Chapter 16

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Hey guys,
Thanks 4 all d comments...
Enjoy reading this update...
See d note at d end of d update...



Taarey ff:Towards Love:part:15

Taani enters the cabin.
Taani-sir apne mujhe bhulaaya..
Rey:ha we have 2 leave for ahemdabad today
Taani:kyun
Rey:we have a meeting vd one of d clients
Taani:k
Rey luks at taani..
Taani was packing up vd files n
Rey remmebrs how they fought when they vr going for their first meeting..
Taani feels rey's eyes on him..
She looks at him,
rey turns away..

Taani:chale sir..
Rey:ha


Swayam:koi fyda hoga
Sharon:shaayad
Swayam:tumne petrol kaali kar diya tha na
Sharon:done
Swayam:hmm
Sharon:ab dekthi hoon,in donon paas kaise nahi aathi..

Taani sits in the front..
She looked outside..
She forgot 2 put d seatbelt..
Rey:seatbelt pehno
Taani didnt hear..
Rey tries to pull out the seat belt but seeing rey's hand,
taani turned making their face coming closer..
Taarey eyelock..

Taani looks away..
Rey closes his eyes..
Taani:main pehnloongi...
Rey drives off..
Rey ons the stereo 2 avoid d awkwardness btw them..

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But it increased d tension..
Taani looks at the mirror n sees rey's eyes on her..

Taani closes her eyes..

But after sometime d car stopped on d midway..(According 2 sharon's plan)
Rey:ise kya hua
Taani:ab kya hua
Rey:pata nahi
Taani n rey gets out of the car..
But again cupid played d trick,
dey forgot 2 take d keys inside n door automatically got locked..
Rey runs 2 catch d door but all in vain...

Taani luks up:nahi nahi
Rey luks at taani..
Rey:god
Taani starts to walk
Rey:kahan chal rahi ho
Taani:pata hai yeh mere dilli ki chandni chowk nahi hai
Rey smiles,taani turns 2 c dis,
she saw him smiling,n seeing dis she also smiles..

Rey walks on d other side of the road..
He remembers d last time how he was pestering to be friends with her..
Rey:i think we got lost..
Taani:u think

Taani n rey comes face to face
Taani:Aap koi kaam teek se kyun nahi karthe
Rey:mujhe kya pata tha ghaadi karab ho jaayegi
Taani:ab raat bhi hone ko hai n iss kungle jaise area main koi insaan bhi nahi dekh raha hai
Rey:to hum donon jaanwar hai
Taani:aapka to pata nahi,
sirf main insan lagthi hoon n walk
Rey:Accha

Taani:aapke upar paani jaise kuch gir raha hai jaisa lag raha hai kya?
Rey lost in his world:nahi aaj kal bahut moosibat gir raha hai mere upar..
Taani:excuse me

But it had started raining..
Rey runs under d trees...

Taani was standing in the rain..
Keeping her hands straight she was circling..

Rey sees this n gets lost in her..
Taani was drenched almost by now..
Rey lost in her walks up to her..
hold her hands..

Taani looks at him..
Keeps her hand on his face...
Rey rests his head on it. n closes his eyes.
Taani tries to walk away..
Rey holds her hand n pulls making her land on his chest..
Moves her hair from her back n kisses on her shoulder..
Taani closes her eyes n tries 2 move..
But rey keeps his hand on her stomach n pulls her more closer...
Taani turns to rey..
Tarey eyelock..
Rey kisses on her forehead..
Taani closes her eyes..
rey moves her wet hair from the face..
Rey kisses on her cheeks..
Rey clutches on to rey's shirt..
Rey leans to kiss on her lips..
BUt taani moves...


Taani turns back..

Rey stood there looking at her..

Taani closes her eyes n remembers what had just happened...
She cries n sits down..

Rey understood what he had done n goes n sit with her..

Taani gets up...
Rey catches her hand..

Taani luks at him..
Taani:please door rahiye mujse
Rey:koshish ki bahut par
Taani shooks her hand from his..
N walks away leaving rey on d middle of d forest..

