Chapter 57

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Next day in marutius


In suraj mansvi's room


Mv: suraj!!



Suraj had just freshened up……..looks at her


Mv: suraj kitni samay kaha hai ke apne kapde aise mat
bikhar ke rakho


Su: tum theek kar do naa hmm


Mv: suraj that's a limit……main hi har bar theek karoon……why couldn't u do it huh


Su: Oh mansvi isme itna gussa kyun kar rahi hoo…….why are u so angry hhuh


Mv: nahi to kya karoon suraj……I mean I cant understand why are u not maintaining properly


Su: not maintaining properly what………the room


Mv: haan suraj tumhari ye bahut gandi aadat hoti jaa rahi


Su: mansvi tum ……..whats wrong with u why are u making a mountain out of molehill……..out of nothing………


Mv: suraj limit se aage bad jaate hain……..to u become angry……


Su: Stop mansvi…..seems tum to pagal ho gayi ho!!



Saying he storms out of room…….



In arjun bhumi room


Bhumi has freshened up…….


But arjun has his juice without freshninig…….this is not liked by bhumi


She stops him from having his juice


He looks at her smiles


A: bhavri


B: arjun ye mujhe do go get freshened up and then have the drink…….ggo hmm


A: bhavri…….(taking the glass) I would get freshned up……..what the hurry hmm


B: (snatches the glass) there is hurry!!......Arjun ye tumhari bahut buri aadat hai…….subah subah u have these juice tea without even frehsning up


A: so…..is there any harm in it


B: there is(stands up)


A: what


B: I mean these are bad habbits


A: so……..i mean……these aren't that bad habbits…….its normal bhavri


B: arjun ab humari shaadi ho chukka hai……tumhe aise behave nahi karna chahiye samjhe


A: bhavri what the problem with u……..tum mujhse aise kyun baat kar rahi ho


B: tum harkatein hi aise karte ho ke anger does……..


A: bhavri meri itni choti se baat pe tumhe itna gussa aa raha hai……wow…..unbelievable


B: arjun it does irritate me a lot!! U nee d to freshen up


A: okay fine……..(angry)


He goes inside the bathroom angry and saying somethings…….



In yuv shefali room


Sf: yuv utho!


She keeps on waking him but yuv keeps saying no


Sf: YUV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Yuv gets up


Y: oh shefali whats the problem…….some hurricane or what whay are u waking me up like this


Sf: yuv its too late and u always do this u are always late……..tum kabhi time pe nahi uth the ho


Y: so………..tum mujhe jaga dena hmm


Sf: yuv please be serious…….maine kitni baar kaha hai subah subah jaldi uthna……par nahi tumhe meri baat sunni hi nahi


Y: shefali stop……mujhe tumhari ye bakwas nahi suni……


Sf: oh really and mujhe …….mujhe……


Y: shefali………till that let me sleep


Sf: no ways………ur getting up…….u lazy creep creature…….u silly


Y: shefali mind ur words…….


Saying he gets up from the bed


Sf: well…….u got up!! But that's isn't enough…….whats the problem in waking up early yuv


Y: shefali please stop this……..


He wwas angry and goes in…….to feshen up




Later the guys meet up at the lobby!!


Su: hi guys


Y: bhaiyya tensed


Su: mansvi


Y: whats it


Su: I don't know whats with her………she has become too fussy about little things


A: so is bhavri


Y: same here……….


A: I really don't understand……subah subah if I drink juice without freshning up is there any thing wrong!


Y: yeah getting up late isn't a problem either


Su: neither is bymistakedly putting clothes here and there


Y: but our wives


Just then ladies see their husbands…….


They decide to go to them……..when they hear their conversations……..


Su: I am fed up with mansvi and her fussying…….


A: yeah bhaiyya…….main jaanta hoon we do have little bad things…….but doesn't love means accepting ur partner's good and bad things…….


Y: exactly but our wives seem to have forgotten it!!


Su: they want us to be prim and propah!!


A: oh comeon hum ab aise hain to kya kare………bhavri is a limit…….


Y: yep…….unhe hume samajhna chahiye par they…….


The girls feel bad hearing


The girls meet up at shefali's room


B: (crying) maine to arjun se kaha take uski ye aadat sudhar jaaye


Mv: hmm maine bhi…….i wanted my husband to keep his clothes properly


Sf: whats the harm in waking up my husband kya humse kuch baatein bhi nahi keh sakte hain di!!


Mv: enough is enough!!


Sf: sahi kaha do ab hume samjhana hoga that what we are doing is for their benefit only……..


B: how


Mv: yeah


They discuss some plan!!


Next morning……..


