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hello TASians...im back ...and u shud be happy that...im here with a update...
so first of all as usual i will thank alll of u for liking my work and appreciating it so much ...thank you all ...!!!
so coming to the game ...

my favourite line was...
"M :tum ladder thodi ho jo mai tum par chadu...!!! "

and yes u all guessed it right...
the winner is nrithyao  A.K.A. Nrithya  !!!! πŸ₯³

party time for her guyz...
congratzzz nrithya... πŸ˜›

ok so enough of this nonsense of mine here goes an update dedicated to

NRITHYA...


Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 11...


Virat reaches home...

V: ye kya ho gaya tujhe viraat !! kya ho gaya hai ?? mai  aaisey hi gussa ho gaya ...!! aanvai uspe chilla dia ussey kitna bura laga hoga...par mai gussa toh iss liye hua kyunki mai uski care karta hu...usko thodi si bhi taqleef ho mai ye bardassh nhi kar sakta ...koi usey chott pahunchaye ye main hone hi nhi  dunga..i care for u ...I love...

Virat... ye kya keh raha hai tu??? Love??? Tujhe yaad nhi ki pichli baar tere saath kya hua tha??tu phirse uss gali ki taraf kaise mudd sakta hai????tu pyar mai sirf sirf dhoke khayega virat ...teri kismet itni acchi nhi ke tujhe pyaar mile ...pyar vyaar sab jhut hai... aisa kuch nhi hota ye tu samaj le acche se...pyarr ye shabdh kabhi tere muhh pe nhi aana chahiye...!!!pyarr sirf ek dhoka hai ..aur kuch nhi!!

Virat was broken after wat maya did to him..he had lost his trust on love ...he thought tht love is just a game for every1 ...it doesn't exists at all...he had forgotten the meaning of it ...wat it meant ...hw pure it is...everything...and he thought evry1 one wud oly play with his heart as it is a toy for thm and he wudnt let this happen at any cost ..!!😭😭😭

Now virat's old memories were back to him...he started thnking  all the things...he was about to cry!! Bt Viren enters..😭

Vi : virat ...( virat tries to hide his tears..)  koi baat nhi viraat behne de!! Maine suna...sab kuch ...virat mai toh tujhe kuch jyada bolna nhi chahta ...par ek baat yaad rakh..ek baar jo ho ...jaruri nhi hai ki vo hi har baar ho...! Tujhe maya ne dhoka diya iska matlab ye nhi hai ki manvi bhi degi!!

V : shocked...bhai !!... aapko kaise pata??😲😲

Vi : bhai hu mai tera ...mujhe sab pata hai...jab bhi tum dono saath hote ho tum bahut hi alag insaan ban jatey ho...dono bahut khush dikhte hai...tere chehere pe jo smile aati hai na vo maine aaj tak MAYA ke saath nhi dekhi ...jab maine, maa ne , aur jeevs ne...tum mai change dekha na ..manvi ke aane baad ...hum sabko toh tabhi hi pata chal gaya tha...ki tu uske liye kabhi na kabhi feel jarur karega...!!par humne ye baat abhi tak maa ke saath share nhi ki ..par mai yakeen ke saath keh sakta hu ki vo bhi yahi sochti hai ...aur virat ...trust karna seekh ...maanvi waisi nhi hai ...voh un sari ladkiyon se alag  hai ...maya ne jo kia uss se tu maanvi ko judge mat kar...maanvi bahut hi simple si ladki hai ...keh lo ki aaj ke zaamane ki soch ke saath bahut hi suljhi hui ladki hai ...uska dil kitna saaf hai ye uske aankho se jhalakta hai ...maanvi jaisi zinda dil waali ladki maine aaj tak nhi dekhi ...chahe kuch bhi situation ho hamesha uske lips par ek lambi si smile hoti hai ...aur iss smile ko dekhte hi saari duniya smile kar jaaye viraat...uska toh shayd ek hi maqsad hai zindagi mai ...khushi failana iss duniya mai ... tu badal gaya hai... maanvi KE AANE SE ...trust kar virat ...apne dil par ...apne aap par ...MAANVI par...!!πŸ˜›

Virat tries to understand what his bro had said to him...he goes to the bed ...catches his head and closes his eyes...the first thing he sees is ...

