Chapter 17

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armaan slowly touched his burning cheek, not knowing what just happened, as he began staring into mallikaz cold, angry evil eyez, everyone gasped as they looked upon the interesting scene

nandu: veeru, what just happened???? yaar y did she slap him

veeru (shocked beyond belief): yaar,i thought women were hard to understand b4 but now . . . my god! I swear to u, im never gonna get a gurl friend!

armaan lightly rubbed hiz cheek,as he began to realize wht happened, he then began to get angry, how cud she slap him, he did nuthing wrong!

armaan: mallika!!!!!!!(raging with anger)

mallika: (being sarcastic): what happened armaan??? did it hurt???? YOU DESERVED IT!!!! ALL I DO IZ GIVE YOU MY LOVE AND U . . ..U GIVE ME BETRAYAL!!!!!
(mallika said this as she stared directly at jassi, as tearz once angain filled into her eyez)

mallika walked upto jassi, who waz still shocked at wht mallika just did

mallika: jassi, u did this to me, u r the reason me and armaan are this far apart today! ITS U!!!!! ( tearz fell down mallikaz eyez)

jassi: mallik . . .

mallika: JASSI SHUT UP!!!!!

jassi was shocked, y did mallika think this waz her fault??? wut did she do dat waz soo wrong??? jassi waz confused, all she did waz care for armaan az a friend, iz dat soo wrong???

mallika: jassi, today ull get wut u deserve as well!

malllika raized her hand and waz abt to slap jasssi, when sumone from behind stopped her, it waz armaan!

armaan: DOnT U DARe! DONT U DARE SLAP JASSI!!!!

mallika turned around, and faced armaanz angry face, mallika cud feel herself trembling

armaan then did sumthing dat no man wud ever do . . . . HE SLAPPED MALLIKA

mallika fell to da ground, bursting into tearz

pari saw this and waz shocked, (she just came bk from da bathrrom, still upset,)

pari ran to mallikaz aid

pari: MALLIKA!!! omg r u alrite, baby stand up
(pari waz shaking with shock as she helped mallika up)

pari luked at armaan very angry

pari: Armaan!!! how dare u slap mallika!!! doznt she mean anythhing to u!!!

armaan luked at pari

armaan: ya she doz, she meanz a MISATKE M-I-S-T-A-K-E that i dread ever doing

mallika sttod up and staared at armaan, she waz lost as more tearz ran down her eyz, she had a plain dead expression

jassi luked at armaan, she cudnt believe armaan wud do sumthing soo awful, she felt as if her image of armaan had shrunk

the 3 gurlz(maithlee, maria, nazreen) luked at armaan with pride, they felt armaan did the rite thing by slapping that witch

nandu and veeru just stood there with no care of whoz wrong whoz rite, they just wanted to enjoy the scene while it lasted

pari luked at armaan in disgrace
she then set her eyz on mallika

pari: mallika, sweetie, lets go, hez not worth it!

mallika luked at armaan one last time as she walked off with pari, still experssion less and quiet, she waz like a zombie

raj, who waz behind the crowd of pplz walked upto armaan

raj: ARMAAN!!!! R U IN UR SENSEZ DO U KNO WUT U DID!!!!!!! (raj waz totally surprised by the scene as everyone else waz)

armaan: i am raj, i kno wut i did, and i wud have done it again, if given da chance

raj luked at armaan in horror, and thought saying anything else waznt going to help, because armaan waz dead fixed on the thought he waz rite

armaan glanced around the crowd of pplz luking for jassi, he began to walk and luk for her

raj waz following armaan

raj: armaan wat r u doing??? who are u luking for????

armaan turned to face raj

armaan: raj, i need to find jassi, i need to tell her that im sorry

raj waz like OMG R U OKAY

raj: armaan!? YAAR U SLAPPED MALLIKA AND U WANNA SEE IF JASSIZ OKAY????? R u ALRITE TODAY, DO I NEED TO CALL DA PEREMIDCZ??? ( raj waz serious abt the permidcs part)

armaan shacked hiz head in disbelif

armaan: RAj!!! yaar i thought u wud understand of all pplz, jassi iz my FRIEnD! i care abt her, god only knowz wut she mite be thinking rite now!

raj luked at armaan suspciously and very steadly

raj: armaan, do . . .do . . .do u like her???

