Hi guys, I have edited this chapter. Hopefully, you are going to enjoy this more than the previous write up. ~Urmila~ I have been raised by a Queen and have been taught every single thing that a princess should do to keep my family happy. Even though I was the daughter of King Janak and Queen Sunaina, preference was always given to my elder sister Sita. Please don't get me wrong I love my sister. And I know that even she loves me back. But, for instance, she got to choose her groom, but I wasn't. My parents came to me and announced that they have already chosen a man for me and that I was supposed to get married on the same day as my sister. Just like an obedient daughter, I agreed ...
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aarushh @aarushh
3 years ago
Wow.... super interesting yaar...Soo unique and special... loved it yaar... can't wait for the next update
cuteanamika @cuteanamika 3 years ago Something new and unique.. Gripping story
Sundari @Param-Sundari
+ 13
5 years ago
It's very gripping. The end was unexpected so I am waiting for next part eagerly.I had another thought in mind, but the end overpowered it, I will wait to see if that materialises.
sahira kabir @eufara_naghm
+ 3
5 years ago
I feel bad for UrmilaBechari!! Sabne milkar keema bana dala uska Hope you'll continue soon varna dard k mare mera heart attack ho jana hay
ltelidevara @ltelidevara
+ 8
5 years ago
Flawless...Excellent start to an emotional journey that we are going to embark due to your creative skills.
Koeli @Koeli
+ 12
5 years ago
Finally, I have edited chapter one. I hope you guys will re-read and post your honest opinion.
Madhuri @Viswasruti
+ 15
5 years ago
Excellent narrative with full of emotional feelings. Her concern for her sister Sita and for her sufferings, her fear, and distress when she heard about her husband's war with Meghnaad, just saw it in front of my eyes. Till date, no one touched this story of the 'sleeping duty' of Urmila, so you have a vast canvas in front of you and I am sure you will paint a Princess' agonizing wait for her mate and her surprise for his silence --it is so gripping. Waiting to read the next part.
Viswasruti2019-01-11 22:11:56
sahira kabir @eufara_naghm
+ 3
5 years ago
Hmmm I don't know the real story but I'm really liking it di! Now I find these two better that Ram-Sita jodi
Janaki @RamKiSeeta
+ 6
5 years ago
This is a beautiful fic, can't wait to read more!
Shirisha @ExoticDisaster
+ 13
5 years ago
Its so gripping!! Waiting for it :)