The Sand Princess

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Chapter 2

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Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago
Thank u soo much. As great as my start was i hope it continues like that.
For every night there is day. This is all i can say.
bindaas girl
ipsita @bindaas girl 16 years ago great start i hope things change for aaliya soon.waiting to read more
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago
Thank u sooo much.
Aamir will be introduced sooner or later.
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago
Thank u soo much. The more sad she is now the happier she will be later.
I will continue soon.
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago [QUOTE=le_me_star]
hey arshie !!!....your story sounds really interesting !!!....love the main characters !!! the first part it's really awesome !!!!!!!!! i feel really bad for aaliya !!! she's hates her mother, but doesn't want her to see her tears !!! i can't believe her mom....she just comes n tell her to get ready as they are leaving for arihant , she tell's her how to behave n leaves.... ........i feel sooo bad for her !!!!!!!!! ........aaliya without a words start getting ready to leave for arihant !!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!...........really interesting !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks a lot for ur lovely comments.
Yeah i too feel sad for Aaliya but in almost all the ff i have read aamna's parents are very supportive but i wanted to be a little different.
I will continue soon.
neh0307
neha @neh0307 16 years ago hi...awsume story yaar....too good....very different concept....i just loved it....waitin for AAMIR's entry....plzzzzzzz continue soon....
ananya7736
ananya7736 @ananya7736 16 years ago hey arshie... the first part was really awesome.. explained real well.. hope aaliya is not so sad in the future... do continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!
le_me_star
zaira @le_me_star 16 years ago hey arshie !!!....your story sounds really interesting !!!....love the main characters !!! the first part it's really awesome !!!!!!!!! i feel really bad for aaliya !!! she's hates her mother, but doesn't want her to see her tears !!! i can't believe her mom....she just comes n tell her to get ready as they are leaving for arihant , she tell's her how to behave n leaves.... ........i feel sooo bad for her !!!!!!!!! ........aaliya without a words start getting ready to leave for arihant !!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz..........can't wait for the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!...........really interesting !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago
Thanks a lot for the greta comments yaar.
Ur right Aaliya has everything that life can want but does not have something that each person would want love.
She is not running away this quickly if she is running away that is.
will continue after i get more replies.
Arshie
Faiza Sait @Arshie 16 years ago
I feel bad for her too,but let her meet Aamir then we can see the change.
Thank u soo much.Will continue as soon as i think that people are reading this fiction and enjoying it also.
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