armaan still luking for jassi

armaan: like who raj???

raj: u kno????

armaan: no i dont raj

raj: jassi

armaan turned around to face raj

armaan: WAT???

raj: u heard me

armaan: common yaar we r just FRIENDS do i have to spell it out for u

raj: r u sure???

armaan: POSITIVE

raj didnt say anything else

armaan: raj excuse me, i gotta go find jassi

with dat armaan ran off, as raj stood behind left with worry and fear of armaanz true feelings .   . . . . .

meanwhile on skool grounds


jassi waz practically running, she wanted to get away, she didnt kno y, but she felt if she had to face armaan, she didnt kno wut shed do . . . .

armaan waz on da skool grounds now

armaan: JASSI!!!!!!

armaan luked around and cudnt see her, he kept calling her name out

armaan: JASSI!!!!

armaan: where cud she be???

armaan then turned around and saw jassi!!!

jassi waz running twords the bus stop, armaan began to run after her, to stop her, to make her understand


meanwhile at the gurlz bathrrom

pari waz handing mallika sum tissuez, who waz back to her sensez now

pari: sweetie, forget him, hez not worth it, hez a lozer, how cud he do dat to u!

mallika luked at pari, who waz still yabbering along abt armaan, and how obnoxious and insenstive he iz

mallika then luked at the mirror in da bathroom, as she saw her tearz and wiped them off gently, she then thought to herslef

mallika: jassi one day thez very tearz will be coming down ur eyez . . . .




outside skkoll grounds


jassi began to walk now, she felt that she waz far far away from armaan now, she cud relax, just then sumone grabbed her arm

jassi waz yanked to face the person

jassi (shocked): ar . . .ar . . .arm . . . .armaan

armaan studied jassiz expression and smiled

armaan: jassi, its me

jassi: luked at armaan, and then her arm, which armaan waz holding ever soo tightly

jassi pulled her arm free, and luked at armaan

armaan luked on as jassi pulled her arm, and luked shocked

armaan: jassi, u dont think that i waz wrong do u???

jassi luked at armaan

jassi: armaan, i really dont kno wut to think . . . .

armaan grabbed jassiz shoulderz

armaan: jassi! pplz i did it for u! i cudnt stand by as mallika slapped u!

jassi luked at armaan very sorrowfully, yet happily as she realized he did this for her . . .

jassi (smiling): fine ill forgive u, but only if u work twice as hard on our project

armaan(smiling): if i dont . . .???

jassi: then I WILL NEVER FORGIVE U!!!

armaan(chuckling): how cudnt u forgive a sweet person like me??? Embarrassed

jassi: do u want to try me?????

armaan: No!! jassi, no, please forgive me, i dont want our friendship to end, ur the only one dat understands me . . . .

armaan luked steadily at jassi, jassi began to understand armaan a bit more, as she heard him say this

jassi: fine i forgive u!

armaan smiled, and he grabbed jassi and gave her a BIG HUG

jassi waz shocked, but then gave in, and smiled

armaan then let go and luked at jassi

armaan: jassi, friends for ever?????

jassi began to think

armaan(wailing): jassi!!!!!

jassi: alrite, FRIENDS 4 EVER!!!!

jassi and armaan smiled at eachother


i hope u liked this part!!!!!

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Comments (8)

What happened with the fanfic, the story was pretty interesting

18 years ago

great job continue soon i just updated my self from awhile!

18 years ago

That was awesome! just came back from school and read something soo awesome! yaay! Cont soon!

18 years ago

wow Tina di! tht was sooooo chweeeeet! i wish tht whould happen in real life! continue soon! take care, Hera

18 years ago

soooooooooooooo sweet please continue Tina. bye, Anjana

18 years ago

Mua Mua Mua!!! Di this part was amazing, awesome, mindblowing!!!! All those things and much much more! Wow!!! I wish Armaan would slap Mallika in reel life!!!! Hai! That would definitely boost their TRPs!!....hehe...That was fantabulous hon!!! Absolutely fantabulous!!!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!! Great Di! Just GREAT!!!!

18 years ago

Nice one Tinaaa Plzz continue

18 years ago

slap! slap! slap! Oh how I wish he'd do this in reel life!!! Thanks Tina, please continue...

18 years ago