Chapter 16

hello TASians...!! im back to update an promo ...?? naaahh  this time i thought direct part kyu na dia jaaye...!! so here i have the next part of my FF ...thanks for ur lovely comments...and continue doing so...so enuff of my useless bhashaan...coming to the game ...my favourite thing was...

MY FAVOURITE PART :

this  time it is not a line or a part ...it is gesture ... 😲
i love the way virat calls maanvi princess... 😳

and there ws only one to hit the bulls eye... 😃
it is none other than ...
kulsum_virman  A.K.A.  ( kulsum.. ) atleast i hope tht is her name...🤢

congo dear 👏 ...party time for u na???
congratzzz...🥳🥳🥳

so here goes an update dedicated tokulsum_virman...enjoy dear ...😃😃


Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 14...

They reach home...virat parks the car...turns to see the jaan of his lyf who was resting on his shoulder😳...but...she was fast asleep (he kisses her forehead) he trys to wake maanvi ...but hamari mannu toh kumbkaran ki behen hai ye toh hum sab ko pata hai!! She doesnt get up...virat having left no option ..lifts her in his strong arms...and walks insyd the vadhera mansion...and he enters..and sees Vi, J and Vm sitting in d hall ...waiting for them with a birthday cake for maanvi...and as soon as he enters ...all sight move to see him ..and seeing maanvi in his arms...all get shocked + tensed ...jeevika was the first 1 to get up n run towards thm..and the two also follwd her...😲😲

J : mannu ..kya hua tujhe ...mannu ko kya hua virat???(she is still walking towards them) She starts panicking...and tears form in her eyes😭...virenji dekhiye na kya hua isey...

V ,Vm : virat maanvi ko kya hua??? (concerned)😲

And here virat ws trying to tell ..tht she is fyn ..bt jeevika already came in her full avatar...

V : bhaaabi ,bhai ..maaa!! shhhshshhh...so ri hai !! shhhsshhh chup ho jayiye ...jaag jayegi...shhshhshhh...vo ye car mai hi so gyi ..maine isse jagane ki koshish ki par ..ye toh uthi hi nhi...isiliye mai isey utha kar laya...aur aap sab ne toh melo drama shuru kar diya ...hadh hai yaar...!!!(in a soft tone)

V, J,Vm : oh phir thik hai...!!! And they walk towards the sofa again ..changing their exprssions to normal...as if nothing happnd...😆😆😆

Virat left from their ...exclaiming "weird family I have dude..uhhh..."

Virat places his princess on the bed gently... and covers her with a duvet...and adores hers face...thn kisses her forehead...and says "good night princess"...and as if maanvi heard all his talks ..she smiled in her sleep and clinged more to the duvet😆😆...virat smiles seeing this and leaves towards his room...and here in hall...V, J ,Vm...wer discussing hw they ovr-reactd ...and they laugh...bt virika ...wer doing some khusur -pusur whn Vm...says

Vm :hame bhi toh batao...

And they didnt want to hide it from maa...so they tld everything tht hw they think something is the there btwn the 2...and hw virat also likes her and evn maanvi ..bt they don't tell each othr...etc etc...after listening this virika had frowns on their forehead as they wer worried tht hw maa would react😕😕...but maa reacted in this way...😲😲

Vm : baccho same pinch...heheheh ..mai bhi yahi soch ri thi bahut dino se...par bata nhi saki ...mujhe bhi maanvi bahut acchi lagti hai...usne toh hamare virat ko jaisey badal hi diya hai...hai na..!

Vi , J : shocked + happy ...sachhii?? aapko bhi yahi lagta hai..matlab aapko koi aitrazz nhi hai??😃😃😃

Vm : nhi mujhe kya aitraaz hogi?? Agar virat khush toh mai khush aur toh aur iss baar mujhe ladki bhi pasand hai...😳

All get happy shappy and the 3 hug...and thn go to sleep...next day was a very normal day in the morning session as every one had work ...but evening it ws party tym as it ws maanvi's birthday aftr all...party sharty was in full swing bt oly family members haa...no outsiders allowed heheh😆...beeji ,badi b,chachu ,chachi,dabba..all had come..and there was lots of fun going on...but in midlle of all this two love birds wer seeking tym..but alas they find any😭...!! Finally the cake cut was coming up...maanvi ws gonna cut the cake whn ... dabba says..

D : arey di wish toh maango ...candle phir blow karo...🤢

M : oh haaa(hits her head)...she sees virat ...smiles...closes her eyes..and wishes...

