PART 1

5 years ago

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A dark room a man standing in front big photo placed in wall .his hand carrying that photo and his moist eyes starring in that photo.

Man: 2 years completed where u jaan.please come back to me.i know everything that was my sin.please forgive ur love.in this years iam living like dead body without u.ur my soul ,ur my jaan,ur my life , ur my everything to me.iam nothing without u .ur the one give me everything.please come back to ur love.

Maan voice come from door entrance

Maan wipes his tears and ha maa come inside

Priya maa: Maan how many days u hurt urself beta

Maan: I only did sin to her .i need punishment maa.but I know this pain only for physical one but I gave her mental torture

Priya maa: U beat ur body with belt in ur own hand.u think this is ur punishment with worried tone

Maan: I am not thing this is my punishment but I have got little bit satisfaction only.

Priya maa carries his cheeks: Beta dont hurt urself.iam not tolerate see ur pain

Haa priya bahu u cannot tolerate his pain but he only gave everyone to pain

Priya maa: Maaji please he already hurt

Maan: Maa dont stop dadi

Dadi: maan Why u thinking that stupid girl and forgot my child and go to marry anyone and enjoy ur life with angry tone

Maan:dadi how could I marry to other girl,how could I forgot her, she is my jaan

Dadi: Oh u ur jaan with taunting tone.now u said she is ur jaan that time u only hurt her ur word not word ur knife.ur knife stabbed in her little heart

Priya maa: Please maaji I know he did wrong with her.he already deep pain thought about her and live in guilty

Dadi: No priya he is not live in guilty and iam one live in guilty,iam one tie up my angel  to this beast.i wish she will not back to u other than she will die

Maan kneel down hug dadi waist:plz dont said that word in ur mouth. Iam sry dadi plz forgive me from my sin dadi.i love her so much.i know she is  angel of my life that time i am not recognized her with crying vigrously.

Priya maa cried ,saw maan broken state and dadi told maan that her word full of anger not to hurt her grandson .Dadi also crying and saw maan state.

Dadi: Maan beta , Stand up

Maan standing and dadi help to sit on his bed.

Dadi cupped his face: Maan , when she will forgive u and that day I will forgive u.I want my child back to me.u bring her back our life.

Maan: I will bring back my angel and I will bring back ur smile dadi.

Dadi: Priya bahu go bring haldi paste and apply maan wound

priya nods her head and went out

Maan place his head to dadi lap: Dadi I search everywhere but she play hide and seek with me

Dadi: Hmm.she will come back because she not away from u.she love u so much. Her pure love not allow stay away from long.she come back

Maan: I will find her dadi..i will

Dadi: Sleep maan today Annie also coming

Maan:Arjun not coming with Annie.i know he also angry with me

Dadi: Ha Arjun thought she is own sister that only he not come in our house in this 2 years but he allowed Annie to see us.annie come evening u need rest, sleep maan

Otherside

A girl touched photo frame with tears eyes.why my fate play with me.2 years   back when the place snatched my happiness and break my hope of love.now i arrived in same place today.ur one broke my heart.ur one snatched my smile and everything.i never see ur face but ..

 

Behanji voice come from outside and girl went to outside

Girl: ha bhaiya, u put down everything in that place

Man: ha behanji, I carefully placed every items and arranged in correctly

Girl: bhaiya, ur money.

Man: no behanji, already yash sir give me money. U informed sir that I finished work.

Girl: tika bhaiya ,I will inform yash and u can go now.

A woman come inside

Girl: ji app

Woman: oh namasteji, iam sasha Sharma iam ur neighbor.

Girl: namateji, iam GS

sasha: gs

Girl: every collegue call me GS only iam Geet M singh

sasha: geet, if you need help u arranged things

geet: thank u ask me but already  arranged.

Sasha: u done it alone.

Geet: no sasha , yash arranged men to help me.now only finished every work.

Sasha mind voice yash is her husband.

Geet: plz sit in sofa , I make coffee for u

Sasha: no thanks yaar and where is ur husband.

Geet: oh he is business trip.whenever time he come to see us with hesitate voice

Sasha: ur stay in alone

Geet: no iam in ( a baby crying voice come from outside)

Sasha and geet went out see outside. Both are look one little girl crying because one little bubbly boy pull her hairs forcefully.Boy so chubby , attractive baby and smirked face

Geet: manu


Boy look at geet: mumma but not leave his hand to her hairs


Geet remove his hand and pick up little girl: bacha don't cry ,I will scold him.

Boy face fell down and pout in mind voice: my mumma why pick up that girl she only touch my jack ( his favourite toy) that only I pull her hairs but my mumma told her, she scold me.

Sasha pick up little girl into geet arms: meetu don't cry my baby.

Geet: she is ur child.sry for manu did with her

Sasha: its ok geet both are kid and I will come later. and sasha left with meeti

Manu went inside with angry face and geet come inside and saw her angel sit in sofa in angry face.

Geet kneel down in front of him: manu, sweet heart see mumma

Manu not shows his face to geet : oh se on toch me jack( she is one touch my jack)

Geet: oh now understood : baby touch ur jack insake only  my baby pull her hairs

Manu nods his head

Geet:  manu is good boy na but bad manners pull her hairs because she is pain that only she cried with slow voice if u say sry to her other than  iam not talk with u with fake anger and turn her face

Manu look at geet : Little hand carries her cheeks and mumma sryee sryee tak me ( mumma sry sry talk to me)

Manu: sry mumma with babish tone

Geet: don't ask me and ask that girl

Manu nods his head

Geet: Manu baby is good baby and tickles his stomach

Manu laughed loudly in sake of tickling.

