Chapter 1

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Jahnvi

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Hello! My 1st SS on IF!
It is Hima Di's concept n she suggested me to pen it down n I really hope i have justified it!
Well its a bit sad so I've given a flashback to lighten up ur moods so that u don't end up beating me up
Ohk here u guys go..
Part 1
Taani's POV
"Happily Married" yeah! That's what we r called...!! But I doubt whether the Happy word is still left? Or we r just "married"! 6years...6 yrs of married life n where we end up? No where! No doubt we r very successful in our professional life but personal life? I wonder whether we even have one? We got so busy with our work that we even forgot that we have a 5 yr old angel whom we have to look after! Ohh..here she comes!! Chalo let's surprise her..actually today I managed to come home early just to spend some time with her!

No one's POV
Sameetha..TaaRey's 5yr old daughter lovingly called as Samee enters with a sad face coming from school! Looking at her anyone can tell how lonely she is...she enters being greeted by her Aaliya di...her nanny! Well she is the only one in her life! Only person who she is with whole day! N her parents? Well they r too busy in making money n handling their professional life that they forgot they have a daughter! Samee comes n removes her shoes putting them on their place n her eyes get fixed on her..yeah she sees her mother there looking at her with a smile..firstly she is shocked as this is the first time she is finding her mom home so early cause her parents used to come only after she goes in a deep slumber! She pays no attention to her mom n directly heads to her room struggling with her bag which is heavier then her weight! Taani comes to her n picks her bag giving her a lovely smile n in return getting nothing!
Samee: M a big girl now! I don't need ur help
Taani giggles at this but soon recovers
T: yeah but I wanna help my angel, can I plz?
Samee: Hm...OK
She goes n taking out her regular wear n towel enters the washroom!
Taani was literally shocked by this...how much she remembers...when she was of Samee's age she was too very naughty n fully dependent on her mother for all her works n here her daughter is too mature!
She snaps out of her thoughts hearing the know of the washroom n sees her doll coming out...she goes to her
T: Hello baby! Kaise ho aap?
S: M good!
T: u know I missed u so much
Samee looks in her eyes as if asking her whether she really missed her?
T: aaj aapka day kaisa tha?
S: aaj PTA meet tha school me! Maine aapka n Papa ka bohot wait kiya! But aap nhi aaye (tears welled up in her eyes)
T(shocked) : aapne muje bataya kyu nhi k aaj PTA meet tha?
S: Maine kal raat KO aapka n Papa ka bohot wait kiya tha but Pata nhi mai kab so gayi n aaj morning before going school Maine Aaliya di se bola tha k aapko phone karke bol de! (Starts crying)
Taani notices someone standing at the door n was happy seeing him...
Rey had came home early as he wanted to talk to Taani something very important n had heard their convo
R: Aaliya
Aaliya enters
R: tumne muje n Taani KO inform kyu nhi kiya about the parents meet?
A: M soory sir but Maine aapke office call kiya tha but u were in a meeting n aapke secretary ne bola u r busy n ma'am unka call nhi lag rha tha
TaaRey looks guilty
Rey goes n hugs Samee stopping her frm crying
R: M so sorry baby!! I promise next time this will not happen.
S: aapko Pata h aaj mere saare frnds k Mumma papa aaye the n aaj ghar aate time bhi I was alone in school bus because sab frnds apne Mumma papa k saath Gaye the Bahar! Aaj I scored highest marks in my class muje aapko surprise Dena tha (sobs more)
She runs out...
TaaRey looks at each other..
T: Rey muje aapse baat karni h
R: muje bhi...wait I'll just change
T: yeah
In TaaRey's room
Taani is waiting for Rey to come out of the washroom..
Taani's POV
Today I need to talk to Rey! This is wrong! We need to give some time to Samee n even each other! We can't just continue living this robotic life! We need to change..at least for our daughter! This one yr has changed everything!
Flashback (before one yr)
The Sun rays peeped in the lovely couple's bedroom making her snuggle more into him n him hugging her more!!
Rey was the first one to open his eyes just to see his love sleeping with her mouth a bit open..he so wanted to capture her petals n taste them but controlling his desires he slowly closed her mouth earning her groan cause of the disturbance caused n he chuckled at this!
R(lovingly carrasing her cheeks): Taani..baby wake up!! Samee KO ready Karna h na...its her first day to primary school!
Hearing this Taani woke up with a jerk!
T: oh my god aaj toh uska first day h n mai late uthi! Krishnaji ab kya hoga? She will get late to school! Abhi uska uthana h, ready Karna h, break fast...
She is stopped by him as her captured her lips n started smooching them!! After a long kissing session they pulled out!
A light crimson shade appeared on her cheeks making him go crazy...
R: Taani agar aise blush karogi toh mai office kaise jau?
T: Reyy...aap utho plz! Late ho jaiega
R: no! Thode der baad
T: no! Get up right now!
R: plz naa
T: aap na! F9 raho aise he! Mai jaa rhi hu (angrily moves out)
R: Are...itna jaldi Gussa kyu ho jaati h yaar ye! Chalo manate h...are Taani k Krishna ji hamesha Taani KO he kyu naraz karte ho yaar mujse? Kabhi hame bhi mauka do Gussa hone ka! Chal Rey! Get ready
Rey gets ready n enters Samee's room
T: Samee utho
S: Mumma 2 mins plz
T: no 2 mins
S: agar mai uth gayi toh muje kya milega?
Rey: kya chahea aapko?
S: aaj milk nhi pina plz
T: Reyy
R: ab Maine kya kiya?
T: kuch nhi! Samee aap ugh rhe ho k nhi?
S: nhi
Taani's mouth opens in 'O' n Rey giggles at her
T: Rey she should be ready in next 15 mins or else one hand distance for 2 weeks (angry)
R(shocked) : what?? Aise thodi hota h! This is cheating ha...mai bol rha hu!
Taani leaves telling Him to hurry up
R: are yaar! Samee utho na plzzz! Mai aapko Jo chahea vo dunga I promise! Plz get up warna meri band bajegi
S(giggles) : aap Mumma se darte ho
R: oye! Mai nhi darta Mumma se
Samee giggles
They get ready n go downstairs
T: Good girl Samee (kissing her cheek)
R: mai bhi toh ready hua! Meri kiss kaha h?
T: Reyy...
R: what Rey?
S: Mumma breakfast
T: ha come..
They have their breakfast n TaaRey leaves with Samee dropping her to school...
~~
Remembering those lovely days a faint smile adores Taani's lips
Rey comes out
R: Taani I need to talk to you
Listening this Taani feels how much their relation have changed that now the Rey who used to love her so much is having a formal conversation just to tell something..she snaps out of her thoughts hearing him calling her name
T: yeah muje bhi...plz bolo aap
R: Taani its just that I think things have changed n so have we...so I think its time to change our relation...I mean its of no meaning living like this! Taani mai ab tumhe Jo bolunga...mai voh Samee k baare me soch k decide kiya h! Taani we r busy in our lives n r depended on each other for Samee like I think jab mai busy tha tab u were there with her n u think the opposite...n today I have realized how lonely she was even after living with her parents so I think...
T(cuts him) : Rey plz aap muje Jo chahe voh bol Sakte h...u don't need to think so much...
R: ohk! Coming to the point mai divorce k baare me soch rha tha!



INDEX
Part 1= Page 1
Part 2 = Page 6
Part 3 = Page 12
Part 4 = Page 17
Part 5 = Page 23 (last part)
jahnvi_Patel2014-10-19 05:02:16

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