Taani:yeh kya kar diya maine..
mujhse yeh sab kaise?
maine kaha tha na apne aap se un see door rahenge...

Rey searches for taani but couldnt find her anywhere..

But finally rey gets a lift and reaches mumbai..

But to see siya n taani ,swayam n sharon together in his house.
Taani was wearing d specs again to avoid eyecontact vd anyone...

Rey enters d house..

Rey hears something also..
It was our rest of d d3 gang..
Vicky:oye naalyak tune paris se ladki bhi pataali
aur swayam ka shaadi bhi karwwaya

Rey was shocked:guys tum sab yahan
Nil:ha dude
Amar:lum li hai
Bharat:hum bhi hai yahan
Sneha:me too
aashi:me 3
Simmi:ryt here
riini:main bhi
Everyone goes for d group hug expect taani hu was still nt able 2 put up a smile
Vicky:tum wahan kade kyun ho?
Siya:ha taani yahan aajao

Everyone sat down.
Rey:guys i have decided something
Taani luks at rey.
Rey luks at taani and gets up n moves to taani..

Swayam:propose karega
Sharon:shaayad
Swayam:nahi kiya tho
Vicky:hum kisliye aaye hai
Nil:ha

But Rey moves away from taani and takes siya's hand n makes her in the centre..
Rey kneels down..
Rey:marry me..
Taani closes her eyes n tries to leave but sharon catches her hand.
Sharon:kahan jaa rahi ho,tumhare bff ne apne gf ko propose kar raha hai aur tum hoke jaa rahi ho
Taani:ha bhaabhi
Taani sits n closes her eyes.-i can do this
Rey luks at taani

Swayam-yeh expected nahi tha sharon
Sharon:ha
Swayam:ab
Vicky:hum haina
Nil:iski to hum bajadega
Swayam:kya
Amar:band
Swayam:jo bhi karna hai karo par keep in mind wahan pe jo baiti hai woh meri behen,agar kuch ulta seedha hogayana main tum logon ko chodoongi nahi

Rey:guys sshhh
Rey:so siya will u marry me...
Siya:of course rey
N dey hug

Taani couldnt see it n leaves.
N walks away..

Rey sees this.
Rey:ek minute main abhi aayi
Rey sees taani sitting in d bench.
Rey:kya hua taani,tum aise kyun chali aayi
Taani gets up.
Taani keeps her specs on.
Taani:kuch nahi,mujhe bas thodi air chahiye tha
Rey:kyun bura laga
Taani:kya
Rey:maine siya ko propose kiya
Taani:nahi to
Rey:tumhe koi farak nahi padthi taani
Taani turns her back n stands:nahi
Rey:to mujhe congratulations nahi doge
Taani closes her eyes harder this time..
n turns smilingly...
Taani:congratulation sir n walks away...

Everyone inside.
Vicky:to rey hum kal sagai ka function rakhle ha..

Taani:bhaai ek minute please bahar aana
Swayam:ha

Taani tells something to swayam
n asks a promise which made swayam shocked like hell..
Swayam n comes inside making everyone tensed seeing swayam's face sad.
Rey:kya hua
Swayam:kuch nahi
Rey:u sure


Precap:
Rey's sagaaai n taani dances for rey.
will rey still be able to realise what taani means to him before it too late?
What did taani tell to swayam?
whats d plan d3 gang came up with?


Hmmm..many questions n one answer -
wait for the next update...

Note

So guys,
i knw many of u r nt commenting,
Guys i sent atleast more than 100 pms..
so please atleast tell me whether i should continue or not...
I know iam being rude..
But guys it takes around a minute or so..
agar busy ho toh ek smiley atleast post kardo..
So guys,
i wont continue this ff if u guys dont want me to continue...
Sorry again,
my day has already went bad n
seeing less response is making it more worse..
Sorry for being rude...


PART16
Lachu_taarey2013-03-29 07:38:09

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