aww thanks saki for commenting (fianlly got the time huh? lolz jk) n this is dedicated to sonal n ripi who have been commenting reg.
LOVE
Part 4
Recap: Dev n Preeti meet
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The bell rang n preeti gathers her books. She is bout to leave when Love calls her. "Preeti"
P: Yea?
L: meet my cuz Dev n his friend Josh
P: yeah I already met them(laughs)
L: How?
D: (turns red)
J: in the hall way LOLZ
L: oh so he was the guy?
P: yea
D: (finally does something besides turning red) umm so we will see u at lunch ok?
Both girls nod as yes.
Lunch time-
L: come on lets go to lunch.
P: no I cant K
L: Y not? (she asked with her nose wrinkled)
P: cuz I have this test n I need to study for it. L
L: ON THE FIRST DAY OF UNI?!! (she yells so loud that every one in the hall looks at her) hehe (laughs nervously)
P: sheesh! Loud much? Its some kind of pre-test.
L: oh ok whatever bye!
P: cya!
Library
Preeti walks into the library n goes to the literature section (her test is in eng….my fave subject). She goes through the aile(spelling?) n finds the book she needs. But b4 she can get it someone from the other side already grabed it. Preeti looks at where the book was n she sees a face at the other side.
Who is it? Any guesses? HAHAHA suspense!...ok its not really suspense but oh well. U GUYS THE NEXT PART IS GONNA be long!!! I worked on it for like a half hour… so I cant wait to post it!!
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Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
awwww..how sweet of u to dedicate it tto me......ur ff is awesum...continue soon...
Sakshi @imdudehead
16 years ago
okay, maybe not because he want to be manly but because......he is a library helper or smtg or cause he is stalking Preeti anyways continue soon
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
omg u guys i got comment!!!! thank u thank u!!( man am i desperate or wat? lolz)
n pinky thats a greatr idea but u see i dont always get my ideas during the day i always get ideas at night so i always rite it on my ff notebook. lolz but good idea if i do get it during the day i will type it first!
n ripi ur welcome.
n saki i loved ur prediction!! lmao manly huh? lolz i can tell u one thing neev doesnt care about wat ppl think about him. so thats not it but still KEEP PREDICTING EVERY ONE!
N WE WILL SEE IF IT NEEV..OK UR RITE ITS NEEV BUT..shhhh its a secret lolz
THE NEXT PART IS COMING IN A COUPLE OF HOURS!! i made it long or atleast i think its long lolz
~*!Ripi!*~ @~*!Ripi!*~
16 years ago
PREETI!!!!!!!!!!... thanks for dedicating it to me obviously its neev...but you could also make it a love triangle..hmmm.. anyways great part and continue soon.. ~Ripi~ ~*!Ripi!*~39340.091724537
Sakshi @imdudehead
16 years ago
Awsum Part, lol actually i use my cousins laptop these days, and I cant save favourites to it (cause itz not mine, )and it has a log-in problem, but i still want to use it cause...itz a laptop!! so i jus comment whenever i find it anyways itz time 4 my SUPER WEIRD PREDICTION-It is Neev and he is studing, secretly and doesnt want anyone to know because....he wants to be manly?? srry itz like 12 am right now so...i m tired.. but AWSUM PART and continuee sooon, or asap!!!
-Pinky- @-Pinky-
16 years ago
its neev!its neev!haha
can't wait for the next part! btw, instead of writing it on paper, if you type it on computer first, it would be much easier, less time consuming and you parts will be longerrrr. ..just a suggestion
Krishna @snowflake0555
+ 4
16 years ago
OMG Preeti! Please continue soon!!!!!!!! It's awesome and I can't wait to read the next part. Yeahhh and you do use "lolz" too much...but then again I use "lol" a lot to so whatever... And I bet it's Neev...duh! hehe