Mansvi bhumi and shweta have their food and chatter!!
Later after some hours
B: bhabhi dekhiye na kitna time ho chukka hai!! Aur aapko to kisi party main bhi jaana tha na!
Mansvi smiles
Mv: haan main to bhul hi gayi
Sw: uh bhumi so shall I drop u home then!!
B: nahi bhabhi (smiles) main manage kar loongi!!!
Mv: oho bhumi chalo naa!! Then I can go to the party in my car!! Please bhumi
B: bhabhi main Taxi kar loongi na!!
Shweta and Mansvi look at each other
Sw: NO bhumi taxi nahi!! Chalo naa!!
B: theek hai!!
Mv: theek hai!!
B: par mansvi bhabhi ap isi tarah jaayengi party main tayar nahi hongi aap!!
Mv: huh nahi…….main yahan tayar ho jaaongi naa!! Waise bhi I have bought the saree and jewellery now only naa!!
B: haan who theek hai!!
Mansi gets ready and leaves in her car!!
Meanwhile shweta bhumi and kids leave in other car!!
Mansvi meanwhile takes another different route to their home and shweta taks the usual road to bhumi's home!!
Shweta and bhumi arrive outside Heritage house!!
BHumi sees that the house is completely dark and no one is there
Bhumi thinks to herself!!
B: ye sab gharwale kahan chale gaye hain??
She is confused
B: shweta bhabhi ye sab kahan chale gaye…….(sayin she looks back)
She is stunned…….. there was no one……..neither shweta nor the kids
Now bhumi is a bit scared!!
B: shweta bhabhi…..aap kahan ho……..pia ……..abhi…..
To herself
B: hey bhagwan ab ye kahan gaye…….bache…..bhabhi……yahi to the
She calls their name once more……..again……in the hope that they might be somewhere near!!
But no……..Now bhumi gets really scared……..infact tensed!!
B: main……ye sab kahan gaye hain……uh……..er……er
Just then in the darkness……..a light comes up………bhumi looks there……
The light seemed to be very very bright……for a moment bhumi closes her eyes……….and then opens it……
It seemed to be……a Gate………Yes a Gate……..Heart shaped gate……
It was glowin……..Just like this…………..
Bhumi thinks for a while and then decides to get inside the gate in curiousity to find whats there within?
She walks in……….All she finds is the pink bright light of the gate being flashed in and white walls on either side……..
No they weren't walls she thinks on……..they were just plain silky sheets….she touches one of the sides of sheets…………..Bhumi was getting more and more confused and tensed……..
When one more lighted gate comes in front of her!!
This gate stood in front of her……….This was of bright red lights…….
Bhumi entered this one also……..Now bhumi liked
this…….
She saw below………there was a red carpet below her………she smiled…..
The inside of the red gate seemed ……..as if everythin was red…..
Just then a woman pops up……..makin bhumi jump literally
B: (a bit scared) huh…….
Her hands in her chest………..she looks on properly and finds that so called "woman" to be a doll that popped out……..
B: uh ye doll how did this pop up??
Just then a voice comes……..which seemed to be comin from within the doll
" This is for u Mam"…………..
Bhumi noticed that the Doll had real flowers in her hand!!
Bhumi goes to that doll…..
B: tum bolti bhi ho……..
BHumi gets annoyed her foolishness
B: uh stupid…….how can this talk……nahi awaaz to isi main se hi aa rahi thi……uh some modern doll seems with talking system!!
BHumi takes the flowers from that doll and leaves………she goes further…..
Just then something else gets lighted up………..
It was not a gate……….A heart …….this too was lighted up and was sparkling……An arrow passed thru the heart!!
Just as she neared the heart another gate lighted up!! This was a light violet coloured one…..she smiled and went thru this too
This gate seemed to be a short one…….Another one lighted up…….The most beautiful it seemed so
This was a Golden gate…….very very shinin………
BHumi smiled and her mouth open in astonishment……..
Just then……..above the gate………a voice came……..
There was also a electric board that lighted up…….it said welcome
BHumi stepped in…….
As soon as she did so…….she saw nothing……..no lights nothing……no silky walls……….
Just then a hand comes from behind……..and bhumi gets a bit scared
The voice whispers in her ears!
"HAPPY MARRIAGE ANNIVERSARY"
Bhumi recognizes the voice………
She looks back……..It was Arjun…..
There was a dim light switched on……..
B: arjun……ye sab……
A: (smiles) happy anniversary!!
