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Oh! I missed my Local!

Asad's POV


5th December 2012

"F u c k! It's 2.43.. Urrghh! Now the next local is at 3.20. Why me??", I sighed. When I turned, I banged myself into a girl. A girl, so pretty. I fell over her and stared at her doe shaped eyes. What a feeling.

When I saw her struggling beneath me, I got up immediately, "I'm sorry! I just missed my local!", I said in irritation.

"Me too!", came her melodious voice.

"Oh! Were you gonna catch the same 2.43p.m. local?", I asked

She nodded. She looked so adorable. Her eyes, so innocent! Her nose, so cute! Her lips, so umm.. Shut up Asad! Stop thinking like that!

"Do you travel by this local every day?", I asked

"Yeah!", she replied. Soon she got a call and she walked off into the crowd.

12th January 2013

There I go again; missed my local. Bloody these auto guys of Mumbai, Useless! They never seem to drop me from home to station being short distance. I need to walk it down, uh, rather run it down every day!

I sat on the bench on the platform and waited for the next local, the one at 3.20. I flipped open my phone for checking into some unread text messages when I felt a cloth bag drop beside me and then a being. I lifted my head and saw the same girl I had wanted to see for more than a month now!

The doe shaped eyes and cute nose and those luscious kissable lips. I know I hadn't mentioned that earlier but what the hell!

"Hi! Remember me?", I asked her in curiosity

"Hey! Yeah i do!", she smiled

And there went her cell phone again. But this time she did not get lost. She sat there beside me!

Once she completed her call she looked up at me and spoke, "How have you been?"

"Great!", I replied with a grin

The local finally arrived and she ran into the ladies compartment. "I like that girl. She seems familiar!", I thought to myself

14th February 2013

I'm feeling extremely restless today! I ran through the shortcuts from my house to the station. My intuition said that I would miss my local today. And I know my intuition never goes wrong!

I looked over to the bench and saw the girl sitting there. How could she have missed the local when it left the platform right in front of my eyes? I walked to her and sat beside her.

"Hi!", I greeted

"Hey! You remember me?", she asked

"Of course I do! I banged into you in December, Met you by this bench last month and today we're here again!", I said as a matter of fact-ly

She smirked, "So Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan! Is that all you remember?", she asked

What the hell? How did she know my name and why on earth was she smirking at me?

"Uh.. How do you know my name?", I asked

She quickly opened her cloth bag and removed an envelope and handed it over to me. I opened it as soon as I could. I was shocked to see what the envelope had.

Dated: 14th February 2003

Hey Zoe!

Will miss you loads,

Yours forever,

Asad <3

This was a card I gave my best friend when we were 10 years old and she was shifting to New York. I looked over at her as she removed another envelope and handed it over to me.

I opened it in a hurry..

Dated: 14th February 2013

Hey Asad!

It's been exactly 10 years that you gave me that card. I just wanted to say that if you are mine forever, I'm all yours.

Love,

Zoe <3

I looked at her gleaming eyes and pulled her into a hug. "Zoe! It's you!! OMG! This is the best Valentines!", I exclaimed

She hugged me with the same amount of passion and love yet chuckled, "Yeah yeah! The Best Valentines where the girl proposed the guy!", she smirked

I broke the hug and went down on my knees, "I can't tell you how overwhelmed I am to see you! That you came and found me! And I want to tell you how much I have loved you ever since. I'll always love you Zoe! It's high time you marry me!", i said

She laughed out loud, "That was the worst ever proposal Asad! Wait till Dilshad Phupi hears to your proposal!", she grinned

"AMMI? You've been in touch with Ammi?", I said in shock

"I've been in contact with everyone. And by the way, you're right. It's high time you marry me!", she said and pulled me into a lip smacking kiss.


A/N: That's it. 😳 Likes&Comments please, Long Comments specially! batting eyelashes If you did not like it, I'm not at fault, so please BMJ! 🤣

P.S.: Don't ask me to continue. This was the END! 😳


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-Mrinalini-2015-02-01 10:54:26

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