Chapter 8
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Prologue
guys this is a result of sheer frustration - a new FF, in case any bhootnis want to enjoy.....i will write it any cases, and found my ire abating after a while...there is a synopsis, which some of you have read will give an idea of this track which has no goats, donkeys..or whatever...but there are twists and DK pure gold... there are no goats, no extra marital affairs, no adultery and ruthless husbands whose hearts have gone cold and no dimwitted wives, who have nothing better than to than chase goats and make music videos
the characters in this FF -
Shivansh – Dr. Payals Ex-husband, is a very dangerous guy. Like Ajay Devgan in 'Apharan' is an extortionist heavily networked with powerful politicians, has links with the mafia and extremists organisations. He wants Payal bck come what may, it has become an obsession. He uses Dev as a pawn in this process.
Dr. Payal Sharma – the sweet doctor who rescues Dev during his ML, until Kaju lands up there. She gets infatuated by our impressionable DPS, but slowly steps aside as she sees kaju is his true love
DPS – comes out of his ML, is back with Kaju. They get married (the only nice things shreya has done) but Dev has to rush to London. He meets shivansh in London. Where Shivansh makes friends with him. But DPS unfortunately gets caught up in a drug chase, and a murder rap there. Shivansh helps him escape. But in the process has on CD… the evidence that can send DPS to the gallows. Shivansh always keeps his insurance policy. At the time, he doesn't know DPS and his connection to Dr. Payal.
KAran – Ameesha – Karan is absconding , ameesha is in prison. They have been charged with the murder of NT mom and attempt on DPS life. Ameesha is serving life imprisonment. Veer has filed for divorse. He and Payal have become close friends.
Pahua is living with the Singhs. SPji and Hottie are in mussoorie.
Situation : Kaju knows that Payal is worried about something. But, Payal is scared to talk about shivansh and her past. She has been keeping her head low for 2 years. Kaju wants to give Dev a surprise on his return to Mumbai after an agonisingly long 10 days hiatus, which she spends between staring at his photos, working at RC and cooking naughty plans. Dev calls her up, but doesn't tell her about the trouble he got into in London. He thinks he is fine now. He asks Kaju to organise a press conference, but doesn't tell her why. So Kaju does that. But on the day of his arrival she sets up the beach house, now more…..
Part 9 : beach house (part 1)
Kaju, is lying on her back, on the large bed hugging his photo to her chest and sighs dreamily, "ohhhh- Devvvvv, ab aur kitna intezaar…uffff…jaaneman ab aur bardaast nahin hota, ye kaisi chilman haaii kaante chubthe hain, aankhen tak doondla gayee hain, hare ek saans bass ek hi aahat ko tars gayee hain."
Payal knocks on the door " Kaajjal" Kaju straightens quickly" oh hi – Payal cmon on inside" Payal smiles softly ans sees the photo in Kajus hand " Oooo ..oh….intezaar nahin ho raha hai, haaii….dulhaniya…kitni, uthaavli hai." She pulls Kajus cheeks and kaju blushes a beet red. Hastily putting the photo aside, She shakes her head," nahin wo..oh….i was just cleaning the photo..it was dusty..thats all" she looks away…Payal takes her arms gently," I know how you feel, Kaajjal…I do" Kaju gives her hug impulsively and tells her own plan. Payals eyes widen and she laughs softly"hmmmmm- sounds deadly, so tell me what I need to do." Kajus plan was simple.
She wanted to set up the beach house romantically, the way Dev would like – candles, soft lights, satins, roses, champagne…and a video with her sensual act. She blushes at the thought – thinking how he would react to see her do a jig. Payal would film her of course.
Then she would tell Panna Chhachi and the rest her surprise except the video bit, and they would help her in the conspiracy. Payal sounded excited at the idea.
Before going downstairs she first bows down to GB and prays," Oh – Gannu Bhaiyya , I I am so so so glad my Dev is coming back today. I missed him so much." she whispers with feeling, her body trembling slightly" Bass aap unki humesha rakhsaa Karen. " she opens her eyes and GB is smiling. Bowing down she does an aarti and even Payal joins in.