" bhagwan ji ..hamesha aapne meri life mai apno ko chin liya hai mujhse..iss baar waisa mat karna...plss...agar mai virat se alag hui toh mai ji nhi paungi ..plsss virat ko hamesha mere saath rakhna ..mera humsafar banakar..pls...😳"  opens her eyes and blows the candle...cuts the cake and feeds every1 ...and all try to facial her with the cake she runs...from there some hw saving her minimal make up..on her face...😆 😉

M : chalo cake cut ho gaya na...ab mere gifts nikalo chalo...!! (commanding tone...) (all laugh at her childishness...😆 ) (this is actually me... on my birthday..!! 🤢🤢)

J : tu toh apna birthday... gift ke liye hi manati hai na...!!??    M: haa di aapko kaisey pata chala??? all laugh  🤣

J : accha hum sab ne hamare gifts pe naam nahi likha hai ...tujhe batana hai ki konsa gift kiska hai...😉

M : ok ...  J : yeh le saare gifts...!!  M: 😲hawww..itne saare ???!! Koi baat nahi mere liye hi accha hai...!!😃

M : Ok so gift no. one... she opens it and finds a beautiful photo frame ...and she says...

Wooow...this is beautiful... yeh toh pakka ..dabbe ne dia hai ...!! Hai na?? she looks at dabbu ...😛

D : smiles...  M : yesss.!!! Mera guess correct nikla...!! Thank u sooo much dabbu ...mai na isme hum teen beheno ki tasveer lagaungi ...!!🤣🤣

D : diii...!! Mai ab bada ho gaya hu...itna lamba chouda hu aapko dikhta nahi kya???  ( all laugh.. )😆😆

M : chup..!! next one...she finds a pair of diamond earings  and she quickly says with a smile...chachu chachi...!!!

Ch & C : areeyy ...Waahhh tune toh pehchaan lia...  

M : thank u ..chachu chachi .ok mai ab next khol ti hu😃

She ws eager to find virat's gift...she ws very exicted to knw wat he will give her...but wenevr she used to open a gift to her disappointment ...she used to get sumthing diff from virat's choice...😭

Next she finds an perfume ...   M: yeh toh mai sure nahi hu ...par jiju yeh aapne dia hai ???  😕

Vi : ( smiles..) aap toh james bond nikli...!!!   M : aapne dia hai ?? (shock to knw her guess ws ryt )  😲😲

Vi : nods...    M : thank u .. (smile.. )😛

Next one she opens and finds an jewellary box ...and she says ...thank u beeji aur BB ...  They smile...😊

She opens the next one and finds a bracelet in it ...and she says... " di toh yeh dene se rahi ...!! Yeh vanshika aunty ne dia hoga...!!?? Right ?"😃 (looks at  Vm ) 

Vm : haa maine dia hai ...socha yeh tumpe yeh bahut accha lagega...   M : thank u ... (and she hugs her ...)😊

She opens the next one...and finds  a party wear...

M : yeh toh bahut easy hai... di ..!! yeh di ke collection mai se hai Jo mujhe bahut pasand tha...!! Hai na?😃😃😃

J : (smiles... ) 😛  M : thank u di...!!  (she hugs her...)  and next one was very easy for her to guess before she opens it 😳...  Ok ab next one ...!!  (she sees virat...and passes a smile...virat gave her a smile ...)😊

She opens it and finds an thermocol heart ...and she gets pissd of at virat...her smile fades...yes virat had given her an thermocol wala heart...she takes it in her hand and sees it...

❤️

J : arey ...yeh kisne dia hoga...???😲  ( she asked this cz there wer many gifts on the table from maanvi's friends and it ws difficult for them to guess that it ws virat's gift😆...) maanvi tera aisa konsa friend hai jo yeh thermocol wala heart dega tujhe...!!! 🤣(all laugh... )  (maanvi's  passes glares to virat ...and virat smiles...😊)

M : di aaj ke liye bahut gifts khol liye😡...bass ho gaya...mujhe kaam yaad aaya hai ...virat chalo tumhe tumhari  schedule batani hai ..aur phir who meeting ke bare mai discuss karna hai..!!  (with this virat worries a bit as he knows sherni is ready to pounce on him...maanvi leaves to room... )

J : areey issey kya hua ??? virat tum jaoo issey koi important baat karni hai na...!!

V :hmm bhabi (thinks .. ) mujhe hi pata hai ..kya baat karni hai ...mera murder hone wala hai..!! (he goes )🤢🤢

In the room ...

