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Recap: Sameer called Sujal n invited him at his party… Jiya made Kashish realize her love for Sujal…while Kashish was shocked… Sujal bought a diamond pendent for Kashish…
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Heres the next part… It was evening..tht day Sujal had to go to Sameer's party along with Kashish. Sujal was driving back home… Sameer called him. Sujal: helloo? Sameer: haan…tu kab pohanchraha hai… Sujal: bas abhi Kashish ko pick ker k aata hoon.. Sameer: abbey jaldi ker naa….party is almost started yaar
Sujal: araha hoon yaar.. Sameer: ok come soon…bye Sujal: bye… (hang up..and then dialed up at Kamal's place) Romila: hellooo.. Sujal: hello Romilaa aunty.. Romila: haan putar.. Sujal: aunty…Kashish ko kahiye..k foran se pehle taiyaar hojaye…main usse apne saath Sameer ki party mein le kar jaraha hoon…theek hai …… Romila: ok puttar… Sujal: waise…wohh hai kahan?
Sujal : ( to himself ) yeh larki kitni der lagaati hai…
Sujal had reached the house… He went upstairs to call Kashish… Sujal bina knock kiye…room mein chala jaata hai….and he sees… Kashish trying to zip up her dress…lol Sujal enters the room without any hesitance…and moves closer to Kashish… Kashish sees Sujal through the mirror…he was standing at her back… They both look at each other for a moment… Sujal sets Kashish's hand at a side…as she was trying to zip up… And then zips up her dress…while Kashish closes her eyes…and also tightens up her grip… Sujal slowly …and gradually puts his arms around Kashish's waist… Kashish closes her eyes tightly… Sujal comes near to her…and puts her hair at a side….and lightly kisses on her neck… Kashish turns around…and they both look at each other… There eyes were locked for a moment… She makes him close his eyes…and then kisses lightly on his cheek… Sujal wraps her in his arms..tightly… They both hugged each other ….and then came bk in thr normal position.. Sujal smiled at her….and Kashish too… Sujal: yeh…( brings out the gift from his pocket ) tumharey liye Kashish… Kashish luks at the gift…and gives him a pleasing smile… Sujal takes out the pendant out of the pack…and makes her stand infront of the mirror…and then puts the pendant in her neck…Kashish luvs it..and then turn around to give him a tight and romantic embrace… Kashish: I love you Sujal….I love you… Sujal: I love you too Kashish…I love you too… Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep …beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!
Someone called out frm the back… Sujal turned around to see it..it was a car…and was asking for the way… And then Sujal realized tht he was dreaming…. He hit lightly on his head…and then drove off to the house to pick Kashish…
He went inside.. Romila: puttar tu agaya.. Sujal: ji aunty.. Romila: wohh Sameer puttar ka phone aya tha….he is the waiting for you.. Sujal: ji…hum bas waheen jarahe hain….main zara abhi fresh ho kar aata hoon… Romila: haan ok…..oye puttar Sujal: ab kya hai aunty? Romila: Kashish ko dekh le……wohh bhi ready huyee k nahi…. Sujal: ok…( passes her a smile ) Sujal abhi stairs per kadam rakhta hee hai k he sees Kashish coming downstairs… Sujal usse dekhta hee reh jaata hai….cuz she was looking gorgeous… Sujal k hosh ur jaatey hain…hehe… His eyes were locked at Kashish… Kashish stepped down.. Kashish: kya hua Sujal ? aise kya dekhrahe hoo? Kya main achi nahi lagraheee? Romila: ooo naii puttar…u are the lukin xxtraa beautifull..!! Kashish: (gushes) thanks aunty…lekin mujhe lagta hai k Sujal ko main achi nahi lagrahee… Romila: oye puuttaar bol de naa… Sujal: (smirks) baad mein boloonga….main zara abhi ayaa…( he went upside) Kashish: yeh Sujal bhi naa…. Romila: haan…yeh Sujal bhi naa… Kashish and Romila shared a laugh.
Sujal apne room mein jaata hai..and picked out the gift from his pocket…and thought… " Yeh Gift mein Kashish ko kis tarah dun…kuch samajh main nahi aaraha…" Sujal ready ho ker neechey jaata hai…and both of them leave for the party…
To be continued.....party mein kya hua..yeh jaaanne ke liye wait kerna hogaa..lolzzsara_1638943.5538310185
meghla @meghla17 years agosahi waqt per sahi kaam karna chahiye
lakain tum aur sujal yeh kabhi nahi karte
tumhara farz hai jald se jald post karna aur sujal darling ka farz hai jald se jald kashish ko propose karna
so pls do it asap
time and tide wait for none
17 years agohi! dear
Couldnt comment earlier sorry. Was busy since last few days. But story is going great. Sujal kab kashish ko propose karega. He shld do it quickly. Waiting for it.
post the next part soon
golu
17 years agoPhew! That was surely A LONG catch up!!! hehe ... but nonetheless i enjoyed reading it ... fantastic job you are really a very talented writer..... and i too so wished that the confession was true.... but i think they both will confess and then sujal will find out that kashish is engaged and he will do anything to break it off because that is what should happened....i also liked it when u wrote about the mitwa song and how sujal took kashish sighseeing...it was really well written...good job and update soon!
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meghla @meghla 17 years ago sahi waqt per sahi kaam karna chahiye lakain tum aur sujal yeh kabhi nahi karte tumhara farz hai jald se jald post karna aur sujal darling ka farz hai jald se jald kashish ko propose karna so pls do it asap time and tide wait for none
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi
+ 10
17 years ago
sara dear please continue soon..me waiting..
golu_1677 @golu_1677
17 years ago
hi! dear
Couldnt comment earlier sorry. Was busy since last few days. But story is going great. Sujal kab kashish ko propose karega. He shld do it quickly. Waiting for it.
post the next part soon
golu
Sara @sara_naveed00
17 years ago
Hehehe..thanks Janvi...Thanks for likin the dream sequence and the Mitwa song.....
I will update soon...!! Thanks once again..
- --jaan.vi* @- --jaan.vi*
17 years ago
Phew! That was surely A LONG catch up!!! hehe ... but nonetheless i enjoyed reading it ... fantastic job you are really a very talented writer..... and i too so wished that the confession was true.... but i think they both will confess and then sujal will find out that kashish is engaged and he will do anything to break it off because that is what should happened....i also liked it when u wrote about the mitwa song and how sujal took kashish sighseeing...it was really well written...good job and update soon!
Chantelle @Bolly*_Crazed
17 years ago
Nice Part Continue Soon! ...I Wonder when She will tell sujal she is engaged....poor guy....
jyothi @jyothi_cool
+ 2
17 years ago
hey sara nice part oh i just wish that confession was 4 real.plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
Sara @sara_naveed00
17 years ago
THNX farah....kulbin.....saara....group_1223......surya......
varallika
varallikka @Varallikka
17 years ago
u r story is really very gud
DON't-ASK-IT @Sara_DONT_ASK
+ 4
17 years ago
Ber Bery Nice part.....Loved it....
Such a bomantic scene reyyy
--DON--