Chapter 11

hello u all lovely people...im back ...and thankfully this time with a good news...my lappy recoverd and tht is oly becz of ur all prayers i guess!!! 😆😆 so first of all thanks for all ur lovely comments on previous part...i m really touched...!!! 😭  thnks for ur co operation ...waiting for my lappy to recover...!!!!  so enuff of me telling ...im here not to update promo but part 9 ...

so here it is...


Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 9 ...

Virika marriage day : maanvi dressed up jeevs as a bride ...designed by jeevs oly ( fashion designer hone ka kamal u c!! )And she was doing last moment touch ups...!!

J : mannu mai ye kar lungi tu ja ke khud taiyaar ho ja plsss...

M : di ok ..ok ...mai abhi ja ri hu..

she went and came out in a outfit which jeevika had designed for her specially for  marriage

J : mannu tu pari lag ri hai!!!!

M : par di aapse khubsurat nhi!! Jiju toh dekhte hi FLAT!!!!

J : blush blush and blush!!!!!!!  ☺️

M : aaayyyeee!!!! Accha chalo mai apka BP aur rise nhi karungi chidhake!! 😆😆.DI !!!

J : hmm

M: aaj aap chali jaugi!!!😭😭

she wanted to avoid this topic ...actually both wanted to but maanvi cudnnt

J : (teary eyes) mannu😭😭

M : DII ...mai toh NY se yaha isliye aayi thi ki aapse mil paoo.aur hamesha aapke ssath rahu...par ab aap jaa rahe ho...kismet ko shayd yahi manzur hai di!! Hum alag ho jayenge!!😭

J : maannuuu!! "HUM KABHI ALAG NHI HONGE" ...😭 😃

M : promise!!! Pakka wala

J : ha pakka wala !!!😃

Beeji : barat aa gyi hai beta!! jeevika aaj tu bahut sundar lag ri hai!! (teary eyes) she hugs her!!!😭

M : aaeee...di rona mat eyeliner kharab ho jayega😭😃 !!! itni mehnat se lagaya hai!!!😆😆

Dulhan ko niche le aayiye!!!!! Said pandit ji...

Virens heart was racing...he saw jeevika ...she was looking beautiful than he had imagined as he had always seen her in westerns..he had not imagined she wud look equally beautiful in Indian!!!!!😛 He smiled at jeevika...Jeevika lowered her eyes seeing viren and blushed  ( our blush Queen u c!!!! 😳😳😳)

All the eyes at the hall were at the bride or at the groom...but their wer two souls looking at each othr instead bride or groom...our virat and manvi ovio!!!!Virat saw her and ws mesmorized by her beauty ... he had always seen her in westerns...he was speech less...Maanvi saw him and just smiled widely... aakhir dono partners the...😉

The three weeks tym had bought them very close to each othr...they use to mostly hang out wid each other..as there was no work load ( remember they r on holiday due to Bro "Sis marriage??😃)they shared a gr8 bond and virat had changed a lot ...and this didn't go unnoticed by VM ,VI and J ...virat had alredy forgotten MAYA...he didn't evn realize whn manvi walked in his lyf and changed up everything...but both were still unknown of this...😕

The marriage ceremonies wer performed...and the ceremonies wer abt to complete..bt maanvi vanished sumwhere...!!!😲

Virat searched for her he didn't find her..he got tensd...!!😕

Pj: shaadi sampan hui!!bado se aashirwadd lo!! (they took blessings)

Virat went there n stood bt his eyes were seacrching maanvi!! ( he didn't knw y??😃) and she came from sumwhre and stood besyd jeevika!!!😲

Viren got down frm the stage and went towards his shoes...! And pufff...his shoes had vanished...!!😆😆

Vi: areeyyy!! Meri jutte maine jutte toh yaha pe hi rakhe the...!!😲

M : ha jiju !! apne toh yaha  pe  hi rakhe the ..toh phir kaha gaye!!!! ( suppressing her laugh)

VV bros : both understand...and hit their forehead.!😆😆!! ...Maaannnvviii!!😲😡

M : haaa 😳 🤔(innocently )

VV bros : keen their eyes !!

M : PAISEY DO JUTTE LO!!!!!

ALL : laugh !!!!!!!!!😆😆

Vi : maine kaha tha na tujhe jutte ka khayl rakhne !!! (hitting virat's shoulder)😡😡

And then ...maanvi pls de do na...said virat!!!

M : ek condition pe!!

VV bros : KYA??

M :paise do!!!

V: accha chalo !! de diye!!

M : (thinking)  itne jaldi man gaya😲... yeaaa!!! I win!!! she said..

She starts dancing...virat admiring!!!😳

Vi : ha tum jiti!!!chal paise de virat!!

V: ye lo maanvi!!

M : thns...meri di ke devar!!!!! (sticking tounge out)😛

V: u welcome !! ab jutte !!

M : maine jutte...

V: di ke chair ke niche chupaaye hai!! (whispers in her ear)

M : (shocked!!!)😲

M : di ke chair ke niche hai!!!! (In slow and clam voice like she is lost sumwhere... seeing virat )

Viren sees the jutte over there and wears it!!...he was going to thank maanvi bt sees both virman lost in each othr...!!

Vi: jeevs ...waha dekho!! (whispers in ears)

J : dekh hi ri hu ...

Both laugh...slightly..😆😆

M : tumhe kaisey pata??

V: bas aisey hi!!

M : phir tumne paise kyun diye mujhe??🤔🤔  Tum toh jutte aise hi le sakte the!!😕

V : tum haraane ka dil nhi kia ..!! isliye khud haar gaya!!...

M : hw sweet partner!! ( wide smile )😃

V: thns ...

Both lost in each othrs eyes...thn beeji calls maanvi ...for bidaai

Every 1 criesss a lot ...especially jeevs and maanvi!!!

M : di!!! Mat jau na!!😭

J : crying😭😭😭

M : jiju mujhe promise karo ki di ke aankho mai ek bhi aansu nhi aayega aaj ke baad!!

Vi: I promise saali sahiba!!!😃

Viren jeevika sit in caar and drive towards home ...towards a new future!!

Virat wantd to speak with maanvi so he stayed back ...

V : maanvi pls rona bandh karo!!

M : nhi partner tum nhi samjhoge!!😭😭😭

V: nhi mai samajta hun!!!

M: chup tum nhi samajte!!😭😭

After sometym virat consoles maanvi ...and everything is back to normal..

V: maanvi do din baad se kaam pe aa jana ok??

M: hmm k...😭😭(weeping slowly..and wiping her tears...and red turned nose...)

V : chalo mai chalta hun!!

M : hmm..byeee!! di ka khayal rakhna!!🤢

V : hmm meri amma!!  mai jao??

M : ha jau na maine konsa kaid karke rakha hai tumhe??

V : shakes his head in negative!! Tum kabhi nhi sudhrogi!!

M: sudhar na chati bhi nhi!!😃

They do a friendly syd hug ...and he runs to home!!!

wanna knw wat next ?? so stay tuned to Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...

so thats it for now...pata hai thoda sa short tha par kaam chala lena  ..!!!will update next part soon...do tell hw was the update...ur opininos very important for me...!!! critisicm most welcome...so till then bye...n keep loving me the way u all r...😳

lavanya_sweet2013-11-02 11:13:43