V : kya baat karni hai maanvi ??    M: (passes a glare.. ) virat yeh kya hai ??  (showing the thermocol heart)

V : (smiles.. ) mera dil hai maanvi ...!!!😆   M : tumhara dil?? ...my foot🤢 (And she throws the heart.. )

V : virat catches it... Areey maanvi sambhal ke ...!! Mera dil hai ...tut jayega...!! (smirks.. )😉

M :  tum mazak band karoge ???  maine socha tha...koi accha gift do ge tum mujhe ..par tumne kya dia uhh ??yeh thermocol ??? and she continued blabbering...virat ws enjoying all this...and at a point he gets irritated ...and says...😵

V : maanvi shut up yaar ...!! Bas karo ...!! Pause button hai ya nahi ??(now he starts walking forward and she starts walking backwards...) tumne kaisey soch lia ki mai tumhe yeh dunga ?? I mean are u serious ??? tum itna kuch bol gayi ..lekin common sense bhi toh lagana chaiye na ?? 😕(now she hits the wall... ) (virat in a romatic tone...😳😳keeping one hand on the wall blocking her frm one syd ) matlab ...tumhe sacchi mai laga ki mai apni princess ko yeh stupid sa gift dunga??(maanvi nods... )...idiot.!!! 😡Sab ke saamne mai kaisey apna gift du ?? thoda toh dimaag use karna chahiye..!! 😉

M : (slow voice ) toh gift kaha hai??   V : yeh lo ... ( giving her the gift from other hand...) maanvi takes it and opens it...finds a platinium chain with a pendant of pearl... And she goes awww...!!!! She sees virat and says thank you...(she ws admiring the chain and virat ws admiring her.. 😳😳) then she asks...

M : yeh toh tum mujhe niche bhi toh se sakte the...phir kyu nahi dia???

V : hmm de sakta tha...par tumhe pehna toh nahi sakta tha na sabke saamne (smiles)??😃 So maine prank khela aur ...teer nishaane par laga..!!! (she blushes...virat takes the chain from her and himself ties it around her neck standing right in front of her and staring her eyes...) lo ho gaya...!! (kisses her forehead..) happy birthday once again princess...!!  (maanvi looks down and blushes..) ab blush kyu kar rahi ho ??😕😕😕

M : tum nahi samjho ge...!!(looking down)   V : (smirks) ok...as u say..!! kaisa laga gift ??

M : I loved it...   V : hmm...thanks ...par tumhe return gift dene ki tameez hai bhi ya nahi ?? 😡😡

And a voice from down comes...   Vm : viraaat..maanvi...beta khaana lag gaya hai..jaldi aa jao ...kaam baad mai kar lena...!!   🤢🤢

Maanvi looks at virat ... V : (making a irritated face.. ) galat timing...!!!   😭😭

M : (giggles..) aayi aunty (loudly)

V : tum kaha chali ?? mera return gift ??  ... Maanvi quickly kisses his cheek and runs of down stairs and here virat was in shock..he catches his cheek and smiles like a idiot ...☺️

Dinner was over..and choudary's wer going to leave...with maanvi..

M :thns every 1 ..mera birthday aap sabke saath manakar mujhe bahut accha laga...she takes blessings from VM 😃

They leave from there...she reaches home and she closes the door of her room...and fatak se searches for her phone ..and calls virat ...

M : hello...

Virat was in his room ...with the casual dress playing on his laptop sitting on the bed😆...as soon as he sees maanvi's call ..he keeps the laptop aside and picks up the call...

V : haan ji boliye...

M : im sorry ...

V : sorry ??  sathiya gyi ho kya??😲😲😲

M : viraaat...nhi im srry kyunki ..aaj purre din tumse acche se baat nhi ho paayi isiliye...tum toh soch rahe ho ge ki ..aaj hamare relationship ka first day aur mai already tumhe ignore mar ri hu...aur toh aur maine tumhe itna daant bhi dia...!!!🤢

V :maanvi break maaro...maine aisa kuch bhi nhi socha...dimaag ke ghode dauda na koi tumse sikhe...!!😡😡

M : par phir bhi...

V : uhh...maanvi tum sorry bolti hui acchi nhi lagti...

M : accha ??? (seeing her face in mirror)😕 V : ab aaine mai dekhna bandh karo...!!!!

M : ahhh!! Tumhe kaise pata????????    V : voh kya hai na mujhe tumhari choti se choti baat pata...!!😃😃

M : ( blush ) acccha😳    V :aur ha...blush karte hue toh tum aur bhi acchi lagti ho..!!!

Maanvi not able to handle more of him...says byeee, good nyt and fatak se cuts the call with out waiting for his reply...😆😆

V : (seeing his phone) (innocent xpression..)  areyyy kaat kyu diya??? Anyhw good nyt princess...n smiles😊

VIEW NOTE - pg 60

ok tht's it  ...wanna knw wat next ?? stay tuned to Virman : Tere Aane Se ...

ok so thats it for today's update...do tell me how was it...and yea dnt forget to participate in the game ...!!! ok so see u soon with next chapiee's promo ...till then byeee...see u soon and pls shower the same love u all used to...!!! 😳😳

lavanya_sweet2013-11-02 11:20:39