As the girls laugh while coming down, Nandini bhabhi meets them. Twinkling at Kaju" hhmmmmm….devaraaniji …soona hai…aaj koi aane waala hai." Kaju looks down, with a soft smile blushing. Nandini Bhabhi links her arm in Kajus and in a serious expression" aur ye bhi soona hai, koi surprise hone waala hai…bhai, kyaa Karen…intezaar…nahin hota…" Kaju says softly, Blushing and shaking her head," Bhhhaahhbhi…" NB and Payal laugh. NB smiles and touches Kajus chin, lifting it up slightly" I will help you dress up, my sweet little sister in law…" Kaju starts to shake her head than bites her lip blushing. Payal explains by clearing throat " ahem – who kyaa hain bhaabhi, Kaajjal di kuch khaas tayaari kar rahi hai. Hum dono beach house jaa rahen hai abhi. Agar Dev aaygenge toh aapk o pata hai naa, kyaa karma hai" NB smiles, pursing her lips with a naughty teeth tongue in cheek ," Haan – haan Devarji ko kyaa kehna hai, ye tohhhh… pataaa …..hai…par unko….kaise…rokhenge….yeeehhhhhhh….nahinnnn…pataaaa…." Kaju….runs away…blushing " bhhaaabbhhii…aap bhi naa…."NB giggles.
Payal and Kaju drive over to the beach house. It is lovely day. Soon they get busy, preparing the place. Kaju does the bedroom…Chooses red roses, with white. Beautiful vases – mostly Venetian and some Chinese urns (ming)..then candles floating, candle sticks, of all colours and sizes. She could light them later. There were oil burners for some exotic smelling fragrant oils. The lovely bed was decorated with roses, the satiny sheets a creamy white and light rose pink silk. There were cushions strewn all over the room. Persian rugs and a fire place. She viewed the presents and smiled – perfect. A tiny shiver of anticipation goes down her arms as she imagines those dark eyes darkening further with desire and passion that had the power to turn her knees to jelly as they were doing now at the mere thought of seeing him…
Payal receives a call on the mob as kaju enters, Payal stares at it slightly pale and cuts it off. She switches off the mobile her fingers trembling slightly. Kaju frowns for the past few days she had noticed, Payals preoccupation and these strange calls which Payal said were blank calls…Kaju asks" Payal – whose call was it" Payal jumps literally and lies" no…no…I …er…blank call…don't worry…I get them sometimes." Kaju is not convinced…touching payals arm, she enquires" Is everything OK – Payal" Payal smiled reassuringly, " of Course – di, I am fine, just a bit excited about all this.," then she cups Kajus face and smiles" I am so pleased for you….be happy" Kaju smiles but is not convinced and has a thoughtful look on her face.
Then the shoot is done quickly – Kaju naughtily sings and dances to the tune of "chura liya" wearing her wicked stringy blouses and a pink sari. Payal and Kaju are giggling like School girls at the end of it," gawwd- poor DEvu, he will die when he sees this. Qatilaana iraada hai aapka…" Kaju smiles blushing and dreams," Haan – Payal, who din mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai…jab pehli hum mile the…Poora badan kaamp utha tha mera, aise ki jaisi aag lag gayee ho…I was a complete goner. I hope, I can convey those feelings ….bass is sab…mushkil samay mein mauka hi nahin milaa..he had to go to London, without warning. And mera passport ka problem, us parr…mein aur meri, stupidity. Always Papa said, beta passport renew kar do warna problem ho jayegaa. Dev was ready to move planet venus to get my visa, but see…kyaa hua…mera honey aur moon…gayee behns paani mein" the girls giggle again. Payal tells her," I have to go now – you handle the rest" then she winks and kisses Kaju on the forehead, her eyes moist" God bless, you deserve the best" then she leaves, kaju goes back to her nanaland.
Whne Dev arrives Panna Chhachi and NB wait at the doorway with Pahua to greet him, with an aarti. Dev is wearing a black suit, tie and all. He walks in slowly, his eyes hooded. He was not smiling. His dark eyes flicker over the tiny welcome party. PC does the aarti, and NB smiles mischievously as she notes the way his eyes are scanning the inside of the house with a dark frown. He looked tired and irate. "Kise doondh rahe hain devarji -…koi aane waala hai" He frowns at bhabhi and tries to smile but it doesn't rech his eyes. "Kaaajjal…" his voice trails off. The women hide a smile glancing at each other. "NB says, " Who toh yahaan nahin hai" innocently eyeing his naughtily. He frowns darkly, an edge in his voice" Where is she. " she steps in looking around. PC says softly " shes gone out – will be back soon. It was important. Don't worry, why don't you rest meantime." It was 4pm. Dev has stopped by Radiocity on the way. Kaju hadn't gone in today. He was annoyed.
