohi parents and ur parents also accepted ur love then what problem in ur marriage.
Arjun:oh arohi materal uncle not accepted our love, he want marriage arohi to his son.he is one the problem of my marriage.
Maan: ok we informed police and arrest to him.
Arjun: no this not corrected time.he is don in this village and police also supported him ,already arohi and her parents house arrested.
Maan: kya, now we communicate arohi first.
Arjun : yeah ur right and dialed to arohi numbers , no one pick up the call
At same time arohi enter the arjun room said arjun
Arjun turns back look at arohi and go to hugs tightly.
Arjun: arohi, u here how u escaped to them
Arohi : arjun I informed u to my house arrest after my uncle come & give me marriage dress said today u to marry to my son and went out the place.
Me ,My parents and my friend escaped that place, some uncle goon surrounded us, and catched my hand said u not escape easily.
Bride:u people want me only. Plz leave my parents and friends and then only I come with u otherwise.
Goon: otherwise, u beat me with laughing voice.
Bride take knife in her waist : show to goon : I will kill myself and then my uncle killed u.
Goon: ok don't do anything wrong ok I leave ur parents.
My parents : no iam not go anywhere & my friend also said same
Bride: plz go, nothing happened to me.
Me, My parents and my friends un willingly come to ur place
Maan: arohi, u here,whose in bride dress.
Arohi: sherni
Maan and arjun shout: kya
Arohi:after uncle went out my room ,sherni come my room and get bridal dress wore it and said lets go we need go out this place, if anyone catch us, people think iam bride, so u people escape this place
Arohi: ur life risk, iam not leave my friend life in danger.
Sherni: nothing happened to me, give me ur phone, if goon catched to me, u reached arjun place and call me.
Arohi: but
Sherni: but , net nothing, we have no time. Lets go, already I mixed goon drink in sleeping pills.some of the goon there .
Arohi: arjun plz save my sherni yaar with cried.
Arjun: we need go save sherni first
Maan: no ur not ,I will go see sherni, u , ur parents and ur friends all are left the place immediately this place also not safe for u . u people go to my private flights and my body guards protected u.
Arohi: iam not leaving sherni alone here.
Maan: arohi , ur not child, nothing happened my sherni( unknownly said my sherni) plz go to arjun.
Arjun: maan is right, don't worry maan save our sherni.
Arohi: I trusted ur words and plz save my sherni bhai.
Maan: hmm, lets go arjun
All are left out the place and maan searched sherni with bodyguard and dialed arohi number continuously.
Maan : why she not pick my call.
Geet : hello arohi u safely arrived to arjun jiju place.
Maan relived hears her voice: sherni , ur alright.where are know.
Geet: oh dd, iam alright , iam in dense forest near cottage of arohi
Maan: how would u escaped that goons.
Geet eyes opened wided: kya, u want iam not escape that goon and iam married to stupid guy.
Maan: not like that
Geet: oh no phone disconnected ,there is no tower in that area.
Maan: tower problem and look to one of bodyguard, trace this number now.
Body guard: trace it sir and drive that place.
Geet running to dense forest in bare foot and some of goons chased to her, her bare soft foot affected by rocks stone. She not bothered about her pain.
Other side maan also searched sherni with bodyguards in dense forest.
Maan: u people search that side, I will search opposite side.
Bodyguard: nods his heads and went out that side.
Geet running fastly and really she tired and bumps to broad chest.
Flash ends Maan phone rings and maan come out to flashback
Maan: ha dadi
Dadi: come down and have ur dinner
Maan: yeah dadi iam coming.
Maan sit in his chair ( yeah maan always sit head of family member chair this permission give by our sweet dadi )
Dadi: pammi , tomorrow karwachauth ur dress in my room and after dinner come to my room.
Pammi: why maaji I do to fasting to him, I don't he is alive or not.he run away my life with irriating tone.
Maan hears her words angry boiled but controlled for looking sibling face.
