Chapter 20

hello TASians ...how r u all ?? so u all must be exicited to see me...na...u shud be ...cz im gonna update my next chappie😊... before tht thanks for all ur comments...and likes...it is very encouraging for a first timer like me😃😳...
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this  time
i loved the jeeman's  convo

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Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 17...

Maanvi sees her car and is shocked ...😲

M : hawww,...teen teen ek saath !!!! bhagwan ji kya dushmani hai aapko mere se?? 😡tyre aaj hi puncture karane the??? Vo bhi teen teen ek saath?? Ab mai ghar kaisey jau uhhh???(looking upwards)... vadhera mansion chali jau kya phirse??? Nhi nhi ...beeji gussa ho jayengi !! mai jaake kisi ko ghar drop karne bol bhi nhi sakti ...virat so raha hai aur ..viren jiju ...di ke saath hongey...!! Maanvi ..it's better ki tu bus ya auto pakad ke ghar chali jaye ..!!!... par ek bhi auto kyu nhi dikh ri?? Ohh aaj auto ki strike hai !!!😡 matlab mujhe bus mai jana padega!!😲 Ab yeh Bus stand kaha hai ??😕

She searches for bus stand and she finds it  far away from vadhera mansion...she waits for the bus but she finds none...to her destination!!she feels sum1 is watching her...she turns back n finds no one there😲...this happens two or three times      ...she thinks

" Virat Ne Sahi Kaha ..Jyada Ho Gaya Horror N Crime Stories...Aaj  Se  No Crime N  Horror  Stories"😆😆

The road was all suna suna...all empathy ...no one ...hardly few noticible people...cz it was 10:00 Pm and you all knw how chandigarh is... (imagine karlo.. )

( I knw bus service is not available so late...par plsss imagine karlo...!!! Chappal mat phenk na..!! )

M : ye bus kyu nhi aa ri hai ??? aaahh ye lo aa gyi finally !!! the bus had oly few members in it ...but the thing was that ke all were men wich went unnoticed by her...and those guys wer all rowdy ones sent by karan😡...bus comes to a halt in front of her ..and ...she climbs it...

M : bhaiya ek ...19 # cross ka ticket dena!! Kitna hua?? (to the conducter)

C : 20 rupaye...

M : KYAAA??? 😲😲20 rupayee????  Itne kam kyu bhaiya???😆 ... Ruko chutta dhundna padega... ye lo...

C : kam ?? normally toh ye jyada hota hai !!😕  (thinks) chodo aamir lagti hai!!

Maanvi sat ..in the window seat ...and was enjoying cool breezes of Chandigarh...she passes through vadhera mansion ...as it ws on the route to her house by bus...she smiles seeing the mansion...and rubs her hands together ...to create warmth...😊

Meanwhile in  here ;  virat ..was sleeping ...though not peacefully... .he had his eyes shut for a while...but a call comes ...he gets up n picks up the call...

V : hello ...

K : hello ...lagta hai so rahe the...! Tchhh ...tumhara itna chain se sona nhi banta...uth jao

V : karan...!!! Kya problem hai tumhari uh??😡

K : tchhh ...tumhari item ki problem hai 😆...vo kya hai na uski gaadi ke saare tyres puncture ho gaye ..ooops I mean ... maine kar diye so...vo bichari bus mai jaa rahi hai .😳.aur tumhe toh pata hi hai ki bus mai travel karna kitna dangerous hota hai itni raat ko...!!! 😲Bich raaste mai kuch bhi ho sakta hai !!shayad vo ghar hi na puhunche...!!tumhe ussey akele nhi chodna chahiye tha!!!...ab ye meri problem hai ya tumhari problem ye tum decide karlo ...tumhara subhchintak ...KARAN...😃

And he cuts the call...virat here gets numb...he doesn't knw wat to do ...he was sweating hearing his words...he quickly gets up runs to the hall...

Meanwhile in the hall...

Vi : (thinks ) thnk god  ki...car aayi thi maanvi ko lene ...varna ...mai ussey kabhi jane nhi deta akele ...😕😕

Jeevika tum pehele nhi bata sakti thi ...ki maanvi ko car lene aayi thi ..tumhe pata hai mai kitna darr gaya...!!

J : arey usme darne waali konsi baat hai ??😕

V : maanvi ..!! maanvi ...maanvi ... (looking for her here and there...)

Vm : ye lo uth gaye sahab jaadey...aur ye maanvi... maanvi kyu chilla raha hai !!???😕

J : maa lagta hai maanvi ki yaad aa rahi hai !! 😆😆     Vm  n J laugh...

V : bhai maanvi ...kaha hai ???? (scared)

Vi : arey vo tho chali gayi ..tu tension na le akeli nhi gyi hai ...ussey car lene aayi thi!!

J : par tum itne ghabraye hue kyu ho virat??? (tensed)🤔

V :bhaii..!! maanvi ko bachana hoga..bhai ...karan ..karan ne uske gaadi ke tyres puncture kar diye ...bhai..vo bus mai ja ri hai bhai...vo karan ne mujhe call kia tha...usne mujhe warn karne ke liye call kia ..bhai chaloo...dragging viren😭

With these words all get tensed in the house...

