Mubarak ho beti hui hai.
Jeevika hurriedly ran towards the nurse and just touched her baby sister's baby. And then burst into tears of joy.
Jeevika: Viren ji dekhiye na meri mannu ki beti hui hai. Meri maanu ki beti. Main maasi, maasi ban gai main.
Viren also came and hugged Jeevika with one hand and touched baby with the other hand.
Viren: Haan Jeevika. Maanvi ki beti. Dekh na Viraat teri beti.
He had also some tears in his eyes seeing the little baby.
Chachi and Beeji also looked at her closely but Viraat was only staring at her from distance.
Viren came to him and nudged him.
Viren: Viraat, Viraat teri aur Maanvi ke pyaar ki nishani tumhari beti samne hai. Usse good main nahi pakro ge. Tu ab baap ban gaya hai.
He hugged him tightly.
Viraat: Main baap. Bhai main baap ban gaya.
Viren: Haan Viraat tu baap ban gaya. Ab ja aur apni beti ko dekh, usse mehsoos kar.
Viraat moved slowly step by step towards the nurse carrying his bundle of happiness. Looking at her, he can tell she is Maanvi's daughter as she looked just like Maanvi. Same big eyes, same red nose, same facial features. As soon as he touched her, a small smile crept on her face making her a true angel. Then she started spreading her hands and legs like she was showing her excitement. She looked so cute.
The nurse forwarded her to him but he stopped her.
Viraat: Kehne ko yeh meri aur maanvi ki beti hai per hamare se zyada hak is pe bhabhi ka hoga. Toh main chahta hu sab se pehle bhabhi aap hi isse pakre aur pyaar kare phir koi aur.
Jeevika: Viraat main kaise...
Viraat: Bhabhi agar Maanvi yahan hoti toh apne se pehle aapko pakrati.
Jeevika forwarded her hands and there she had an angel in her hands. She was so small and so soft. Unlike other babies she did not cry, she grabbed jeevika's hair lightly.
All were so engrossed in her, that they forgot to ask about Maanvi. Viraat realized this.
Viraat: Nurse Maanvi mera matlab bache ki maa kaisi hai ab.
Nurse: Operation to bahut successfully hogaya. Unho ne coma main rehne ke bawajood bahut respond kia per
Beeji: Per kya. Meri poti thek toh hai na.
Nurse: Per ab unki heart beat drop horahi hai. Aur agar zyada drop hogai toh unka bachna mushkil hajai ga.Viraat thought of something.
Flashback
Maanvi yaar kitna time lagao gi. Party pe jana hai ya nahi.
He stormed inside their room when she was trying to tie her dori. Seeing him she turned back.
Viraat kitni baar kaha hai knock karke aaya karo.
Main kyun knock karo mera room hai.
He moved towards her and she moved a little back.
Aur mere room main meri hi patni hai. Toh knock karke chance kyun miss karo.
He moved forward while she moved back more and hit the wall.
Viraat
Maanvi
Viraat party ke liye late horaha hai
Thora late chale ga.
As soon as he placed his hand on her waist, she closed her eyes. He turned her back.
He knew she still had her eyes closed capturing the moment forever.
To make her restless, he traced random patterns on her back making her shiver.
Viraat
He came more closer and whispered huskily.
Maanvi
His breaths on her neck were making her weak on knees.
He smartly tied up her dress dori and made her turn again. Now facing her. He again came near her face and whispered.
Maanvi, dori band hogai hai tum ankhein khol sakti ho.
She immediately opened her eyes and felt that her dori was actually tied up.
Waise ek baat toh mujhe pata chal gai.
Kya
Yahi keh mere kareeb aane se tumhari dil ki dharkane bhar jati hai. Abhi agar check kia jai toh am sure 100+ heart beat hogi. Meri awaz hi kaafi hai tumhare liye. Sahih kahan na.
She blushed hard and hid her face in his chest hugging him.
I love you Viraat
I love you more.
Nurse: Mujhe abhi bachi ko dijiye, isse nursery main leke jana hai.
Jeevika gave her to the nurse who took her.
Viraat: Mujhe pata hai Maanvi ko kaise thek karna hai. Bhai aap kaho na mujhe andar jane de.
Viren: Tujhe abhi permission nahi hai, doctor batai ge tab chale jana.