MAANVIπŸ˜›

He opens his eyes faces viren ...

V : agar ...

J: devar ji... agar magar kuch nhi...meri behen tumhe kabhi hurt nhi karegi ...mai iski guarantee deti hu!!😊

V : (confused...looks at viren)πŸ˜•

Vi :ye bhi hamare saath hai!!!

V : ...par voh bhi muhse pyar karti hai ya nhi???

J : karti hai na  !!πŸ˜ƒ

VV bros :tumhe kaise pata??😲

J : (tries to hide the truth...stammering) mujhe kaise pata ...!!! mujhe kaise pata...haan ..haan...meri...meri 🀒🀒..meri  behen hai vo ...mujhe nhi pata hoga toh aur kisey hoga?? ...(casual attitude) waise bhi ek baar usne bataya tha ki usey virat bahut sweet lagta hai...

Vi : ab tujhe apne feelings ke baarey mai pata chal hi gaya hai toh ussey kab batay ga??

V : ab nhi bhai pehle mai confirm karlu ke vo bhi mujhse pyarr karti hai phir ...tab tak aap dono apna muh mai taale laga lijiye...!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

J ,Vi : hmm jaisi teri marzi...

They walkout with this...

V:  kitna pagal tha mai ...oppose karne chala tha apne second chance ko...agar aaj bhai nhi hote tho mai tho apne feelings ko daba kar ..kab ka unka murder kar chukka hota🀒...mai wait karunga sahi tym ke liye ...sahi waqt ke liye...i love you manvi ...mai tumse bahut pyar karta hu ... pata  nhi kab tum mere aankho se dil mai utar gayi...mujhe toh yeh bhi nhi pata chala kab tum mere zindagi mai aayi aur mere saare dard ko ko mita diya...mere saarey zakhm mita diye ...saare dard mujhe bhulane par majboor kar mere zindagi mai khushi ki leher la kar rakh di...kaash mai tumhe is waqt bata pata ...ki mai kitna khush hu...!!kash maya ne mere saath vo sab nhi kia hota toh aaj mai tumpe iss tarah se doubt...anyhw bottom line is I LOVE YOU...(with slightly moist eyes...his eyes shining a bit)

One month passes by and virat is still waiting for ..the right time...though he has noticed changes in maanvi...he nw knew for sure that he also has the same effect on her wich she has on him...he noticed her whnevr he was close by her...she use to get nervous etc etc...On the other hand maanvi ..was also feeling the same ..bt both wer nt expressing it...virat ws scared tht wat if maanvi says no...and maanvi was scared tht wat if virat says no...!!

Maanvi told all this to jeevika giving promise nt to tell any1(remember she tries to hide the truth ..while virat ws trying to understand his feelings?? ) and she oviously tld all to viren (she told this to viren after they left from there) ...actually nt tld..she enacted...bt she gave promise tht he will nt tell it to virat... nt evn enact...and viren also didn't tell  or enact it bt wrote...it to virat...!!now virat toh knew ..that maanvi also liked him bt maanvi tht poor soul didn't knw tht evn virat liked her..!!...

V: maanvi ...mai tumhare zindagi ke sabse khubsurat din par tumhe bataunga ki mai tumse kitna pyar karta hu...yahi ki tumhare bina ji nhi sakta...mai tumhe kabhi hurt nhi karunga...kabhi nhi!!.bas 1 din ka intezaar...❀️

NEXT DAY...

Virat doing something on his lappy sitting on his cabin couch...and nt seeing manvi ...and manvi sitting besyd him

V : maanvi ..voh mr.mehra ki files lana...aur ha 3-4 baje tak ready ho jana ...succes party mai jana hai.