Manu stop laughing: Mumma iam hungree

Geet  touch his stomach: my baby hungry,I get ur junior horlicks

Manu face bright and jump in sofa: hi junio horijs

Geet come with his favourite choco junior horlicks:give to him and finished soon, baby u want to talk ur yasu

Manu finished : mumma yasu give her phone to geet with bright face

Geet: u want talk to yash and ok  I call him  baby

Geet called yash and yash also picked up one ring

Yash: gs how r u yaar.i miss u and champ so much

Geet: we r fine yash. When will u come back to delhi

Yash: tomorrow I will come back to my champ

Geet: he also miss u so much, u only give me phone call to u

Yash: I miss my champ so much plz put down loud speaker I want hear my champ voice

Geet put loudspeaker

Yash: hello how r u my champ

Manu  turns his face hears yasu voice with babish angry face and geet smiled for manu gestured

Yash: gs champ is near he not talk to me

Manu : I kat kat wit u( iam katti katti with u)

Yash: oh my champ angry with me but I did not nothing

Manu: u not comb see m( u not come to see me)

Yash: iam such idiot yes I did big mistake ,iam sry champ sry sryyy..

Manu giggled yasu asking sry to him

Geet: manu forgive him baby, he is ur favourite yasu right

Manu nods his head negatively

Yasu: GS don't interface between me and my champ.i only deal with him

Geet: I try to help u but u said don't interface between both of u, manu baby u angry right don't talk with him.

Yash: meri maa sry he already angry, don't put oil in fire. Hey my champ angry with me oh now what  I do know

Manu interested his yasu voice and geet laughing hearing both conversation

Yash: I already bought chocolate and his favourite jack powerrangers toys but he angry with me .i will give this toys to anyone

Manu: no no yasu I wnt toys( I want toys)

Yash: but u angry with me

Manu: ian nt angt wit u( iam not angry with u)

Yash: that is my champ. Tomorrow I will come to see u.

Manu kisses over phone : mumah yasu

Yash: I love u baby.imiss u

Manu hand open wide to gesture him: me to miss u

Yash: bye champ and gs

Manu face fell down said: bye with sad voice

Yash: don't sad baby I will come tomorrow and we will go to park

Manu: bye and yash cut the call


Khurana mansion


Annie come with little baby  enter the khurana mansion

Priyamaa: annie I long to see u,how is arjun and ur sasural

Annie : all r fine

maiyra: nani u not ask me

Priya maa: oh my baby I cann't forgot my darling

Ram , dadi and maan also coming downstairs

Annie hugs ram paa and how r u paa I miss u so much

Rampaa: I miss u beta and pick up little baby I miss u too.

Dadi carries her cheeks and come sit in sofa and everyone talk with with her but maan silent hears everyone talk

maiyra come with maan: mamu why u not come to my house, nani, nanaji, badi dadi and choti mamu also come

Maan pick up little baby and sit in his lap: my fate baby and u come outing today with me

maiyra with smiled face: oh mamu I am coming but mom

Annie: not today baby and u go with ur mamu  tomorrow.

Maan: ok baby, we will go tomorrow and Vicky also coming tomorrow.

Geet house

Geet hand in her forehead: manu what did our house I leave only ten minutes

Geet  scanned whole house everything messed up and toys spreadout all the place, wall fully manu drawing only in his height  with his crayons.

Geet: manu where r u.i know when will u hide.

Geet look down under table and look him ,her angry vanished see his state ,sit down calmly eat his butter.

Geet laughing saw his face: he look like birth of butter baby.his face full of butter, hands and dress messed with butter. He look like baby Krishna with butter pot.geet drag him to outside

Geet  tapped his bums playfully: my naughty baby and u need clean first.

Geet cleaned and wore fresh , hygience clothes

Manu played so much today and baby want to sleep now.

Geet  placed manu in her bed and settled next to him

Manu turns face to geet face and cupped geet cheeks: mumma sogs

Geet: oh my baby want song and ok song to u pinch his nose.

 A melodies voice

Aaraaro Aariraaro Ambulikku Naer Ivaro

Aaraaro Aariraaro ur my moonshine

Moochuppattaa Noagumunnu Moochadakki Muthamittaen

Breath also hurt so I hold my breathe and then only kiss
Nizhalupattaa Noagumunnu Nilavadanga Muthaamittaen

My shadow also hurt so when moon settled down and then only kiss

Aasa Agal Vilakkae Asaiyaamal Thoongu Kanne..

My dear sunshine Don't stress u urself sleep my dear

Aaraaro Aariraro.. Aariro Aariraro..
Aaraaro Aariraro.. Aariro Aariraro

( I know, I wrote in wrong lines in English I change into  my suitable lines)

Manu baby slept and geet place near pillow for his safety and went to cleaned everything and again settled down near her manu.

Geet hugs manu tightly: my baby u never go away from ur mummaa na

First ur nana and nani went away from me and then my love went away from me. Now I live  only for u  my baby.and kisses his forehead.manu smiled in his sleep state.


Part end

Precap: Yash entry and bad guys also entry and geet entry in KC.

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