He went up his room, quickly and NB whispered to PC," Lagtha hai, devarji ka mood karab hai. Apni dulhan ko naa dekh kar, naaraaz hai" PC looks slightly worried," Haan Nandnini – Kitni Paagal hai ye kaajjal bhi…mein usse kaha that ki ghar par rehna…par uska surprise…bass Dev ka gussa toh who jaanti hai…usse phone karke bathaathe hain"
Dev paces the room angrily – Dammit Kaajjal where are You. His hands trembled slightly when he passes his fingers thru his badly ruffled hair. On the flight he was just thinking of the close shave he had. He never imaginaed in his wildest dreams he would be charged with a murder rap and a drugs cache, all in one go. The London Police were still looking for the man in the Blue Jacket. Shivansh assured him, there was no evidence. And he was standing as his alibi. Thank god for Shivansh. He was god sent.
He was so scared for Kaju after what he went thru in London. The nightmare of last one week. His voice Trambled slightly – Damn where are you Kaajjal, where are You. " He closes his eyes a shudder passing thru his frame. He couldn't tell her a word. Shivansh was right the less people knew about it the better.
Then he paced the room again. He tried her mobile but it was switched off. He flung it away in anger. His eyes blazing. He felt like wringing her neck sometimes.
Then his eyes softened, his anger instantly fading as he sees her photograph next to hs sitting on the dressing table. He takes it in his hands, slowly caressing its edge with his thumb. Sitting down on the bed he sighs deeply" – Oh Kaajjal I missed you. Thank god you weren't there. I am so glad." He whispered with feeling. With half a smile on his lips. He gently trailed his finger over her lips. The only woman who had the power to drive him crazy, and now he was going to see her tonight. A light shock of desire rose through his veins. He closed his eyes as he remembered his wedding night. Beyond his dreams, his head bent back, his face reflecting the passion they both displayed surprising each other, the amazing understanding and giving. He was blown away. Each day and night during this agonising period, it kept him going.His throat worked deeply. Then his mobile rings…he picks it up and speaks on…it the blood drains away from his face. He sits down, suddenly his eyes shocked…then he breathes softly…"Whattt….Dammmit I am coming now" what the hell shivansh was doing here…and what CD….Freeze
Preview : beach house part 2
Kajus welcome, devs strange behaviour. Devs...meeting with Shivansh and the shocking truth...shivnash ultimatum...Dev in dharam sankat....wait and watch folks
please let me know oif you wnat me to continue for i will be doing it on word for the sake of my own peace...
.
sammy
dudleysam 39309.2947916667
guys this is a result of sheer frustration - a new FF, in case any bhootnis want to enjoy.....i will write it any cases, and found my ire abating after a while...there is a synopsis, which some of you have read will give an idea of this track which has no goats, donkeys..or whatever...but there are twists and DK pure gold... there are no goats, no extra marital affairs, no adultery and ruthless husbands whose hearts have gone cold and no dimwitted wives, who have nothing better than to than chase goats and make music videos
the characters in this FF -
Shivansh – Dr. Payals Ex-husband, is a very dangerous guy. Like Ajay Devgan in 'Apharan' is an extortionist heavily networked with powerful politicians, has links with the mafia and extremists organisations. He wants Payal bck come what may, it has become an obsession. He uses Dev as a pawn in this process.
Dr. Payal Sharma – the sweet doctor who rescues Dev during his ML, until Kaju lands up there. She gets infatuated by our impressionable DPS, but slowly steps aside as she sees kaju is his true love
DPS – comes out of his ML, is back with Kaju. They get married (the only nice things shreya has done) but Dev has to rush to London. He meets shivansh in London. Where Shivansh makes friends with him. But DPS unfortunately gets caught up in a drug chase, and a murder rap there. Shivansh helps him escape. But in the process has on CD… the evidence that can send DPS to the gallows. Shivansh always keeps his insurance policy. At the time, he doesn't know DPS and his connection to Dr. Payal.
KAran – Ameesha – Karan is absconding , ameesha is in prison. They have been charged with the murder of NT mom and attempt on DPS life. Ameesha is serving life imprisonment. Veer has filed for divorse. He and Payal have become close friends.
Pahua is living with the Singhs. SPji and Hottie are in mussoorie.
Situation : Kaju knows that Payal is worried about something. But, Payal is scared to talk about shivansh and her past. She has been keeping her head low for 2 years. Kaju wants to give Dev a surprise on his return to Mumbai after an agonisingly long 10 days hiatus, which she spends between staring at his photos, working at RC and cooking naughty plans. Dev calls her up, but doesn't tell her about the trouble he got into in London. He thinks he is fine now. He asks Kaju to organise a press conference, but doesn't tell her why. So Kaju does that. But on the day of his arrival she sets up the beach house, now more…..
