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Hello
Hello Maanvi vadhera..
Ji main hi bol rahi hu.
Aapko aaj Doctor ne bolaya hai.
Per main toh kal hi wahan aai thi.
Doctor ne aapki reports galat parhi thi aaj wapis bulaya hai. Aap please ajai ga.
Acha thek hai . Kitne baje.
10 baje.
Yeh toh jaldi nahi hai thora late ka appointment mil sakta hai.
Nahi woh keh rahi hi jitna jaldi ho sake aap yahan aai.
Okay. Main pohanch jao gi.
Lagta hai kuch problem hai. Pehle toh reports normal thi. Aab kuch problem. Mera bacha. Nahi kuch nahi hoga. Mujhe doctor ke pass turant jana hoga. Aur agar di ya Viraat ki bataya toh khamakha pareshaan ho jai ge. Mujhe akele jaana hoga . Per kissi ko bhi yeh pata nahi chalna chahiye.
J: Kya nahi pata chalna chahiye Maanu.
M:Di.
J:Haan bol Maanu kya nahi pata chalna chahiye.
M:Woh di. Main. Main.
J:Yeh main main kya laga rakha hai. Bol kya chupa rahi hai sab se.
M:Kuch nahi di. Aap na khamakha tension le rahi hu.
J:Acha toh bata kya chuppa rahi hai.
M:Main kya chuppao gi. Main na woh storeroom se apne chotte kapre lene ja rahi thi aur aap ke kapre aap ko gift karne the. Agar kissi ko pata chal jata toh surprise kharab ho jata na. Per aab sab kharab hogaya.
J:Acha. Thek hai.
M:Jao main di.
J:Haan ja.
Maanvi tightly hugged Jeevika. She wanted some relaxation and confidence that nothing wrong will happen. Jeevika felt something different in Maanvi's behavior. Before she can think more Maanvi ran from there.
Sorry di. Main ne aap se jhoot bola. Mujhe maaf kar dena.
Dabbu:Maanvi di. Aap kahan ja rahi ho.
Jeevika:Dabbu maanu storeroom main ja rahi hai.
Dabbu: Acha Maanvi di sunno.
Maanvi: Haan
Dabbu: Beeji keh rahi thi keh pados wali mami ji ki tabiyat thek nahi hai toh main aur jeevika di milne chale jai. Per aap ko toh pata hai keh Viren jiju agai hain toh di toh ja nahi sakti. Aur mera jaane ka maan nahi hai. Yaad nahi mujhe jate hi woh mere gaal khenchne lagti hain. Please di aap chale jao na.
Yeh acha mauka hai. Doctor ke pass aaram se ja sakti hu. Iss tarah kissi ko pata bhi nahi chale ga aur main doctor se bhi mil loon gi.
Maanvi: Thek hai dabbu main jati hu.
Jeevika: Maanu storeroom se toh ho le.
Maanvi: Main akar kaam kar lo gi.
Maanvi moved towards the main door. Jeevika and dabbu showed thumbs up to each other.
Maanvi turned back.
M:Beeji chachi jiju kahan gai hai.
Beeji:Maanu Viren ji kissi kaam se gai hain. Aur beeji chachi na-woh--kahan gai- haan bazar. Bazar gai hain.
M:Acha thek hai. Main aati hu.
Dabbu: Shukar hai main ne Viraat jiju ki baatein sun li warna aaj kuch na ho paata.
Jeevika: Haan dabbu. Tu ne bilkul thek se Maanu ko bahar bhej dia. Usse khabar tak na hui keh kya hone wala hai.
Dabbu: Beeji, mummy ajao.
Beeji: Kaam hogaya.
Jeevika: Haan beeji. Maanvi bahar chali gai hai. Ab Viraat humse akar jo bhi kahe ga usse nahi pata chale ga.
Chachi: Per iss ka ki faida jeevika putar.
Jeevika: Chachi agar Maanvi bhi yahan rehti toh sab sun leti jis tarah ek aur larai ho jati. Ab jaise hi Viraat jai ga dabbu Maanu ko uski batai hui jagah per le aai ga.
Dabbu: Phir sab thek ho jai ga?
Jeevika: Kyun nahi. Dono sorry bol ke gale laga lein ge.
Everyone was happy except beeji.
Beeji: Mujhe kuch thek nahi lag raha. Yeh dono kuch gar bar karne wale hain. Bus aab toh upar wale ka hi sahara hai.
Maanvi took a rickshaw to the clinic. She was a few minutes early so she waited. After some time she went inside.
Maanvi: Hello doctor.
Doctor: Hi maanvi. Betho.
Maanvi: Doctor aapne mujhe yahan wapis kyun bulaya. Sab thek toh hai.
Doctor: Sorry Maanvi. Kal main ne tumhari reports thori si galat parhi thi. Dr. Bakshi se meri mulakat hui thi. Unhoon ne mujhe bataya that you are a cancer survivor.
Maanvi: Yes doctor. Lekin iss ka mere bache se kya connection.