M :hmm ..virat ...par voh mr.ashish ki dates ka kya kare?

V :cancel them ...or if possible postpone..

M : vo log postpone ke liye nhi manenge...

V : CANCEL IT...

M : ok as u wish ...par agar tum voh accept karte ho toh tumhara profit hai...

V :kya??voh kaisey??😲

M : voh unki beti ...ms shanaya...tumpe lattoo jo hai!!! So u c ..tumhara profit hi profit hai ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

V : MAANVI...😑

M : accha srry srry mazak kar ri thi...πŸ˜†(giggles) waise tum pyar iss shabd se itna durr kyu bhagte ho??

V : mai durr nhi bhagta...pehle bhagta tha...(lookin in her eyes) par ab aur nhi...

M : accha (low voice...)

V :hmm...tum batao tum itna pyar pyar kyu kar ri ho aaj?? πŸ˜•Tumhe pyar toh nhi hua...(pulling her close by her wristπŸ˜‰)

M :gulps ..at their sudden closeness (then look look hawa hawa)

V : batao na tumhe kisi se pyar hua hai??(slow husky voice)

M :nods in yess and smiles  (unknowingly)πŸ˜‰

V : hua hai?????

M :comes back from her trance ...NHI!! Mujhe kisse pyar hoga ..?? 😲pagal ho gaye ho kya ...chep kahi ke...nhi bilkul nhi... πŸ˜‘😑    Virat smirks...

V :accha chodo ...jao aur files lao...     she goes away from there...

4 : 00 pm...

V : manvi ready ho ya nhi...???  Shouting sitting in the driving seat...and he horns again and again...😈

M :ha bas ho gaya... she comes out...😑

She was wearing red colour gown ...the gown was very plain with out any design on it though she was looking drop dead gorgeous... and her simple diamond earings,  a thick bracelet with a silver clutch added more beauty...her hair tied into a simple loose bun in which some hair slipped out to her face and some till neck ...adding more naiveness ...she was looking stunning  ..virat was stunned seeing her but he controlled staring at her like a owl πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰as he wanted to avoid the awkwardness...but ovio apne hero ki dictionary mai control naam ka shabd kaha hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†???!!!!!  she comes n sits in the car besyd the driving seat...

maanvi's complete attire...

https://trendseve.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/03/fancy-clutches.jpg

virat's attire...


After staring her virat says...

V : ...maanvi ab kya fayda mere itne tayaar hone ka...😲waha pe is handsome ko koi  dekhaga bhi nhi.... sabki nazar handsome ko chod uske saath waali beautiful par hogi...πŸ˜›...u look gorgeous...tell me wat's the need to look so beautiful..??? 😑(pouting like a kid)πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ

M : thns (smiling+ blushing😳) waisey dnt worry ek ki nazar sirf tumpe hogi      

   MS. SHANAYA...!!!!!😈

V :maanvi!!!!  (irritated ...making face like a kid)  😡

M : awww tum aisey badey cute lagtey ho.. πŸ˜›..aisey hi raha karo ...(pulling his cheeks)πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

V: thnkss...partner...  par uss shanaya ka naam mat lena...I just wish uski taang tut jaaye aur vo waha na ho ..uske ghar par hi baiti rahe...!!!!!!😈😈

M : hawww thts so mean...!!   V : I knw !! (says with a wide smile ) chale ??             

M : haaa...(excitedly )

They reach the success party ...

wanna know wat's next??? to know stay tuned to Virman FF :Tere Aane Se...

ok so that's it for this part !!! quiet long one naa...!! thanks to my free time...πŸ˜†
do tell me how was the update...important for me...!!!
and yea ...participate in the game...!! think of sumthin different...like the line wich didnt catch anyone's eye...thn may be u cud be the next one...!!!
ok so till then bye...take care...and keep loving me...till...the next update...!!😳

lavanya_sweet2013-11-02 11:16:08

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