B: (smiles)………ye…….tumne……..happy anniversary to u too……(hugs)
BHumi has tears in her eyes……
Arjun makes her look him
A: hmm abhi kyun ro rahi ho?? Pasand nahi ayaa ye sab huh?
B: nahi bahut pasand aaya that was really beautiful!!
A: achcha chalo…..
He makes her look otherside
There was electric board which said……..
Just then there were fireworks in sky and lights were switched on…….
BHumi looks around……..The whole place was brightly lighted…….and a crowd of people were starin at them……..
Everyone shouted
Happy Aniversary!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BHumi looked at them stunned…….happily surprised!!
Arjun took her in……..she saw the whole place was decorated in red and white hues……and candles……..makin the ambience fully romantic……
The floral smell and pinkish touches at some corners gave the place a classy touch!!
She saw everyone was there………including mansvi,shweta, kids everyone……
She smiles……..and looks at arjun…………and lightly punches him in chest
B: to ye sab aapki chal thi!!
A: aa……uh!!
B: no wonder mansvi bhabhi aur shweta bhabhi…….
A: (interrupts) haan……
They go in further……..
Just then she sees her baba!!
{ Vasudev hadn't talked to her since she ran away with arjun for her marriage………he hardly met her and this really hurt bhumi}
B: (rushes to him) baba!!
They hug…….
Bhumi cries……..
B: baba aap mujhse itne naaraz hogaye ke mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chahte the
V: nahi beta mujhe laga tune ye shaadi karke galti ki hai…..lekin main hi galat tha beta……
Arjun comes to them
V: itna achcha pati aur itne achche khandaan hain lekin main…..(has tears in his eyes)
A: baba…….aap kyun ro rahe hai…..ab to aap apni beti se mil liye!!
Arjun touches his feet!!.........they hug and mansen comes to vasudev
M: vasudev ji………bhala to aapne kiya hai humare khandan ke liye…..itni achchi beti hume dekar(he keeps his hand on bhumi's head)
V: nahi..nahi……mujh garib ne……
M: (interrupts) nahi vasudev ji paise se hi sirf koi amir garib nahi hota hai!!
Suraj and mansvi come there with kids!!
Arjun introduces everyone to vasudev
A: baba ye meri mansvi bhabhi, suraj bhaiyya, mama,preeti meri behen, aur ye……khushi…….suraj bhaiyya ki beti……
Vasudev keeps his hands on khushi's head………
A: and this one……pia and abhi……aapke beti ke bache……..
B: arjun.……..tumhare nahi hai kya……
Vasudev goes to the kids and gives them kisses on their cheeks!!
Mv: bhumi aao……..u get ready…….so that the real party can begin……everyones is waitin!!
B: jee(blushes)
After sometime bhumi and mansvi come down!!
Arjun looks at bhumi……….bhumi looked stunning……with her red saree and red jewellery……..
Arjun goes to her
A: wow lookin gorgeous…..really!!
Bhumi blushes……
Mv: ahem ahem……..main yahi hoon…..i hope u have noticed me too!!
A: uh haan bhabhi aap bhi gorgeous lag rahi ho………par kya hainaa I am not the right one to praise u…….its suraj bhaiyya!!!hainaa!!
Mv: haan……..who hai….but tum bhi kar sakte ho…..and anyways we are getting late for the party lets go bhumi…..
Sayin she takes bhumi along with her quickly……
A: ar bhabhi……mujhe bhavri ko "I Love U" bhi nahi kehne diya!!
He too goes in the party!!
A huge cake comes………..
Arjun and bhumi cut the cake and everyone in the party claps for them……
They feed each other the cake………and then give the cake to mansen shakuntala………
M: jeete raho beta…….
They give the cake to everyone else…….
Just then preeti's voice comes……..
P: uh uh…….wait a min…..Ladies and Gentlemen……aaj iss wonderful avsar par…….
Everyone looks at preeti!
P: we kids……uh I mean kids of the house are presenting a beautiful play for u!!
Everyone applauds!
A stage which was build on the corner……..gets lighted up!!
There was a green environment type background and there were two kids sitting facin opposite to each other……Between them was a wall….
The voice comes……
P: Ye kahani hai inn do premiyon ki chaliye dekhte hain kya hai iss prem kahani main!!
The two kids were pia and abhi!!
Pia……..That is the girl in the play……gets up and plays with a toy puppy in her hand….
Suddenly the puppy falls from her hand………It lands on the opposite side
The guy……Abhi looks at puppy and says
Ab: I hate Puppies
The girl comes to the other side to ask puppy………but the guys refuses
Bhumi and arjun watch this carefully!!