In suraj mansvi's room


Suraj gets up…….and gets frshned up………as usual his clothes lie here and there


Mansvi seemed to ignore this…….suraj looks at her…….


Su: mansvi…….


Mv: hmm


Su: gussa ho


Mv: nahi(smiles) aap ready ho jayen……hmm


Su: no who mere kapde aise pade huye hain aren't u angry huh


Mv: main nahi…….suraj har insaan main kuch kamiya hoti hain…….we should accept our partners good and bad qualities…..


Suraj is stunned


In arjun bhumi room


Arjun s drinking juice without frshning up……..bhumi seeme to ignore this


A: bhaavri I haven't freshned up……..


B: hmm


A: I am having the juice


B: yeah so(smiles)


A: huh nothing hmm



In yuv shefali room


Shefali doesn't wake up yuv……..


Yuv gets up very late……


Y: oh no its so late ………shefali why didn't u wake me up


Sf: well u don't like that(smiles)


The guys meet up……….


Su: something is seriously wrong with mansvi…….


A: yeah with bhavri too


Y: here too



Su: she isn't fussy about clothes


A: bhavri too


Y: something's fishy


Su: wow bro u used ur brains!!


A: hmm……..



Just then they see the girls



Mv: hey guys…….we thought why dont u guys rest we would go out and have fun!!


Su: but ur new to this place


B: bhaiyya we know some place by now…….we can enjoy ourselves


A: what…….


Y: wait we too would come


Mv: nahi not necessary


Saying the girls leave


The girls stay out the whole day having fun


Meanwhile the guys become tensed


Su: Where the hell have they gone……..the phone too isn't being contacted through


A: I know where the hell have they gone we are so tensed


Y: bhaiyya that's why I said no family honeymoon………hum alag alag gaye hote ye sari problems hi nahi hoti!!


Su:oh please yuv



Just then the girls come


Sf: wow di that's so fantastic


Su: where have u been its so late


Mv: suraj hum bache to nahi we can take care of ourselves


A: bhavri please…….bhabhi………aap log yaha naye hai……humari zimmedari hai…….aapko kuch ho jaata to


Mv: don't woory we can take care of ourselves!!


B: yeah……..we are tired


Y: tum behene ……..what did u get by frustating us……


Sf: we irritated u………no……


Mv: well we are tired……..we are off to sleep…….


Saying the girls move to their rooms


In their rooms


In suraj mansvi room


Su: mansnvi


Mv: yeah


Su: don't do this again we were worried…….what if tum logon ko kuch ho jaata


Mv: oh please suraj stopfussying huh


In arjun bhumi room


B: please tum choti se baat ka batangad kyun bana rahe ho huh


A: main………bhavri I care for u


B: oh



In yuv shefali's room


Y: shefali that was a limit tumhe nahi matlab nahi karna chahiye tha samjhi!!


Sf: yuv stop…….


Y: we were worried for u


Sf: I don't think so!!



In suraj mansvi room


Mv: suraj stop fussying huh


Su: (holds her) mansvi tum nahi jaanti how much I love u and……..tumne jo kiya who……..


He looks on the other side……


Mansvi looks at him…….


Mv: wahi to suraj hum bhi aapse bahut pyaar karte hai……..main jo tumse kehti hoon ke tum apne kapde sambhalo isilye na take tumhari ye gandi aadat se koi aur tumhe kuch na kahe……..main tumhari ke bare main hi sochti hoon


He looks at mansvi


Su: mansvi


Mv: u think we are fussy aren't u now…….suraj koi patni ye nahi chahegi ke uske pati ki koi kharabhi ho…….i agree u have bad qualities……but then wife does have a right to make her husband………full of good qualities huh


Suraj smiles………and hugs her


Su: mansvi I am such an idiot……..


Mv: nahi……



In arjun bhumi room


B: tum mujhse pyaar karte ho…….dont i…….jo main kehti hoo that freshen up…..kya who fussying hai pyaar nahi……


A: bhavri


B: haan maine aur didi ne ye plan banaya tha take aap logon ko samjha sake jo hum karte hai that for ur benefit only


Saying she frowns


A: bahvri……(hugs her) I know I was wrong…….hmm


B: nahi……..its okay now u have understood



In yuv shefali room


Y: shefali


Sf: yuv…….there isn't wrong if I say u get up early……I am fussy aren't u….now……..bolo…….ur in same situation…..


Y: shefali


Sf: I know u were worried…….we too are worries about u……we love u…..we are ur wives…….main tumhare liye kabhi bura nahi sochungi hmm


Y: oh shefali my love so sweet(hugs her)




In heritage house


S: gunwanti bas ab hum uss puppy ko ghar le aaye


Gu: haan di…….




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