Part 9 : beach house (part 1)
Kaju, is lying on her back, on the large bed hugging his photo to her chest and sighs dreamily, "ohhhh- Devvvvv, ab aur kitna intezaar…uffff…jaaneman ab aur bardaast nahin hota, ye kaisi chilman haaii kaante chubthe hain, aankhen tak doondla gayee hain, hare ek saans bass ek hi aahat ko tars gayee hain."
Payal knocks on the door " Kaajjal" Kaju straightens quickly" oh hi – Payal cmon on inside" Payal smiles softly ans sees the photo in Kajus hand " Oooo ..oh….intezaar nahin ho raha hai, haaii….dulhaniya…kitni, uthaavli hai." She pulls Kajus cheeks and kaju blushes a beet red. Hastily putting the photo aside, She shakes her head," nahin wo..oh….i was just cleaning the photo..it was dusty..thats all" she looks away…Payal takes her arms gently," I know how you feel, Kaajjal…I do" Kaju gives her hug impulsively and tells her own plan. Payals eyes widen and she laughs softly"hmmmmm- sounds deadly, so tell me what I need to do." Kajus plan was simple.
She wanted to set up the beach house romantically, the way Dev would like – candles, soft lights, satins, roses, champagne…and a video with her sensual act. She blushes at the thought – thinking how he would react to see her do a jig. Payal would film her of course.
Then she would tell Panna Chhachi and the rest her surprise except the video bit, and they would help her in the conspiracy. Payal sounded excited at the idea.
Before going downstairs she first bows down to GB and prays," Oh – Gannu Bhaiyya , I I am so so so glad my Dev is coming back today. I missed him so much." she whispers with feeling, her body trembling slightly" Bass aap unki humesha rakhsaa Karen. " she opens her eyes and GB is smiling. Bowing down she does an aarti and even Payal joins in.
As the girls laugh while coming down, Nandini bhabhi meets them. Twinkling at Kaju" hhmmmmm….devaraaniji …soona hai…aaj koi aane waala hai." Kaju looks down, with a soft smile blushing. Nandini Bhabhi links her arm in Kajus and in a serious expression" aur ye bhi soona hai, koi surprise hone waala hai…bhai, kyaa Karen…intezaar…nahin hota…" Kaju says softly, Blushing and shaking her head," Bhhhaahhbhi…" NB and Payal laugh. NB smiles and touches Kajus chin, lifting it up slightly" I will help you dress up, my sweet little sister in law…" Kaju starts to shake her head than bites her lip blushing. Payal explains by clearing throat " ahem – who kyaa hain bhaabhi, Kaajjal di kuch khaas tayaari kar rahi hai. Hum dono beach house jaa rahen hai abhi. Agar Dev aaygenge toh aapk o pata hai naa, kyaa karma hai" NB smiles, pursing her lips with a naughty teeth tongue in cheek ," Haan – haan Devarji ko kyaa kehna hai, ye tohhhh… pataaa …..hai…par unko….kaise…rokhenge….yeeehhhhhhh….nahinnnn…pataaaa…." Kaju….runs away…blushing " bhhaaabbhhii…aap bhi naa…."NB giggles.
Payal and Kaju drive over to the beach house. It is lovely day. Soon they get busy, preparing the place. Kaju does the bedroom…Chooses red roses, with white. Beautiful vases – mostly Venetian and some Chinese urns (ming)..then candles floating, candle sticks, of all colours and sizes. She could light them later. There were oil burners for some exotic smelling fragrant oils. The lovely bed was decorated with roses, the satiny sheets a creamy white and light rose pink silk. There were cushions strewn all over the room. Persian rugs and a fire place. She viewed the presents and smiled – perfect. A tiny shiver of anticipation goes down her arms as she imagines those dark eyes darkening further with desire and passion that had the power to turn her knees to jelly as they were doing now at the mere thought of seeing him…
Payal receives a call on the mob as kaju enters, Payal stares at it slightly pale and cuts it off. She switches off the mobile her fingers trembling slightly. Kaju frowns for the past few days she had noticed, Payals preoccupation and these strange calls which Payal said were blank calls…Kaju asks" Payal – whose call was it" Payal jumps literally and lies" no…no…I …er…blank call…don't worry…I get them sometimes." Kaju is not convinced…touching payals arm, she enquires" Is everything OK – Payal" Payal smiled reassuringly, " of Course – di, I am fine, just a bit excited about all this.," then she cups Kajus face and smiles" I am so pleased for you….be happy" Kaju smiles but is not convinced and has a thoughtful look on her face.
