Chapter 6
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Part6:
Virat: so, I got angry n brought her home !
Virat's dad: did u atleast ask her if she's k with him calling her mannu ? he said it n u believed ?
Manvi: but wat he said is right uncle ! I don't have any objection with rahul calling me mannu as he has also become a gud friend of mine'.!
Virat: see dad! Wat she'z telling!
Manvi's dad: wats this manvi? How can u compare virat n rahul, as u both r best friends since childhood n rahul is just friend from 1 day !
Manvi: where am I comparing both of them dad? I didn't know wat happened between rahul n virat! As I came from washroom, virat brought me here without even telling me anything ! if virat don't like anyone to cal me mannu then I'll tel rahul not to cal me like that ! why so much scene ? I really don't know that he's so possessive of my name! n dad, friendship doesn't need ages to build, it just requires two people understanding eachother in a minute or over years !
Virat: yes! I'm possessive of that name coz til now nobody called u with that name except me n from now also, nobody else should cal u by that name! that's all
Manvi: k. I'll tel rahul! Now is it k for u ?
Virat: smiles'..yes! dad n uncle''..u both go as we have lots of work to do !
Virat's dad: wen they fight, they need us, but wen they patch up, they don't need us''!
Manvi: yes uncle! Now please''.u both go !
After they both go''..
Virat: now tel me, did u like pub? Did u enjoy pub n dance ? wil u come with me again ?
Manvi: hold on virat! Lemme answer them first, before u ask more questions!
Virat: how much more time mannu? I've been holding these questions from the time we came out of pub !
Manvi: I understood it, but so much angry that u brought me without even telling me! If I've known that, I would never let rahul cal me like that virat !
Virat: leave that! Now answer me mannu!
Manvi: I really liked pub. Infact I loved it n enjoyed a lot dancing!! I'll come with u everytime !
Virat: I told u no !! now, how r ur new friends ?
Manvi: I didn't make many friends, but rahul is very nice''.n dances wel alos
Virat: yes, I know! He'z really gud!
Manvi: so, why don't we go to pub daily ? we thought to enjoy these few months''right ?
Virat: if u want, we can go ! but wat wil mom, dad, uncle n aunty tel, if we'll go daily to pub n all those late night parties ?
Manvi: u convince my mom n dad n I'll convince ur's !!
Virat: grt !
They go n ask permission n yippee'''!! They got it !
day1 in pub [ as night1 wil sound weird..!!]:
virat n manvi go in'''.
gfriend: hey! Did u patch up ?
virat: its very common with us''don't mind !
suddenly a new girl comes n hugs virat n asks him'''" how r u virat ? after so long'''did u forget me ? "
virat: no priya'..how can I ? I was just busy to come !
priya: who's this virat ?
virat: she's my bestie, manvi''..n mannu, she's priya, my first friend in this pub !
priya: come virat! Lets dance'...
then rahul comes and virat n rahul share angry glances''..virat goes to dance floor with riya n rahul comes to manvi
rahul: hi mannu !
manvi: not mannu rahul, manvi ! please don't cal me mannu coz virat doesn't like anybody calling me like that !
rahul: its fine, manvi ! so, shall we dance ? looks at virat angrily n virat smirks''.
Manvi n rahul dance''that is'..learning dance n virat n priya dance ! everybody is completely engrossed in the dance n happy ! later, virat n manvi go home n sleep''..!
Next day''virat goes to manvi's room
Virat: how was ur second day in pub ?
Manvi: awesome !
Virat: rahul's face was must to see wen u asked him not to cal him mannu''.hahaha !!
Manvi: must say, his face was like burnt bread ! hahaha''.. see'..we r stupids ! stops laughing''.. shutup virat! He must have felt really bad''..n we r laughing abt him !!
Virat: why r u getting concerned mannu..? wats the matter ?
Manvi: nothing ! but first u tel me abt that most concerned lady in pub ?
Virat: wat ?
Manvi: that priya!
Virat: nothing mannu ! she'z just my friend n we met after long'..so, she asked me like that !
They get ready, go to clg, come back n'''.day 2 in pub :
Priya: shouts at virat who's still at the entrance'''.virat !! I'm here, come !!
Virat n manvi go there'''
Priya: soo late'''.i've been waiting for u since half an hour !
Virat: wat to do? This mannu took soo much time to get ready ! manvi beats on his head''.
Priya: why ? can't manvi come on her own ? r u her driver virat ?
Manvi: no, I can't come alone. we r bestie's n come or go anywhere together only ! if u have any problem, u better stay away from us !
Priya angrily drags virat to dance floor n virat laughs at smiling manvi''.as he knew her reaction would be the same''soo hot n happening'''.if anyone dare to say such things n calling me a driver'..OMG''completely intolerable for her !!
Rahul: wats the need to interfere in their matter manvi ?
Manvi: their matter ? it's not their, but our matter ! n I can't leave anyone insulting virat''.!
rahul: yes, it's their matter coz priya n virat love eachother n so, wateva happens btw them is their personal !
manvi: r u joking rahul''.haha ? virat doesn't love her ! who told u this ?
rahul: if he doesn't love her, why does he still dance with her even wen she called him a driver'''? Did u see'.he was not at all angry on her, instead, he's laughing ! n also''..earlier, wen he used to come to pub, he used to bring priya along with him n used to dance only with her. wen she didn't come a day or two, either he would also not come, or just sit n have drinks, but never danced with anyone else !! why was he like that if he didn't love her ?
manvi was dumbstuck hearing all these abt virat ! but still, she knew him'..so, she thought abt it for a while n then they also went to dance''...eventhough manvi was litrally dancing with rahul, her eyes were on virat n priya. This didn't go unnoticed by rahul coz he was seeing manvi only''''.
she saw priya going for drinks, so she excused herself from rahul n went to priya. Rahul got angry at this, but didn't express it ! priya just turned her face angrily as soon as she saw manvi approaching her!
manvi: wait priya ! I'm sry ! I overreacted''n I'm realy sry for that !
priya: serious tone'''it's k, I need to go !
manvi: please'''for few mins'''I wanna talk with u
priya: but I don't' need to talk to u '..
manvi: its abt virat !
priya: stays back''.u need not tel me anything abt virn, as I know him better than u''..but still I'm here to listen to u coz I wanna see ur take on virat !
manvi: lemme clarify u 1 thing ! I've not come here to qurrel with u. as far as viuren is concerned, he's my bestie n no one knows him better than me, is that clear ?
priya: hahaha !! u know virat better than me ? lets see''.she immediately calls virat n he comes !
virat's pov: something interesting is going to happen as these both are here at same place n I can enjoy it !
priya: see virat ! this girl thinks that she knows u better than me''.how funny ! virat tries to tel her that manvi is right, but''.priya starts asking questions abt virat's likes n dislikes to manvi. Manvi answers them all correctly n virat smiles at this, but priya is shocked !!
manvi: since ur all questions are completed, can I ask u just 1 ques abt virat n if u'll answer it, I'll accept that u know abt virat very well than me !!
priya: c'mmon''.ask me !
manvi: where does virat go everyday, first in morning from his house ?
priya: he's not a guy who'll go to temple''' so, he might go to gym.
Manvi: no'..he comes to my room !! I've told u that I know him better !
Priya looks at virat n he tells''.' wat can I do priya? She's my bestie since childhood ! '
Manvi: that's k. virat now u go from here.
Virat: but why should I ?
Manvi: just go'. I need to talk with priya !
Virat: oh! Wanna sort out differences ? k !
He goes''.
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