Chapter 1

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RIA

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Heyaa people
I'm Ria. This is my first work ever.
I tried my level best to make sense if I don't then forgive me
But do give your honest views.




Ms.Smitha Kapoor called out the receptionist drawing the attention of a girl
keeping an end to her wait.
Smitha excitedly followed a man clad in formal black nd black suit as if he would lead her to a paradise. The other girls waiting in the lobby had butterflies in their stomachs as they knew they were just few feet away from their dreams.
Amidst all the excitement was a girl deeply engrossed in her thoughts.

Oh! Please now don't b a 80's model... I don't wanna take the blame...
Where is the old you?... Ms.Kriya Ghai*pause*Ms.Kriya Ghai
her chain of thoughts are broken by the receptionist who called her name indicating it is her turn to follow the black suit man. Unlike the other girls she seemed to be least interested all her thoughts went back to her conversation
with HIM last night. Taking a deep breath to keep her mind away from all these thoughts she followed the man in black suit. He led her to the directors chamber where
few men were waiting for her. As soon as she entered they greeted her with a warm smile
she recognized one of them to be the casting director who was bugging her since few weeks.
She greeted them and adjusted herself on the chair.

"So you are Ms.KriyaGhai?" asked the man clad in a formal suit which seemed to be more like a uniform she replied him with a simple nod.
" Well I'm Abhimanyu ,the director of this film"
said the man with a pride clearly visible on his face. He waited for her to show some amusement,excitement or at the least happiness on her face. But alas she remained there with
an expression less face too engrossed in her own thoughts to observe the restlessness of the director.
Getting no response from her the director continued introducing her to his crew. She acknowledged everyone with a simple nod. Seeing her lost, the casting director
suggested her to take some snacks and clear her mind of all the thoughts and they can continue with the script discussion after that. She agreed as she very well knew
she needed some time to leave her thoughts behind.
She took her snacks and again her thoughts went back to last night. Shaking her head vigorously as if it would erase her memory she started her conversation with universiji complaining about the sudden changes in her
life and again the thoughts went back to her conversation with HIM.
Slapping herself mentally she made a note not to think about HIM till the end of the meeting. She stepped out
to the room where the crew has been waiting for her since past 15 minutes. She greeted every one this time in her usual way giving a few compliments to the director which
pleased him a lot. After a twenty minute conversation the director started to narrate the story.

Director(Abhimanyu): This story as I said is about a girl who aspires to be a dancer. She resides in a small town which is devoid of any dance institutes. But she somehow
finds a way to learn dance. Finally she decides to leave for MUMBAI-THE SAPNOKI NAGRI to fulfill her dream of being a dancer...


KRIYA YOU ALWAYS WANTED TO BE A DANCER...KRIYA THEN...
she stopped her brain from going back to past and tried to concentrate but she found it difficult to understand as the director proceeded
a lot in his story nevertheless she tried to listen to him carefully hoping she could understan

Abhi: She forgets her dream and starts signing for adds, films, what not!!!!!!
She completely forgets the dance which made her a star and she forgets her dream of being THE BEST DANCER and forgets her aim of making dance popular in our country.
The director said with such an intensity that it hit the right cord though he didn't intend to.
Kriya made herself straight and with keen interest
of a gold medalist listened to the man who seemed to be of late 40's hoping for a happy ending and a solution for her problem too. By now she could make out the
story that she missed due to her never-ending thoughts and could also completely relate to it.
Abhi smiled seeing her excitement and continued
"Then...

"She then tried to decide her priorities and she finally ended up making INDIA the best place for dance and dancers."
Completed the director waiting for her response within seconds Kriya stood up excitedly and gave him a bone crashing hug mumbling many thank-yous and dashed out of the cabin before any one could register whats happening.
She entered the cab and again went back to her past this time not with confusion and fear but happiness, excitement,clarity.

*DANCE=MUMBAI=DANCE*... *KYA DANCE BANJAYE MERI PEHCHAAN*...* WEAKLINGS! SIR MERI TEAM KA NAAM HAI WEAKLINS*...*MAA MEIN EK DANCER BANNA CHAHTHI HUN*...*TUMSE BETTER DANCE PARTNER MERELIYE KOI HOYI NAHI SAKTI*...
*THE WINNER OF THIS DANCE COMPETETION IS KRIYA GHAI*...*KRIYA GHAI BEST STUDENT OS NEW YORK DANCE ACADEMY*...