Then the shoot is done quickly – Kaju naughtily sings and dances to the tune of "chura liya" wearing her wicked stringy blouses and a pink sari. Payal and Kaju are giggling like School girls at the end of it," gawwd- poor DEvu, he will die when he sees this. Qatilaana iraada hai aapka…" Kaju smiles blushing and dreams," Haan – Payal, who din mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai…jab pehli hum mile the…Poora badan kaamp utha tha mera, aise ki jaisi aag lag gayee ho…I was a complete goner. I hope, I can convey those feelings ….bass is sab…mushkil samay mein mauka hi nahin milaa..he had to go to London, without warning. And mera passport ka problem, us parr…mein aur meri, stupidity. Always Papa said, beta passport renew kar do warna problem ho jayegaa. Dev was ready to move planet venus to get my visa, but see…kyaa hua…mera honey aur moon…gayee behns paani mein" the girls giggle again. Payal tells her," I have to go now – you handle the rest" then she winks and kisses Kaju on the forehead, her eyes moist" God bless, you deserve the best" then she leaves, kaju goes back to her nanaland.
Whne Dev arrives Panna Chhachi and NB wait at the doorway with Pahua to greet him, with an aarti. Dev is wearing a black suit, tie and all. He walks in slowly, his eyes hooded. He was not smiling. His dark eyes flicker over the tiny welcome party. PC does the aarti, and NB smiles mischievously as she notes the way his eyes are scanning the inside of the house with a dark frown. He looked tired and irate. "Kise doondh rahe hain devarji -…koi aane waala hai" He frowns at bhabhi and tries to smile but it doesn't rech his eyes. "Kaaajjal…" his voice trails off. The women hide a smile glancing at each other. "NB says, " Who toh yahaan nahin hai" innocently eyeing his naughtily. He frowns darkly, an edge in his voice" Where is she. " she steps in looking around. PC says softly " shes gone out – will be back soon. It was important. Don't worry, why don't you rest meantime." It was 4pm. Dev has stopped by Radiocity on the way. Kaju hadn't gone in today. He was annoyed.
He went up his room, quickly and NB whispered to PC," Lagtha hai, devarji ka mood karab hai. Apni dulhan ko naa dekh kar, naaraaz hai" PC looks slightly worried," Haan Nandnini – Kitni Paagal hai ye kaajjal bhi…mein usse kaha that ki ghar par rehna…par uska surprise…bass Dev ka gussa toh who jaanti hai…usse phone karke bathaathe hain"
Dev paces the room angrily – Dammit Kaajjal where are You. His hands trembled slightly when he passes his fingers thru his badly ruffled hair. On the flight he was just thinking of the close shave he had. He never imaginaed in his wildest dreams he would be charged with a murder rap and a drugs cache, all in one go. The London Police were still looking for the man in the Blue Jacket. Shivansh assured him, there was no evidence. And he was standing as his alibi. Thank god for Shivansh. He was god sent.
He was so scared for Kaju after what he went thru in London. The nightmare of last one week. His voice Trambled slightly – Damn where are you Kaajjal, where are You. " He closes his eyes a shudder passing thru his frame. He couldn't tell her a word. Shivansh was right the less people knew about it the better.
Then he paced the room again. He tried her mobile but it was switched off. He flung it away in anger. His eyes blazing. He felt like wringing her neck sometimes.
Then his eyes softened, his anger instantly fading as he sees her photograph next to hs sitting on the dressing table. He takes it in his hands, slowly caressing its edge with his thumb. Sitting down on the bed he sighs deeply" – Oh Kaajjal I missed you. Thank god you weren't there. I am so glad." He whispered with feeling. With half a smile on his lips. He gently trailed his finger over her lips. The only woman who had the power to drive him crazy, and now he was going to see her tonight. A light shock of desire rose through his veins. He closed his eyes as he remembered his wedding night. Beyond his dreams, his head bent back, his face reflecting the passion they both displayed surprising each other, the amazing understanding and giving. He was blown away. Each day and night during this agonising period, it kept him going.His throat worked deeply. Then his mobile rings…he picks it up and speaks on…it the blood drains away from his face. He sits down, suddenly his eyes shocked…then he breathes softly…"Whattt….Dammmit I am coming now" what the hell shivansh was doing here…and what CD….Freeze
Preview : beach house part 2
Kajus welcome, devs strange behaviour. Devs...meeting with Shivansh and the shocking truth...shivnash ultimatum...Dev in dharam sankat....wait and watch folks
please let me know oif you wnat me to continue for i will be doing it on word for the sake of my own peace...
. sammy
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