Doctor: Connection hai Maanvi. Tumhare cancer ki medicines ki wajah se tumhara immune system buri tarah kharab ho chuka hai. Iss ki wajah se tumhari body bahut weak ho gai. Main ne tumhari vitamins ki dose barhai thi per tumhari latest reports se dikhta hai keh un dawaiyoon ka tum per koi asar nahi ho raha.
Maanvi: Matlab.
Doctor: Matlab tumhari pregnancy main complications hain jis ki wajah se main tumhe advice karo gi keh
Maanvi: Kya doctor
Doctor: Sorry to say Maanvi but tumhe yeh bacha abort karna pare ga warna tumhara miscarriage bhi ho sakta hai aur tumhari jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai.
Doctor's words were ringing in Maanvi's head like an alarm.
Doctor: Tum kuch der soch lo phir apne husband ke saath mere clinic ajana decision ke liye.
Maanvi stood up but fully shaken. How can she kill her own child? How can she leave her child? What will she say to the family? to Viraat? How will she survive without her baby? How? Why? What? She did not knew when she reached the parking slot.
Dabbu: Maanvi di. Maanvi di. Di. Di. Aap yahan kya kar rahi hain. Maanvi di.
Maanvi: Haan. Dabbu tu yahan.
Maanvi's condition was worse at that time. The rain started but she was standing there unaware of the surroundings.
Dabbu came there finding her. He saw her standing alone in the middle of the road drenched in rain.
One the other hand Maanvi was not responding to anything. At such crucial times, doctors usually say that one should cry and not be silent as it is bad for health. Here Maanvi was so out shaken by the news of abortion that she was going in depression and not a single tear fell from her eyes.
Dabbu shook her shoulders and immediately she hugged him. He was caressing her hair lovingly.
Dabbu: Kya hua Maanvi di.
He cupped her face with his hands.
Maanvi: Main woh
Dabbu: Oh di. Main bhol gaya na.
Maanvi: Kya hua.
Dabbu: Ek bahut bari problem ho gai hai.
Maanvi: Kaisi problem
Dabbu: Viraat jiju pass wali pahari per gai hain.
Maanvi: Pass wali pahari per. Wohi wali per jis ke pass gehri wali khai hai.
Dabbu: Haan di.
Maanvi: Magar kyun.
Dabbu: Unho ne ghar per sab ko bola keh jab aap dono ka rishta khatam ho gaya toh unka iss duniya main rehna ka kya faida hai. Issi liye woh khud ko marne ja rahe hain.
Maanvi: Suicide.
Dabbu: Haan di suicide aur unho ne ek gun bhi karai per li hai aapne aap ko marne ke liay iss ke saath aap dono ki saari shaadi ki cheezein aur albums gifts sab le gai. Shaid jalane ke liay kyunke woh kitchen se mujhse lighter bhi le gai.
It seemed like ground slipped from Maanvi's feet. She did not know what to do. Her mind stopped working. Her immediate reaction was to run towards Viraat. Although her mind stopped still her heart was beating chanting only one name, Viraat. It was shouting that save Viraat and heart never says wrong.
In no time they reached the hill where all the family members were standing there tensed. Viren and Jeevika were persuading Viraat to stop his actions. They saw both arriving there.
Viren and Jeevika moved backward. Dabbu also moved aside from Maanvi.
Dabbu(whisper): Di kaam hogaya.
Jeevika: Good work dabbu. Ab maanu Viraat ko mana kar hi le gi.
Viraat saw Maanvi. They shared an eye lock. But Viraat was adamant about his decision. He broke the eye lock and turned backward where his and Maanvi's memories were placed. He picked them and moved towards the end. He placed them and took out the lighter.
M:Viraat
He looked back at her. Clouds gathered together and rain increased.
Kuch kaam roshan roshni
Kuch kaam gili hai barishe
Kuch kaam laharati hai hawa
Kuch kaam hai dil main khawashe
Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi tehra ho aise
Hmm hmm hmm hmmm hmmm
Kuch kaam roshan roshni
Kuch kaam gili hai barishe
Kuch kaam laharati hai hawa
Kuch kaam hai dil main khawashe
Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi tehra ho aise
Hmm hmmm hmmm hmmm
Kyun meri saans bhi kuch pheki si hai
Dooriyoon se hui nazdeeki si hai
Kyun meri saans bhi kuch pheki si hai
Dooriyoon se hui nazdeeki si hai
Jaane kya
Yeh baat hai
Har subah ab raat hai
Kuch kaam roshan roshni
Kuch kaam gili hai barishe
Kuch kaam laharati hai hawa
Kuch kaam hai dil main khawashe
Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi tehra ho aise
Hmm hmmm hmmm hmmm
Phool mehke nahi kuch gumsum se hain
Jaise roothe hue kuch yeh tum se hain
Phool mehke nahi kuch gumsum se hain
Jaise roothe hue kuch yeh tum se hain
Khushbooai dhal gai
Saath jo
Ab tum nahi
Kuch kaam roshan roshni
Kuch kaam gili hai barishe
Kuch kaam laharati hai hawa
Kuch kaam hai dil main khawashe
Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi tehra ho aise
Hmm hmm hmm hmm hmmm
Both had million of questions thousands of problems in their eyes but immense love and care could be easily seen in them.
