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Chapter 11 - Neil's Secret Members Only Matured

Published On Saturday,Dec 09, 2023 07:37 AM GMT-07:00

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Gold.Abrol
GOLDIE ABROL @Gold.Abrol 4 months ago Loved it dear 😍 Awesome update πŸ˜ƒ Neil had done way beyond than Maya has expected & this meet has made a huge turn in their relationship now. ... Good that finally they are together πŸ˜„
Ashwin is really getting quite interesting πŸ€” he has layers but his back story about his personal life will be waiting for that to be revealed in later parts
Last & most important highlight was the investigation & I am happy that they are nearly catching it & now it is important as they have a vital vedio proff but still churning of wheels are on
Waiting for more regarding this new mysterious character stealing things
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon πŸ€—
naaheean
naaheean @naaheean 4 months ago This is just marvellous..........πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ.... You deserve much more appreciation than all these emotions for the twists, cliffhangers & the much awaited reunion of Neil-Maya here in this chapter.
You have become exceptionally expert in blending extremely thought-provoking and roller-coster emotional experiences in your write-ups. I told you just in the last chapter about my intuition regarding there could be another angle of this murder mystery and also that you're gonna surprise us once again. And, you proved me & my opinion about you as a writer absolutely right...You are just a god-gifted remarkable writer and I'm really feeling glad to choose and read all of your stories in the first place whenever I got any chance.
ruru_00
ruru_00 @ruru_00 4 months ago THE MUCH AWAITED REUNION😍😍 all the angst leading up to this, it was like sweet homecomingβ™₯️ it was well written, could feel their happiness as well as relief and the still lingering pain for what they had been through.

STILL haven’t been able to guess who it might have been and my curiosity just keeps growing.
Brava la mia autrice😚
Satrangi_Curls
ranibowsprimkls @Satrangi_Curls 4 months ago OMG!!! This twist and the cliffhanger!!! Kya baat hai Aniiii!!! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

What was Neil hiding? Will have to read it again!

Maya and Neil are finally together 🀩🀩🀩 ahaaa!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

Ashwin bhi kisi mystery se kam nahi hai, kya soch raha hai ye.. what hurdle for his marriage? MJ?

This mysterious person putting things in pocket, ye koun hai? Kya superb chapter likha hai!! Can't wait for the next one!! 😭😭😭

Sheetal aur Gaurav dono ko kaye angles mile explore karne ke liye, interesting!

Thanks for the PM!
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