Chapter 1

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Hi friends, this is my first attempt to write a story, I dont know whether it is going to be short or fan fiction, but hope you will enjoy and forgive me if there are any mistakes. I had posted half of this story on MED and my user name is lesh85 there.  I thought of posting it too there, people who have read that story there,will know.

Here goes - My story is somewhat similar to the show, but I have changed it where the shyam khushi relationship takes place and you will see a devoted anjali as  a wife in the beginning and later the most strongest and wise, fair Anjali, who never loses her calm even when the shyam's betrayal hit her as a storm.

Brief

Khushi is working in RM to train Lavanya, but she is not yet in love with ASR, keeps her  head high all the time and already liked by everyone at RM including Mami (she is not a taunting person like in the show but talks in the same style HHBB) and creep shyam is staying as PG in GH cheating both khushi's family aswell as Raizada family

(Khushi is not in love with him yet in this story (or thats  what she thinks) because the kind of insults, defaming her character in lucknow in public,  I felf a self respected will not realize so early to fall in love with such a man so easily, he has to earn her love  but she is greatful to him heart to heart for helping her babuji for hospital treatment thats it but Arnav is subsconsciously feels something for her, but he is not aware of that fully)

INDEX
PROLOGUE PAGE 1
CH - 1   PAGE 1
CH 2     PAGE 2
CH 3     PAGE 3
CH 4  TEASER UP PAGE 7
CH 4 PAGE 8 (ASR ROMANCE OVERDOSE)
CH 5 A, B C  PAGE 11
CH 6 A & B, C PAGE 13
CH 7 PAGE  15
CH 8 PAGE 15 (18+ PART ON BLOG)

PROLOGUE


Shyam -  Buaji I think we should not delay anything because I feel Babuji is very sad, he wants to get her daughter Khushi married quickly, and for me self respect is very important, I cant stay here for long esp the marriage talks are going on. You should tell her your decision and ask her whether she is ready?


At that time, khushi is just behind the door,and she hears everything.  Somehow she did not want to marry him or anyone at present, being an adopted child, she wants to fulfill her duties towards the family.


She enters the house.  Buaji calls her, hey Titalia,  I want to talk to you about something.  Look we all have decided to get you married to Shyamji,  as whatever  has happened in Lucknow, no decent guy will marry you. And your babuji is also very sick, for his wish you have to agree what do you say. 


Khushi - Buaji, whatever you elders decide, I will not disagree to it, but before that just for few minutes I want to talk to Shyamji alone.  After that if you tell me to get married to me today I will do it surely.


Shyam - why not Khushi, tell me where we can go, Buaji interrupts saying shyam babua take her to some near by restaurant, she will like it.


Both goes to a posh restaurant as shyam insisted , (he wanted to show off his wife's money and spending) both talk for a while  (it will be in flash back later what they talked)  and conversation ended with A HARD SLAP ON SHYAM'S CHEEK, KHUSHI SCREAMED DONT YOU DARE SHYAM MANOHAR JHA, YOU, THE USELESS/SPINELESS HUSBAND OF ANJALI, You dont deserve her at all, she is divine soul, get out of her  life you cheat.


Please let me know your opinions to continue or not.  Thanks. 

laksh652014-04-09 21:32:55

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