Part 1
We see a big house…we r going through the house(nice house I might add). At last we reach our distention. We look around n see clothes scattered on the floor. Then suddenly we hear an alarm buzzing. A hand reaches for it n shuts it off. The person groans. NOTE: WE CAN NOT SEE FACE.
Person:P
P: ahhh, y do we have to go to Uni.?
The person takes off the covers n we see its no other then Dev!! (Dev:D)
D: WASNT SKOOL ENOUGH??
He gets out of bed n goes to take a shower. Now y don't we go downstairs again. Satwant is making breakfast n we see Udam coming downstairs. He sits at the dinning table. They r eating n Dev slides down the stairs. "BYE!" Dev yells, while running towards the door. Satwant says "ARRE beta khana to khala(eat food). "No mom I am getting late!"
Now lets go to the Bhandari house. We see the whole house(don't want to get into detail other wise u will be bored lolz) n we Preeti's room, its very clean(unlike mine!). Preeti is straightning her hair. Gurmit calls Preeti " Preeti neeche ahh!" "COMING!" She grabs her pruse n goes downstairs n kisses her dad on the cheek. She runs through the door.
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Sakshi @imdudehead
16 years ago
Great Part!!!!!!It was a great start!!! :) short but sweet! SO preeti and Neev are in college right? anyways CONTINUE SOON
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
omg ur tooo sweet!! do tell wats ur name? if u dont mind. lozl mine is Preeti
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
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OMG I HAVE SOME ONE NEW!! sry overexcited lolz, its just i thought only my friends from adi club where gonna be here..but thank u for reading n i promise it will be more exciting soon. i will cont. tom.
NOTE: i am changing the nickname to piya! ok? so do ck for the changes lolz. sry i noe too many changes. lolz
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awww....wel..dont wrrii....ill b 1 of ur everydaiii reader.....cant wait till 2morrow...
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
OMG I HAVE SOME ONE NEW!! sry overexcited lolz, its just i thought only my friends from adi club where gonna be here..but thank u for reading n i promise it will be more exciting soon. i will cont. tom.
hotaditya39424.6328935185
Sonal @swt.smileee
16 years ago
hey..itsss gr8..cont...soon....
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
u guys i noe its short but trust me it was 2 pages long on notebook paper!!!lmao
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
u guys i dont noe if i am going to hook anyone up with adi...sry!
cindy @madeforme
+ 2
16 years ago
wow preeti. I want to be in this ff too. can u hook me up with with adi in this ff.. plzzzzzmadeforme39336.4851273148
~DeSiHoTtIe~ @~DeSiHoTtIe~
16 years ago
like i said b4 u guys i will add anyone who wants to be in it!! lolz
NOTE: i will cont. tom. since i got a good response(atleast i think i did, lolz)
Sakshi @imdudehead
16 years ago
aww it has a awsum start, you betta continue!!!! and i wud appreciate a small role my resume is I am in Grade 9, and I ....ugh.....you know me so lets just use favouritism :) and continue soon