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megsy 2013-03-19 02:29:53
Hey Diii🤗
I know i am super late in commenting on ur update...trust me m helpless these days...u know how much i love n adore ur works...u r just amazing in portraying the soul of swaron..the sweet...innocent..unconditional love...
The sweet brief foreplay and its after effects...so beautifully portrayed by u ...ahh...dreamyyy swaron Diii..no-one can write romance like u do...its heavenly...
Swayam had a glint in his eyes, looking passionately at Sharon. Sharon looked at him for a moment and lowered her eyes. She had a huge smile playing as she recalled their small love making session. Swayam kept looking at Sharon with the same glint and a naughty smile. After a few seconds Sharon looked back at Swayam. His intense look made her blush harder and she lowered her gaze again.
Swayam put his finger under her chin and tucked her face up. Sharon continued looking down. She covered her face with her palm.
Swayam: my my my...come here!
I so loved this shy ..girl next door sharon..swayam's sharon..not the diva...wat followed was just amusing...the beautiful conversation...so so adorable...
The level of comfort they share is dreamy...i loved below lines..so swaronish...
Sharon(whisper): I can't believe how could your siren stay away from you for so many years
Swayam(whisper): you were never away from me baby
Sharon(whisper): I can't believe a guy like you exist in reality and that too you are in my life. There can be no one like you, ever, in this world
Swayam(whisper): my world is you Sharon!
The last line by Swayam..ahaa...i can so imagineswayam saying that line...😳
I loved the way u made him share his secrets share with Sharon...his past..his family back ground...his pains..his loneliness...it shows the depth of their love n understanding ...
Loved this line...when he told about her 1st effect on him..cute...
I fell in love with you the first time I saw you. Pata nahi kya tha, kya dekha maine tum mein, but I could see through you. Mujhe tumhare attitude dikhane wali Sharon Raiprakash ke andar chuppi ek cute, masoom si Sharon dikhi. I instantly knew that this is the girl jiske saath main apni puri life share karna chahta hoon.
The Saree part was adorable...when she confessed she love wearing sarees..awww...dadi sa part was cute...i love d way u used current track here😳
LOVING THIS SS...so so beautifully written by u Diii...plz forgive me for my late response...i love ur writing ...😳
Luv
Deep
I know i am super late in commenting on ur update...trust me m helpless these days...u know how much i love n adore ur works...u r just amazing in portraying the soul of swaron..the sweet...innocent..unconditional love...
The sweet brief foreplay and its after effects...so beautifully portrayed by u ...ahh...dreamyyy swaron Diii..no-one can write romance like u do...its heavenly...
Swayam had a glint in his eyes, looking passionately at Sharon. Sharon looked at him for a moment and lowered her eyes. She had a huge smile playing as she recalled their small love making session. Swayam kept looking at Sharon with the same glint and a naughty smile. After a few seconds Sharon looked back at Swayam. His intense look made her blush harder and she lowered her gaze again.
Swayam put his finger under her chin and tucked her face up. Sharon continued looking down. She covered her face with her palm.
Swayam: my my my...come here!
I so loved this shy ..girl next door sharon..swayam's sharon..not the diva...wat followed was just amusing...the beautiful conversation...so so adorable...
The level of comfort they share is dreamy...i loved below lines..so swaronish...
Sharon(whisper): I can't believe how could your siren stay away from you for so many years
Swayam(whisper): you were never away from me baby
Sharon(whisper): I can't believe a guy like you exist in reality and that too you are in my life. There can be no one like you, ever, in this world
Swayam(whisper): my world is you Sharon!
The last line by Swayam..ahaa...i can so imagineswayam saying that line...😳
I loved the way u made him share his secrets share with Sharon...his past..his family back ground...his pains..his loneliness...it shows the depth of their love n understanding ...
Loved this line...when he told about her 1st effect on him..cute...
I fell in love with you the first time I saw you. Pata nahi kya tha, kya dekha maine tum mein, but I could see through you. Mujhe tumhare attitude dikhane wali Sharon Raiprakash ke andar chuppi ek cute, masoom si Sharon dikhi. I instantly knew that this is the girl jiske saath main apni puri life share karna chahta hoon.
The Saree part was adorable...when she confessed she love wearing sarees..awww...dadi sa part was cute...i love d way u used current track here😳
LOVING THIS SS...so so beautifully written by u Diii...plz forgive me for my late response...i love ur writing ...😳
Luv
Deep
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