Dadi: shout up pammi, I know my son is alive , I don't where is he , u fasting tomorrow for him that final.
Pammi: sry maaji, in my angry sake only mistakenly told that word
Dadi: don't repeat again.
Pammi: maaji give sam also sargi item and sam also fasting for maan
Sam chocked food thought: iam fasting tomorrow full day, oh no iam not doing fasting.
Maan not interesting in topic and went out to his room , Vicky, swara also went to respective room.
Dadi murmured iam already gave my maan wife (geet) to sargi
Pammi: maaji iam not hear anything
Dadi: nothing pammi, iam going to my room.
Next morning
Vicky sit sofa with dadi , swara , pammi and sam , dadi told pooja arrangement in temple.all are come to early in mansion.
Maan : dadi iam not belive in god.
Pammi: maan beta, u only break sam fasting, she fasting for u with sugarcoated voice
Sam: ha maan iam fasting for u , u only break my fast
Maan irritating look to sam and pammi and same time maan savoiur come none other our chandu.
Chandu: sam madam this is not possible
Sam: why not possible with angry tone
Chandu: sam madam ur already break ur fast.few minutes before I give u tiffin to u in ur room
Sam managed: chandu that breakfast not for me for bhai.iam not drink single drop of water till now.with angry tone.
Chandu: ten minutes before only u drink ur favourite apple juice.
Pammi: chandu, go to kitchen now.
Maan : dadi iam leaving to office and Vicky drop to pari then come to office.
Dadi: but eat ur breakfast and then go
Maan: I will eat in office.
Vicky drop swara and come to parking area of college and bumps to one girl.
Girl: hai mister, ur eyes in back , not see front anything
Vicky starring the girl and she wore simple kutri with jeans and scarf in neck.
Girl wave hand in front of Vicky: ur deaf , not hears anything, I wasting my time talk with u.
Vicky: hey beautiful, iam sry with flirty tone
Girl irriating : hello mister, don't say beautiful
Vicky: u very beautiful then only I call u beautiful.
Girl: u
Vicky: yes iam
Girl tapped Vicky foot in her hills chappal and went out
Vicky: aahaaa iam not leave u.
Place: maan office
Geet wore beautiful saree and hairs open freely ,enter the maan cabin and maan sitting in his chair always work in laptop.maan look at geet and in mind voice: oh madam arrived , why she wore saree and iam saw in her saree, I forgot everything, maan concentrate, yesterday she pranked to u, u give punishment first.but she kill me in this avator.maan ur msk noone defeated to u.
Geet selfthought: I know hubby, why u starring me like that, in sake only I wore saree today with smirked smile.
Maan come out thought saw her smirked face: oh my mishty did it for me only.i am not leave u today darling.
Maan standing in chairs and come near to geet like lion come out of den and hunting deer for hungry
Maan each steps and geet go to backward finally geet back touch the wall and maan chest touched geet chest.geet standing between wall and maan like sandwich
Geet breathing heavely and maan breathe touch geet neck and geet feels something inside the stomach flying and her throat dried ,her legs stucked .her voice not come out in her mouth.maan left hand one fingers travelled to her waist and other hand forefinger carrying to forehead,eyes, nose and then stop her sweet lips , now maan his thump pattern to her lip
Geet already breathing heavely, now his hand carrying her soft body, her heart beat raised,her body burning like fire.his thumbs carrying her lip, geet closed her eyes and forgot everything went to dreamland.
Geet phone rings and open her eyes , scanning whole cabin, maan not there. Geet thinking it is dream and remembers sweet moment blushing
Geet: hello
Maan: miss geet, open ur eyes, anyone see u , thinking u r sleeping in standing position with teasing tone.and ur body so soft yaar with husky voice
Geet mouth open o shape
Maan: plz close ur mouth and not give me open invitation .
Geet immediately close her mouth
Maan: miss geet now only I start ur punishment , I will come back to meeting, give u next punishment with husky tone and cut the call
Geet: dushut danav with blushing face.
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