M:Viraat.
V:Maanvi.
M:Viraat tum kya karne ja rahe ho.
V:Wohi jo tumne kal kar dia tha.
M:Kya.
V:Khud ko marna. Kal tumne mujhe mar dia aaj main bus wohi repeat kar raha hoon.
M:Viraat.
V:Maanvi jab tumne mujhe mar hi dia toh yahan akar mujhe bachane ka kya faida.
M:Viraat I-
V:Nahi Maanvi. Tumne hi kaha tha keh pehle galti karke sorry bolne se kuch nahi hota.
M:Please.
V:Kis cheez ke liye. Ab kuch nahi bacha Maanvi.
M:Viraat kal main ne gusse main kaha tha.
V:Acha gusse main tha. Bhai bhabhi beeji suno Maanvi se kal sab gusse main kaha tha. Iss ne hamara rishta tor dia sab gusse main. Iss ne hamare beech pyaar khatam kar dia kehti hai gusse main kaha tha. Meri zindagi cheen li kehti hai gusse main kaha tha. Mujhe maar dala aur bolti ho gusse main Maanvi.
M:Viraat meri baat toh sunno.
V:Tumne aaj tak meri baat sunni.
M:Iska badla le rahe ho.
V:Badla nahi le raha kyunke agar pichle hafte main hone wale incidents ka badla lia na tumse toh tum seh nahi pao gi.
M:Viraat dekho Di ne kal mujhe sab bata dia. Mujhe pata hai tum ne kuch nahi kia.
V:Pata chal gaya. Mere khayal main tumhe yeh sab bolne se pehle sochna chahiye tha. Main ne jab tumhe gusse main sab bola tha toh tum mujhe chor ke agai thi. Toh jab tumne hamara rishta hi khatam kar dia toh main kya karo.
Maanvi had no answer to his question.
V:Nahi hai na jawab. Main bata deta hu. Kal tumne jo kaha tha. Aaj hum usse poora karte hain. Sab jala dete hain.
He forcefully held Maanvi's hand and started to drag her forward.
Viren came running to them and removed Viraat's hand from her.
Viren:Tu yeh kya kar raha hai.
V:Mujhse poch rahe ho bhai. Kal Maanvi se nahi pocha tha. Kal khayal nahi aaya tha.
Viren:Maanvi ko sab bata dia hai humne. Bata dia keh tu sirf Maanvi ke liay jeeta hai.
V:Jeeta hai nahi bhai jeeta tha ab main mar chuka hu aur Maanvi ne mujhe maar dala.
Viren:Tu pagal hogaya hai Viraat.
Jeevika:Haan Viraat hone wale bache ka toh khayal karo.
V:Main hogaya hu pagal. Aur ab yeh sirf Maanvi ka bacha hai jaisa woh kehti hai.
As soon as she heard the mention of child she released that she is doing wrong. She should let him move on. And it is her time to make an exit from his life.
Main ne Viraat ko maar dala aur ab yeh bacha. Agar main ne uske samne yeh sab kia toh woh jeete jee mar jai ga. Main aisa nahi kar sakti. Mujhe Viraat ko zindagi de kar khud yahan se hamesha hamesha ke liay chale jana chahiye.
M:Viraat.
V:Main ne kuch nahi sunna.
M:Akhri baar bye bhi nahi bolo ge.
Viraat faced her.
M:Aaj se main tumhari zindagi se ja rahi hu. Tumhe apni azaadi ki zindagi mubarak ho. Main kabhi tumhe nazar nahi aao gi aur ho sake toh mujhe BHULA DENA. Main apne bache ke sath nai zindagi shoru karo---(she was unable to say that will never be true)-- Nai zindagi shoru karo gi tumse dur. Tum bus hameha khush rehna. Main ne tumhe maut di na toh main hi tumhe nai zindagi deti hu. Jee lo apni khushhaal zindagi Viraat. Alvida
Tumko hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Horaha hai juda
Dono ka rasta
Dur jake bhi mujhse
Tum meri yaadoon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na khena
Tumko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Horaha hai juda dono ka rasta
Dur jaake bhi mujhse
Tum meri yaadoon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Jitni thi khushiyaan sab kho chuki hain
Bus ek gham hai keh jata nahi
Samjha ke dekha
Behla kar dekha
Dil hai keh chain iss ko ata nahi
Aata nahi
Aanson hai keh angare
Aag hai ab aankhoon se behna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Ahh ahh ahh ahh ahhh ahh
Rut arahi hai
Rut ja rahi hai
Dard ka mausam badla nahi
Rang yeh gham ka itna hai gehra
Saadiyoon bhi hoga halka nahi
Halka nahi
Kon jaane kya hona hai
Humko hai ab kya kya sehne
Kabhi alvida
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Tumko bhi hai khabar
Mujhko bhi hai pata
Horaha hai juda
Dono ka rasta
Dur jake bhi mujhse
Tum meri yaadoon main rehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Kabhi alvida na kehna
Maanvi left him.
Virmaan became Viraat Maanvi again.
She was leaving and he was seeing it. All finished.
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