*KYA DANCE BANJAYE MERI PEHCHAN*

REY: Kriya gussa nahi karoon toh kya karoon tum itni achi chance kaise chod sakti ho?
KRIYA: Rey aap bhi jaante ho aur main bhi mere liye iss dance-academy ka sapna important hai aap ka sapna hamare doston ka spana iss keliye main kuch bhi chod sakti hun.
R: Enough kriya!!!!!!!!!! Bohut hogaya ab apka sapna doston ka sapna for god's sake kriya. Don't be the 80's model. For once think about your dreams, your ambitions and be yourself.
K: Rey why r u shouting at me? Yeh mein aapki khushi keliye kar rahi hun aur aap mujhpe chilla rahe ho?
R: Oh! Really Kriya tume sachem lagta hai ki tumhare yeh sab karne se mein kush hogaunga? Toh let me tell you nahi main kush nahi ho sakta yeh jaankar ki tumne apni puri jindagi mere liye barbaad kiya hai tumne London Dance Institute mein admission mere vajahse chod diya NYDA mere vajahse chod diya and ab itni badi film mein kaam karne ki offer mere vajahse chod rahi ho yeh jaan kar mein kabhi kush nahi hosakta.
Forget about my happiness tumhe andaja bhi hai ki log mer bare mein kya sochenge jab unhe pata chalega ki tumne mere vajhese yeh sab loose kiya hai. They'll blame me kriya
and I can't take the blame. I don't wanna take the blame. Kriya for once think about the old you jab tum pehli baar Mumbai ayi ho tab tum dance ko tumhari pehcaan banana chahti thi kitni ambitious thi tum. Kriya ghai joh apni ambition
keliye apne mom se jhoot bolti thi, DAZZLERS se panga leti thi, puri duniya seladthi thi sirf aur sirf apne dance keliye. Then why are you doing this now? Where is the old you?

*Tring*Tring*
Haan swayam bol. Acha teekh hai.
Bye. Gud n8.
To kriya: Auditions kal subha hai I want you to decide as early as possible. Remember main blame lene keliya tayyar nahi hoon. I want the old you back. I want my kriya back.

Saying this he stormed out of her place not even waiting for her reply. He very well Knew he would melt if she starts speaking and he really didn't want that. After taking
to the casting director even he felt himself responsible for all this and he wanted her to fulfill her dreams. He didn't want to be an obstacle for her. So he chose the same way
which she opted two years back tried to be as harsh as he could. He stepped into his house thinking he was successful in his mission but little did he know that she could easily understand the reason for his this behavior.

Back in her house she thought for a lots of time about the conversation that the just had still she couldn't find a proper reason to convince rey or even herself. Just then clock stroke 12 indicating it's time for her to sleep. She pushed her thoughts aside and decided to attend the meeting with the cast director thinking she would find out the reason for her decisions by that time.

The cab break brought her out of her trance she quickly placed some bills in the drivers hand and ran to the auditorium where auditions were to be conducted.
She entered the auditorium and found him on the stage with mike in one hand and some papers in another hand. She directly ran into his arms not giving a damn to the
surroundings

KRIYA: REY... I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH

The entire gang, students who came for auditions were enjoying this sight While Rey was not able to understand a thing he pulled back and started to speak
only to be cut by her
KRIYA: I know I know ab aap yahi soch rahe honge ki mujhe ab
director ke saath neeting hai toh main yaha kya kar rahi hoon etc etc. but lemme tell you Mr.Reyaansh Singhania ki main tumhare liye yaa kisi aur keliye ye nahi kar rahi hoon.
I'm doing it because this is what I wanted to do. Ye hai meri ambition main jab Mumbai pehli baar aayi thi toh main yahi ambition leke aayi thi ki main India mein dance ko popular
karungi naki London mein or New York mein and rahi baat film ki toh mein dancer banna chahthi hu The Best Dancer not an actor or model. So mein yeh sab mere liye kar rahi hun
haan yeh baat alag hai ki meri sapna aur tum sab logonki sapna ek hai par iska yeh matlab nahi ki yeh mera sapna nahi hai. Rey aap aur baaki sab mujhe bas ek excuse the maasi ko
NYDA valon ko sab ko dhikane keliye ki mein inke liye kar rahi hun taaki vo log mer baat Jaldi maan jaye par sach toh yeh hai ki meri bhi sapna hai yeh sapna mere bachpan se
dekha hai aur use pura karne keliye hi mein Dehradun se Mumbai aayi thi. Aur mein isse pura karungi. Aap ko iss ke liye koi blame nahi kar sakta coz yeh meri decision hai.
Saying this she stepped back leaving a happy but confused Rey before he could make out her move she is on her knees with a red rose asking
" SO MR. REY SINGHANIA kya tum mujhe mere sapna pura karna mein India mein dance ko alag level pe lejanemein meri madath karoge kya mujhe Tumhare dance academy ki part hone doge? Will you dance with me forever rey?"

By the end of this his happiness knew no bounds he made her stand on her feet and hugged her shouting I LOVE YOU BAATCUTTER FINALLY MY KRIYA IS BACK!!

The d3 gang and all the students hooted for them while they were busy in each others arms

The end.

Hope you all like it feel free to give suggestions
Love,
Ria.
trueArShaian2014-07-14 05:52:25

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