[QUOTE=kritika_24]hi!
well dis is probably d first tym m commenting on ur ff...
i dont rmmbr if i jst read sum of the parts here nd der...but honestly d part on page 59 is the first one dat i red 2day...like red widout any disturbance n ol...nd dear lemme tell u...dis is one of the best fictions i've ever come across!! i sooo luvvd it!!!!!! thought b4 reading i thought i wudnt understand it completely as i dont knw d backdrop of ur story but i dint need to understand anything!!! it ws all so so sooo clear!! armaan and shilpa's relationship is explained in d best way whatsoever!! nd also riddhima and shilpa's for dat matter!!
i dont really like to read songs in ff as i find dem difficult to imagine d way dey r written...but girl dis one ws an exception!!!
the characters...d dialouges...armaa's pouts especially were so so so adorable!!!
"Isse apna engagement kangan samjhna Shona' Ajj ke baad tum sirf meri ho' only mine' " Armaan whispered.
"Armaan'!!!" she slapped him on the shoulder.
"What?"
"Well ask! Don't you have to ask me something?"
"Hmm' I already know the answer! What's the point?" he ribbed.
"Huh! Arrogance Armaan!! Agar main nahi kahu toh?" Shilpa asked outraged and blissfully happy at the same time.
An intense expression came over his face. "Tum haan karo yah na' Ghar se uthakar, doli mein bithakar le jaunga apni dulhaniya!!!"
Shilpa lowered her eyes, then looking up at him shyly "Itna pyaar karte ho mujhse?"
i jst luvvvd d whole mix of emotions and dialouges here...d way such an emotional moment where he's giving her "the" bangle is turned into a naughty one with dat smack and back 2 d hard core romantic one...i totally luvvd it ol yaar!!!!
ok...ab formally to bohot bol diya...seedhi seedhi baat yeh h k bhai now m gonna drop in here evrytym i login and pester u for updates...pr usse pehle m gonna read ol d othr parts tooo!!!!
oh by d way...dis sum1 ever told u dat one's writing reflects one"s character? i am so sure dat u wud b as sweet as ur ff!!
wid lots and lots and lotsss of luv!!
kritika
p.s-plz reply 2 d comment!!
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Hi Kritika..
So glad that you enjoyed the part! and i hope the entire ff does justice to your review too :)
First things first, Thank you so much sweetie for the wonderful comments! I thrive on such comments and you have made my day :)
I already am looking forward to completing the next part and eager for your comments again! Call me greedy if you like 😉. LOL
I do have a couple of ARSH moments planned for all us Kash fans! Hope you like them too :) And it was 'sweet' of you to call me 'sweet'... Apparently both of us are one of a kind! 😳
Look out for some more action and romance soon :)
Lots of luv and luck,
Vanshika
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