PART 1:
It was mid afternoon of a wonderful day for fun. Step outside into
the open and we can see Mother Nature's outstanding creations.
But Aaliya instead of enjoying this lovely day is sitting inside her room
in a big mansion, where one can find everything he needs to live a life
of luxuries, but he cannot find that one thing without which life would
be meaningless, "LOVE".
There was no love in that house. It is odd but the father hardly remembers
the number of people that live in that house. It is surprising how a mother
could ever want to get rid of the daughter whom she carried in her womb
for nine months. The parents don't care for their child nor do they care
for each other.
Aaliya thinking about all this gets tears in her eyes, but she thinks,
" is there anything I can do to change my condition" this question
is very hard to answer but
Aaliya knew that the answer to this question was a NO.
She had to live a life of miseries until
God felt that she had enough and sends her something called
'HAPPINESS'.
Xmas was near and due to the holidays Aaliya's parents remained at home.
Aaliya sitting in her room gets a little shock when
she sees her mother enter her room.
Aaliya sits up straight and wipes away her tears quickly.
She did not want her mother to see her crying,
though she knew even if her mother did see, she would be the least bit interested.
Her mother stood next to her and said "Aaliya we are leaving within
a few hours to Arihant."
As she said this Aaliya felt the hope that her mother has changed draining,
like it does every time.
She continued, "Get yourself ready, we will be leaving soon.
We will spend sometime there, and remember don't be the simple
girl that you are, and dress according to the occasion. You will find
lots of people over there and I want you to talk to a few and become more social"
After saying this she left the room.
Aaliya does not like her mother but never dreamt of disobeying her.
She got up and started packing to set out to Arihant.
Aaliya would not have even dreamt of the impact that this journey
will have on her life.
Hope u guys would have liked the first part.
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Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
Thank u soo much. As great as my start was i hope it continues like that.
For every night there is day. This is all i can say.
ipsita @bindaas girl
16 years ago
great start i hope things change for aaliya soon.waiting to read more
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
Thank u sooo much.
Aamir will be introduced sooner or later.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
Thank u soo much. The more sad she is now the happier she will be later.
I will continue soon.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
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hey arshie !!!....your story sounds really interesting !!!....love the main characters !!! the first part it's really awesome !!!!!!!!! i feel really bad for aaliya !!! she's hates her mother, but doesn't want her to see her tears !!! i can't believe her mom....she just comes n tell her to get ready as they are leaving for arihant , she tell's her how to behave n leaves.... ........i feel sooo bad for her !!!!!!!!! ........aaliya without a words start getting ready to leave for arihant !!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!...........really interesting !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks a lot for ur lovely comments.
Yeah i too feel sad for Aaliya but in almost all the ff i have read aamna's parents are very supportive but i wanted to be a little different.
I will continue soon.
neha @neh0307
16 years ago
hi...awsume story yaar....too good....very different concept....i just loved it....waitin for AAMIR's entry....plzzzzzzz continue soon....
ananya7736 @ananya7736
16 years ago
hey arshie...
the first part was really awesome.. explained real well.. hope aaliya is not so sad in the future...
do continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!
zaira @le_me_star
16 years ago
hey arshie !!!....your story sounds really interesting !!!....love the main characters !!! the first part it's really awesome !!!!!!!!! i feel really bad for aaliya !!! she's hates her mother, but doesn't want her to see her tears !!! i can't believe her mom....she just comes n tell her to get ready as they are leaving for arihant , she tell's her how to behave n leaves.... ........i feel sooo bad for her !!!!!!!!! ........aaliya without a words start getting ready to leave for arihant !!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!...........really interesting !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
Thanks a lot for the greta comments yaar.
Ur right Aaliya has everything that life can want but does not have something that each person would want love.
She is not running away this quickly if she is running away that is.
will continue after i get more replies.
Faiza Sait @Arshie
+ 2
16 years ago
I feel bad for her too,but let her meet Aamir then we can see the change.
Thank u soo much.Will continue as soon as i think that people are reading this fiction and enjoying it also.