Part-8
Shabd Mahi ko apne saath hotel ke kamre me le aata hai.
Adi
(with shocking expressions): Shabd, yeh sab kya hai. aur Mahi ki yeh halat.Shabd: Kehne ka waqt nahin hai tu jaldi se doctor ko phone laga.
Adi: thik hai main kar raha hoon.
Adi calls the doctor and doctor checks Mahi and gives injection to mahi
Doctor: Aap inke kya lagte hai. Muje kuch zaroori baat discuss karni hai.
Adi
(with broken words): woh.......hum log...Shabd: Woh meri wife hai. Adi looked at Shabd with shocked face.
Doctor: Dekhiye Mr. sareen aapki wife ne pichle do din se khana to kya ek bund pani bhi nahin piya. Aur woh pichle do din se ek pal ke liye bhi soyi nahin hai. Aisa lagta hai ise kuch aisa tension hai jise yeh bas apne dil me chupakar rakha hai. Behtar hoga ki aap inse apne dil ke gumm bante. warna...........
Shabd: warna kya doctor.
Doctor: Aisi halat me insan ek hi rasta apnata hai. khud khushi ka. I hope Mr. sareen aap meri baat samaj rahe ho. is waqt aapki wife ko aapke pyaar aur saath ki bahot zaroorat hai. aur haa filhal maine ise neend ka injection de diya hai. subaah tak hosh aajaga aur subaah use bina kuch khaye kahin mat jane dijiye varna hume ise hospital me admit karna padega. Chalti hoon waise meri koi zaroorat pade to muje phone kar dijiye ga.
Adi: Aaiye doctor main aapko bahar tak chod deta hoon.
Shabd
(calls someone): Hello Main Shabd Sareen bol raha hoon. Maine aapko is liye phone kiya hai ki Mahi hume raste me behosh mili thi is liye hum use apne saath lekar aaye hai aur doctor ne use injection diya hai woh subaah tak thik ho jayegi.Rewa: Per aise kaise woh tumhare saath raat bhar.
Shabd: Dont worry. woh kal subaah main use chod jaunga. tum gharwale ko bata dena ki woh kisi dost ke yahaan hai. Aur haa mahi ko kuch nahin hoga.
Rewa: Janti hoon ki Mahi tumhare se jyada kahin safe mehsoos nahin karengi.
Shabd: Matlab kya hai.
Rewa: Kyun Mahi ne tumhe bataya nahin ki woh tumse kitna pyaar karti hai. Shabd ab main phone rakhti hoon lekin subaah jaldi aana.
Shabd; Like in shocked ...........ya zaroor.
Adi came back to the room and stands next to Shabd.
Adi: Yeh sab kya hai meri kuch samaj me nahin aata.
Shabd: Mahi pahadi se khudkhushi karne jaa rahi thi.
Adi: to phir doctor se jooth bolne ki kya zaroorat hai ki woh tumhari biwi hai.
Shabd: agar main aisa nahin kehta to yahaan per mahi aur hamara police station me tamasha ban jata aur rahi baat meri patni hone ki to woh to banegi aur woh bhi kal subaah.
Adi: Tu janta hai tu kya keh raha hai. Lagta hai tu us din ka tamasha nahin bhula. tu muje bata ki kya irada hai tera. haa kya chal raha hai tere dimag ke andar bata tu muje...
Shabd: Main Mahi aur uske baap se badla lena chahta hoon aur isse achacha mokka muje nahin milega dono ko alag karne ka aur waise bhi mahi ne kya kaha tha " bhala ho us ladki ka jo mujse shaadi karegi". Ab main use bataunga ki woh ladki kaun hogi.
Adi: Lekin shabd mahi raaji kaise hogi.
Shabd: Tu uski phikar mat kar main janta hoon ki muje kis insaan se baat karni hai and then he call some one and all talks happen we see in mute.
it is 10o' clock in the morning and Shabd is sitting in hotel lobby as Mahi is still sleeping in the room. Someone came to shabd and delivers some papers and left after sometime Adi comes and sits.
Adi: Yeh le jo tune mangvaya tha woh main le aaya. Lekin main ab bhi keh raha hoon ki itna bada faisa jaldbaji me nahin hota.
Shabd: muje jo sochna tha woh maine soch liya aur Jab Shabd Sareen koi faisa karta hai to use koi nahin badal sakta... koi bhi nahin. Ab tu ruk main Mahi ko dekh kar aata hoon.
Adi : tuje yaad hai naa tuje kya karna hai.. tere pass sirf do ghante hai.
Shabd: Whatever
(In kapoor house at dining table)
Rajveer: Rewa kal raat to mahi tumhare saath thi to aaj subaah dikhai kyun nahin de rahi.
Rewa: Woh papa kal shaadi main Mahi ko apni delhi wali saheli milli thi aur woh use jabardast apne saath apne ghar le gayi. keh rahi thi ki kitne dino ke baad mili hai. haa maine bas kuch hi dair pehle unse baat ki woh bilkul thik hai aur khush bhi. woh mahi ne kaha ki use dair ho jaye gi aane me aaj.
Rajveer: thik hi hai kam se kam aaj nilami ke waqt woh maujod to nahin hogi.
Yuvi: thik keh rahe aap. papa hume jalde se chalkar ek baar bank wale se request karni chahiye.