Viraat: Nahi bhai. I know keh Maanvi ko wapis kaise lana hai jiske liye mujhe uske pass jana hai. Aap ek baarbaat toh karo.
Jeevika blinked at Viren and went with him to take permission from the nurse. After much talk, they agreed.
Wasting no time he went inside.
All doctors and nurses came outside and stuck to windows of room including jeevika viren beeji chachi to see what will happen.
Viraat came near her and sat beside her. He saw at the machine showing her heart rate 40 per minute which was quite low as normal.
He slowly kissed her on the forehead and took her hand in his.
Hmmm, hmmm, hmmm
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi udhar nahi,
Teri ore chale
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi udhar nahi
Teri ore chale
Hmmm, ho ho ho
Zara der main yeh kya hogaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der main yeh kya hogaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bher main logo ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele main
Akela kitna hun main yahan
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi udhar nahi
Teri ore chale
Hmmm hmmm
Shoru hogai kahani meri
Meri dil ne baat na maani meri
Shoru hogai kahani meri
Meri dil ne baat na maani meri
Hadd se bhi aage yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshaan hua
Mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi, udhar nahi
Teri ore chale
Viren: Jeevika dekho zara Maanvi ki heart beat tez hogai.
Maanvi, aaj hamare pyaar ki nishani hamari Mannat hamare saath hai. Pata hai uski ankhein bilkul tumhari tarah hain. Aur naak bhi tumhari tarah hai cute sa. Jab maine dekha tha poora laal hua wa tha. Lagta hai tumhari tarah uske bhi naak pe gussa rehne wala hai. Uske haath itne chote chote hain aur pao bhi bahut cute hain. Mujhe toh dar lag raha hai usse uthao ga kaise. Kahin gir wir gai toh uski amma toh mujhe hi dante gi na.
Chachi: Dekho toh, Maanvi ki dharkan bharti ja rahi hai.
Beeji: Bus pinky issi tarah woh thek hojai.
Tumne kuch kaha toh nahi tha lekin mujhe laga tum yehi chahti hogi. Sab se pehle usse tumhari di ne Mannat ko apni good main uthaya. Thek kia na maine. Main chahta tha keh hamari beti main bhabhi aur bhai ki qualities ho.
Viren: Sirf Viraat ke jane se hi nahi, tumhari baat karne se bhi uski dharkane bharti hain Jeevika.
Jeevika only nodded.
Abhi na usse nursery main rakha hai. Thori der baad usse tumhare pass le aai ge. Bilkul tumhare saath main laiti gi woh. Hamari cute si pyaari si beti, Mannat.
She took a long breath. Doctors and nurses came in to check her so Viraat went outside. After some time doctor came outside.
Doctor: Unbelievable! Maanvi ki heart beat stable hai. She is out of danger now.
All felt relieved now.
Doctor: Aur yeh sab aap logo ki wajah se hua hai especially Viraat.
Viraat: Hum mil sakte hain usse.
Doctor: Abhi nahi. Ek do ghante tak unhe hosh ajai ga tab mil sakte hain. Aur aapki beti bhi aap le sakte hain.
Viraat: Thank you, doctor.
The doctor patted on his back and left. Jeevika Beeji and Chachi thanked God.
Viren: Dekha Viraat Maanvi ab thek hai.
Viraat: Bhai aaj ka din mere liye bahut special hai. Meri life main aaj do angels aai hain. Mannat aur Maanvi.
Viren: Congrats Bhai.
He hugged him.
Viraat: Aapko bhi bahut bahut mubarak ho bhai. Dekho zara hum dono ko ek hi din betiyaan mili. Waise koi naam socha hai aapne.
Viren: Haan. Lekin pehle Jeevika se pocho ga phir hi rakhe ge.
Viraat: Batao toh sahi
Viren: Virika
Jeevika heard him and smiled because she also chose the same name.
Chachi: Oye dekho toh Viren and Jeevika ne alag alag bhi same naam rakha apni beti ka.
Viren saw Jeevika who smiled at him.
Beeji: Main dua karti hu Mannat aur Virika ka rishta bhi Maanvi Jeevika ki tarah atoot ho.
After an hour nurse told them that Maanvi is about to wake up so all went inside.
Feeling the presence of him, she opened her eyes and saw Viraat Jeevika Viren Beeji and Chachi smiling at her with tears.