Vi : virat aisey kaisey ho sakta hai ?? maanvi ko car lene aayi thi ...😕     J : ha virat ...

V : par karan ne sarey tyres puncture kar diye ...tym nhi hai... chaliye bhai😭

..and  with this both the brothers went out to search manvi ...leaving the two ladies in the house tensed😕

J : ye log kya keh rahe the??? Karan... kon karan?? Kya warning??😕😕😕

Vm : jeevika ..mera mann to ghabra raha hai ...manvi ko call karo jaldi...😭

J : (all scared ...jeevika in full avatar ) uhh haa abhi karti ho...(she ws shivering) maa ..uska phone switched off hai...!!😭

Here the brothers as soon as move outside the gate of the mansion ..they see maanvi's car...they go near n see the tyres punctured...

V :bhai maine kaha tha na...karan kuch bhi kar sakta ..hai ...(he gets all worried for his love n he starts sweating)😭😭

Vi : virat ...shant ho ja..mai abhi car leke aata hu...

V : hmm...he walks a bit ahead of the gate...and sees a bus ...in which maanvi was sitting

(that's when maanvi sees vadhera mansion...but she doesn't see virat ..as he was at great distance...😭)

Virat seeing her...move far away from him... gets tensed😕..and was gonna follow the bus running..but viren came with the car ...and told him to be seated ...they wer rushing behind the bus...n virat was damn worried for maanvi...and maanvi here had no idea...tht something really bad is upto her...!!! She was enjoying the weather...leaning to the window...of the bus...

When suddenly , someone catches her shoulder and kisses her neck... she turns to see

And here...virat getting all tensed...

Vi : virat... maanvi ko kuch nhi hoga tu tension na le...😕

V : bhai ..jaldi chalayiye na...plss...(getting all restless ...tears) ...(thinks) mai tumhe kuch nhi hone dunga 😭

Vi : virat ...speed limit cross kardo kya ..bus samne hi hai ..rukh ja ..thoda...maanvi ko kuch nhi hoga..😕

The bus stops at a signal...and viren tries to catch upto the bus in this time...he ws succeeding in it...😃

Vi : virat dekh maanvi ko pata mat lagne dena ki vo khatre mai hai ..ussey normal behave karna ..aur ..karan ka gussa uspe mat nikalna ...samja...

With this the car comes to a halt and virat with out wasting anytym...rushes to the bus ,climbs and sees maanvi ...sitting alone near the window...he turns back and sees one guy was gonna approach maanvi ...but at the correct tym virat was there so he ws nt able to reach to maanvi ...he glares at tht guy...and signals him to back out...!!😡😡

He calms himself down and...goes near manvi ...catches her shoulder ...and kisses her neck...she turned😉

M : virattt!! Tumm 😕?? tumne toh mujhe dara hi diya...!!(she keeps hand over her chest to feel her heart beat 😆) virat aisey koi karta hai kya?? Uh?? (meanwhile virat sat beside her ...surrounding his arm around her)

V : im srry ..princess...(cups her face with one hand n kisses her forehead😳) mai tumhe darana nhi chahata tha...(assures himself in mind tht she is fyn n calms himself down)   

M : par tum yaha??😕

V : vo kya hai na..tumne mujhe bye nhi bola toh... bye lena aa gaya!! (smiles)  😃

M : shut up virat!!!😡

V :phir kya maanvi ...itni raat ko ..tum akeli kyu bahar nikli ..??mujhe utha diya hota...mai tumhe drop kar deta!! Tumhe pata hai ghar par sab kitna darr gaye...jab hum ne tumhari car ko ghar par hi dekha!!??😲😲

M :I knw..virat...im srry ..par mai bacchi  nhi hu...mai ja sakti hu akeli !!

V : I knw par itni raat ko bilkul nhi!! tumhe jo karna hai karo i dnt care.. bt I cannot danger my love... ok!! So next tym kuch bhi ho...tum raat ko akeli nhi jaogi ok???😡 Tum mujhe utha deti toh kya jata??😕

M : tumhari neend kharab ho jaati...!! Waisey tum baadey cute lagtey ho sotey hue...!!😉😳

V : topic change mat karo 😡..anyhw thns princess...  (she keeps her head on his shoulder and rests and he kisses her head...)ab yaad rakhna kabhi bhi raat ko akeli travel nahi karogi...samjhi ??😳 (some wat stern...but concerned)

M : hmmm...so tum mujhe yaha ghar tak drop karne aaye ho ?(still resting on his shoulder)

V : koi shak ?? 😕    M : bilkul nhi... (he pulls maanvi more closer...to him...just to make him belive that she is here with him alright😳...and maanvi just closes her eyes...n don't knw whn she dozes off...)

He sighed in relief ...He turns back to see those guys...and those were not there ...they wer gone ...they got down the next stop ...after virat climbed...they wer alone in the bus...as passengers..

Viren had long back left to vadhera mansion ...seeing maanvi safe and with virat...he went home and calm downed ...jeevika and VM ...tht it ws just a misunderstanding...n didn't nt tell thm the truth abt karan...😕😕

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lavanya_sweet2013-11-02 11:24:19