Shalini: Pata nahin kise mere parivaar ki nazar lag gayi hai. lekin main janti hoon ki meri Mahi ke hote huye kuch nahin hoga is parivaar ko.
Rajveer: thik keh rahi ho. Mahi sach me hamare liye bahot lucky hai. jab woh hamari duniya me aayi uske saath saath hamare ghar me lakshmi bhi aayi.
Yuvi: Chaliye papa hume dair ho rahi hai.
Yuvi and rajveer left for the office.
(In the hotel room)
Shabd opens window and sunlights gets on mahi's face and she opens her eyes slowly.
Mahi
(kamre ko dekhkar): Main kahaan hoon aur muje yahaan per kaun laya.Shabd
(with glass of juice): yeh lo ise pilo. doctor ne kaha hai.Mahi (
with anger in her eyes): tumhari himmat kaise huyi muje chune ki. kya chahte ho tum haa. bolo tum.Shabd: Kuch nahin bas ek simple si deal.
Mahi: Mera jawab pehle bhi naa tha aur aaj bhi naa hai.
Shabd: pehle meri deal to sun lo. Yeh hai tumhare Kapoor industries ke paper jo tumne woh vidheshi company ko diye the aur woh log jail ke piche ja chuke hai. agar yeh papers leke tum 1 baje tak nilami me pahoch jao to tum apne parivaar ko bachcha sakti ho lekin uske badle me
Mahi
(with cofused face): Badle me kya.........Shabd: Tumhe mujse shaadi karni hogi.
Mahi
(shocked): Shaadi aur tumse.............Main marna pasand karongi Mr shabd sareen lekin tumse shaadi kabhi nahin.Shabd: Thik hai tum marna chahti ho to maro lekin kya isse tumhara parivaar raste pe aane se nahin rukega. Main tumse shaadi karna chahta hoon pure izzat ke saath. aage faisa tumhare pe hai. agar tumhara faisa haa hai to yeh rahe tumhare kapde hume 1 baje se pehle mandir me jakar shaadi karni hogi aur agar naa hai to main vaada karta hoon tumhari zindagi main kabhi dakhal nahin dunga.
Mahi walks out of the room without saying anything. she is walking in hotel lobby like walking dead body when she hears somthing " kya mehtaji aap bhi yahaan kapoors ki nilami ke liye aaye hai. bahot bura hua unke saath. khair business hai bhai. yeh sab to chalta rehta hai."
Mahi turned back and runs to shabd's room and she shabd is sitting on sofa reading newspaper. she comes in and sits on her knees and she is crying like she is in hell.
Mahi: Tum jeet gaye........main haar gayi...........tum jaisa chahte ho waisa main karne ko taiyaa hoon.......main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon apne parivaar ko bachane ke liye...........tumse shaadi bhi.
Shabd (stands up from the sofa and comes close to mahi and lift her up) : Thik hai tum jaldi se ise pehn lo hamre pass waqt bahot kum hain.
Mahi just noddes her head.
Shabd is waiting in the lobby with adi when mahi comes and shabd cant take off his eyes from Mahi as she was looking stunning in red saree.
Mahi........................................................ .................Shabd
Mahi and shabd left for the mandir and Adi left to stop nilami of kapoor industry.
(In the temple)
mahi and shabd are standing infront of the god.
Mahi : Main tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon. isse se pehle hum yeh shaadi kare.
Shabd: Tumhe meri izazat lene ki koi zarorat nahin hain. Hum dono pati patni banne ja rahe hai. aur pati patni ke rishte me koi formalities naa ho to achcha hai.
Mahi: shaadi ke baad me main apni pichli zindagi ko chodakar nayi zindagi shuru karna chaungi ek naye saher me ek nayi zindagi ke saath.
Shabd: muje manjoor hai. muje tumhari pichli zindagi se nahin balke tumhare aanewali zindagi se matlab hai.
Pandit comes and gives manglesutra and sindoor to shabd to put in mahi's mang.
mAngalyam tantunAnena mama jIvanA hethunA |
(Shabd ties the manglesutra around mahi's nace)kaNThe: badhnami subhage! sanjIva Sarada: Satam ||
(Shabd Puts sindoor in mahi's mang as he puts tears runs from her eyes)pandit decleres them as husband and wife.
shabd: Chale, Mrs. Mahi Sareen.
mahi was shocked and to herself " kaise ek pal main insaan apni pehchan se apni puri zindagi gawa bethta hai."
Shabd (puts his hand on Mahi's shoulder): Mahi ab chalo bhi, tumhe nilami ko nahin rokna hai.
(in kapoor industry parking lot)
Rajveer and Yuvi are trying there best to convince bankers. when Adi comes and gives the papers to rajveer.
Rajveer: tum aur yrh papers tumhare pass kaise.
Adi: woh main nahin balke shabd ne yeh bheja hai.
Rajveer: per woh hamari madad kyun karega.
Mahi
(from behind her father's back): kyunki woh aapki beti ka pati hai aur aapka damad hai.Rajveer and yuvi turn and both are shocked to see Mahi and Shabd as husband and wife.
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Shweta @pyaridilwalino1
16 years ago
wow amazing writing skills!!! I wish there was an actual show like this!
Simal @simal01
16 years ago
awsome I just luv it but plz try 2 continue soon I just can't wait
Bina @-Bina-
16 years ago
It's awesome!
Plz con soon!