Maanvi: Aap log ro kyun rahe hain. Main uthi hu issliye.
Jeevika: Tu uthi hai issliye muskura rahe hain. Aur yeh anso toh khushi ke hain.
Maanvi: Phir toh thek hai.
Jeevika: Kaisi hai tu
Maanvi: Main bilkul thek hu. Aur jab mere saath aap ho mujhe kya hona hai.
She tried to sit when she moaned in pain because of the back sprain. Hearing her, Viraat immediately helped her.
Jeevika: Iss baar saara credit Viraat ko jata hai mujhe nahi. Uska jaadu tere pe aisa chala keh tu uth gai.
Despite being in a bad condition, she blushed hearing this and looked at Viraat who held her hand in his.
Viraat: Pata hai main itna dar-
She put her hand on his mouth to prevent him from talking about this. She had no idea why she did that, the only thing she knew is that she did not want to hear any bad thing as this was a special moment for her.
The nurse came inside with her baby angel.
Nurse:Yeh rahi aapki beti jo aapki tarah bahut strong hai. Lijiye isko.
Jeevika saw both of them on the verge of crying due to happiness. They looked scared of holding her so she moved forward and took her from sister.
Jeevika: Maanu teri Mannat mere haathoon main hai. Usse pakre gi nahi.
Maanvi and Viraat looked at each other. Then both moved a hand forward.
As soon as jeevika placed the baby on their hand, the baby smiled making them smile.
Maanvi: Viraat Mannat
Viraat: Maanvi hamari Mannat
Maanvi: Kitni cute hai
Viraat: Haan per tumhari tarah rondo nahi. Dekho abhi tak roi nahi hai aur tumhe dekho roi jarahi hu.
He softly caressed her cheek.
Viraat: Kitni soft hai. Aur uske haath pao kitne chote hain.
Maanvi: Ofcourse Viraat. Chote hi honge na. Bachi hai.
Viren: Humne tum dono ki nok jhok itna miss kia tha. Ab lag rahe ho na hamare Viraat Maanvi.
Beeji and Chachi came forward and gave their blessing. Jeevika and Viren also hugged them. Then Vanshika and Daddaji came along with shlok and dabbu.
Di di
Dabbu and shlok ran towards maanvi.
Dabbu: Di aap kaisi ho aur chutku kaisi hai.
Maanvi: Khud hi dekh lo.
She made them see Mannat.
Shlok: Yeh 75 percent aap pe aur 25 percent bhai pe gai hai.
Dabbu: Main toh isse angel hi bulao ga.
Vanshika and Daddaji also came forward. They congratulated them and gave blessings.
Maanvi: Bua, chachi, chachu kahan hai. Mujhe wish karne hi nahi aai. Bhol gai kya.
Jeevika: Nahi maanu woh-
Viren: Maanvi woh
Maanvi: Kya aap dono woh woh keh rahe hain. Kya hua.
Viraat: Maanvi tumhare delivery ke thori der pehle
Maanvi: Kya Viraat.
Viraat: Vidhi-
Maanvi: Oh haan. Vidhi. Woh kahan hai aur kaisi hai.
Viraat: Actually woh bhi hospital mai hai.
Maanvi: Hospital? Kya hua usse. Thek toh hai na
Then Inder and Kadambari entered with Vidhi on a wheelchair.
Vidhi: Main bilkul thek hu. Ab toh tumhe apni di se pochna chahiye keh woh kaisa feel kar rahi hai.
Maanvi: Matlab
Vidhi: Matlab keh tum jaisa feel kar rahi ho waise hi woh bhi feel kar rahi hongi.
Maanvi: Aisa kyun.
Vidhi: Tum maa bani ho. Tumhari beti hui hai.
Maanvi: Haan toh
She thought for a second.
Maanvi: Iska matlab Di bhi...
Vidhi: Haan. Beti hui hai.
Maanvi: Diii. Apni mujhe kyun nahi bataya. Congratulations Di.
She hugged her.
Viren: Tum dono toh maa bane hi ho. Main bhi baap bana hu. Mujhe bhi bhadaya milne chahiye na.
Maanvi: Bilkul jiju. Congrats aaj toh aap baap bane, mamo bhi bane aur taya bhi.
He also hugged her.
Kadambari: Hayye ni. Yeh toh bahut hi filmy scene hogaya. Ek selfie le.
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