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Chapter 16

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sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago comment kya karna..patna nhin tab itna lamba comment hai......wwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwww....l. .surii I luv u for dat!!!!!
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago THanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Varsha.... n also ur RN r 2gthr now!!Bt sochne ki bat hai ki kab tak ????? & nbsp;
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sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago Isko hi to bolte hai twist.....predict kar liya to fayda hi kya story ko twist de k tewist karne ka!! Waise Huda tera ho ya na ho...bechara HUda almost sabne bola!!! Bt dont expect too much frm RN..in a few parts I'll settle down inspection matter aur uske baad we'll head twds d end!!
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago Y r they so evil....U urself gave d answer long bakk.....Pure distilled unadulterated evil....rtera hi phrase tha....such people dont need a reason to turn -ve.Their mission isnt enything as such....jaisa i I almost sed in one of d intial parts some1 sneaks out d weapons to probably sell hem...dats wat they do....Ab ek ander ki baat bataoon.....yeh idea mujhe movie Zameen se aaya tha!!It had a very short parellel trach like dis!!!
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago No its not RN!!!!!RN track bhi utna hi short lived hoga jitna HN!! Waise me too wanted raj negative. Negative chars hve aa altogthr different attitude dat make them look so sexy....hehehehe....
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago mmmmmmmmmmmmmmwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhh...........I love u!!! well ur guess was just fab..main tabhi bolna chahti thi bt I cudnt hve done dat.....
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago MARTYR?????? Noooooooooooooooooo....Raj ko ahi se martyr declare mat kar yaar!!!Woh zinda hai aur sahi salamat hai...Bt yes I turned hero of so many hearts into villain....A few hearets were bound to be broken & I m seriously sorry to kno dat its urs!!Bt cant do much!!Waise like Aamn & Yoj..me too dying to see raj in a -ve char!!
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sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago hehehe.....yes un dono ko maine villain bana diya..It took me a lot to write this...I seriously cudnt hve faced cricism for dis one...Kyunki himmat nhin bachi thi.....It took me lots of guts to go against d flow n make RN -ve!!!!!Bt I m more than happy wid d response!!Phew...bach gayi main!!!
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 16 years ago well...I m gettin a similar shocked-cum-thoda sa pleased reaction frm almost everyone!!!Bt dat was wat exactly I wanted!!
Surya.Ravi
Surya.Ravi @Surya.Ravi 16 years ago
sanya dear after reading the part i'am seriously dumbstruck..awestruck... mujhko patah nahii chal raha hai kii main comment mein kya likhoon.. tumhari main jitni bhii tareef karoon woh kum hii hogi.. kya twist hai..raj naina were always together... they were the culprits..oh..yaar.. my head was really spinning when i was reading the part.. i was like oh..my God... what a drastic twist... this was really very unexpected... yaar just awesome , amazing , too good , fantastic , superb , stupendous , marvelous , dhassu , raachik ,jhaakas , excellent, par excellence, nice , interesting, very different , totally bindaas... it was really a dil ko dehla dene wala part... uff..me still in the trance of the part.... uski duniya mein khoyi hui hoon.. your story has simply hypnotized me...keep up the good work going.....
please do continue soon..me biting my nails in the curiosity kii najaane aage kya hoga.. i'll be waiting for you to continue... sun_42339254.4238310185
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