Ab: tum jaisi……nak…..nakh…….nachadi ko ye puupy nahi milegi
Everyone laughs…….But bhumi and arjun understand that its their story that's being portrayed as a play!!
The girl says not to talk rudely to her…….Just then the puppy falls down….
The girl goes behind it but trips and falls on the guy's arms……
Chehre per banawat ka gussa
Aankhon say chalakta pyaar bhi hai
Is shauq-e-ada ko kya kahiye
Inkaar bhi hai…ikraar bhi hai…
The boy and girl look at each other……..
Arjun puts his arm around bhumi…….Bhumi looks at him and blushes…..
The voice comes
P: iss mulakat main puppy to nahi par in ka dil to ek doosre ka ho hi gaya tha!!
The background changes…….They show the girl and boy being immersed in each others thoughts!!
Zinda hoon is liye
Kyun ki mujh ko tumse pyaar hai
Tum bi mujhse pyaar karti ho
Sunnay ko dil bekraar hai
P: Ye dono ho gaye ek doosre ke liye bekrar!!
They show the boy comin to the girl and spending time with her
The light focuses on the boy and the voice says
Your lips speak sweat softness,
Your touch a cool caress,
I'm lost in your magic,
My heart beats within your chest.
I think of you each morning,
And dream of you each night,
I think of my arms being around you,
And can't express my delight.
Never have I fallen,
But i'm quickly on my way,
You hold heart in your hands,
That has never been given away.
Then the light focuses on the girl………the girl blushes……
P: bas inka romance to shuru hogaya…….lekin…..
Lightinin sounds emerge in the background of the stage……The sounds seems to increase and lights dim…….
The girl sees that the guys isn't there…….
The voice says
P: inki love story main bhi ek toofan aaya……aur ye bichad gaye
They show another background……..the girl sitting and cryin…..and guy too!!
P: ye hogaye galatfaimi ke shikar aur bichad gaye ye sache premi!!
The light focuses on the boy's side
Ab: nahi…..why is she not talking to me……why
Just then another girl comes in………that's Khushi…….(playin mansvi bhabhi)
Kh: what happened
The guy hugs her bhabhi and says everything to her
Mansvi laughs………and suraj looks at her
Kh: u don't worry!! Main hoon naa……mujhe us ladki se milna hai!!
They show the girls side……..
Khushi abhi go to the girl……
The guy goes near the girl
Girl weepin…..says him to leave
Ab: tum mujhe…..samjhane ka one mauka na dogi
Pi: tum dho…..dhoke ho……(she forgets the word "Dhokebaaz")
Ab: nahi…..I love u!!
Kh: haan he loves u lot!!
Pi: really……..
They hug each other!! And khushi smiles
The voice comes
P: is tarah iss sweet couple ne shaadi karli……..aur aaj inki shaadi ko teen saal ho chuke hain!!
Everyone standin there understands that this story was of arjun and bhumi!!
BHumi feels shy……..Everyone looks at them and clap!!
Someone comes to them and says
Wow that was a great love story huh!! (smiles)
Suraj comes to them!!
Su: haan bhai nice presentation…..
Mv: why shouldn't it be??
Su: oh Mansvi teacher………
A: bhabhi aapne…….mujhe……
Mv: aur nahi to kya,……..tumhari iss love story ko maine hi direct kiya hai!!
Preeti comes there
Mv: and bhabhi u have done a great job!!
Mansvi hugs preeti
Mv: no preeti u did a marvelous job by givin the voice!!
A: okay okay thanks to everyone…..actually ye hum dono ke liye surprise tha(looks at bhumi)
Mv: its okay! U see ye humari taraf se choti si surprise tumhare liye!!
A: (smiles) uh waise bhavri u were supposed to give me a gift too!! Where's it??
B:(hesistates) er.er……….nah….
A: bhavri!!!!!!!
BHumi shows a small present……a beautiful…..ring for him
A: wow bhavri doobara engagement ke mood main ho??
B: huh
A: haan I gave u a ring u too are doin so……(comes close) so……so
B: (hits him) uh arjun tum bhi!!
She slides the ring in his finger!!
He kisses her hands!!
Bhumi blushes!!
Su: ahem ahem…….
A: oh!!
Arjun announces to have drinks and enjoy the party!!
Arjun and bhumi go to some other guests and they congratulate them!!
Suraj smiles!!
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parvatisrikant @parvatisrikant
16 years ago
Wow Sia.....wat a wonderful update...
sia @sia_lovely
+ 2
16 years ago
er....a bit long part Pls read