PART 7
Avinash follows laksh, rachna and kt, into the mall..
K: Laksh..
L: hmm....
K: mujhe waha jaana hai..shoe shop mein..
Laksh takes out his wallet, and checks the money..
L: (sighs) okay..chalo...
All three walk to the shoe shop..avinash follows..sneakily..
Laksh is standing beside Rachna talking to her..while kt is looking at sandals..
R: laksh..
L: hmm.....
R: eh wiase, tum hamesha "hmm" kyun bolte ho huh...
L: hmm...i mean..mai hmm kyun nahi bol sakta..
R: i dont know..mai bad pooch rahi hoon..ki tum hamesha hmm kyun bolte ho, jabhi koi tumhe bulata hai..(laughs)..
L: ha ha..very funny rachna..waise..rachna......
R: yeah..??
L: tum kuch nahi logi??
R: nahi..
L: par kyun??
R: mere paas indian currency nahi hai..
L: to kya tum samajhti ho, ki kt apne paiso se shoes aur se saari shopping kar rahi hai??
R: yeah..
L: you go and pick something..kt ki shopping bhi mai kara raha hoon...
R: no..its okay..i have lots of shoes..
L: you sure?? its on me........
Rachna thinks for a couple of seconds..
R: well...i do like those.....(she points at a pair of shoes)..
L: go ahead...le lo...
R: thank u laksh..ur the best...eeeee.....
She runs and grabs the shoes, and starts roaming around with kt..
They both grab some shoes, and walk back to Laksh..who is looking at his watch..making a "bored" face...
K: okay..humne pick kar liya..
L: okay..come..lets pay the price...waise...hai kitne ke??
They both show him the price..
Laksh's eyes widen..
L; uhh..okay..come...
They walk to the counter..he takes out his wallet, and looks in it..he pays the money..and all three walk away..out of the store..[remember, whatever they are doing/going..avinash is with them, seeing every singlt thing]....
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AFTER THEY HAVE DONE THEIR SHOPPING, ALL THREE GO TO THE BEACH...
AT THE BEACH...
Laksh was sitting infront of the waves, while R+K went to go get some juice..
They come back, and notice Laksh not there..dUn DuN dUnNnNnN.....
R: yeh laksh kaha chala gaya..
K: pata nahi..dhoondte hai..
They start walking around..trying to find laksh..
While they are walking they see a shadow of a man, following them..
They get scared, and turn around..
R+K: aaaaahhhh..(they scream)..
The man's face can't be seen..
and......................................................... .....BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a guy with a scary face pops up..and comes closer to them................
The girls start screaming contenuesly, and walk backwards..while the scary guy walks towards them..
Avinash gets mad..and comes and punches the guy..
The scary mask is now off Laksh's face..
but avi cant notice its him..
A: (yells) teri himmat kaise hui kt ko daraane ki..mai tujhe jaan se maar doonga..ill kill you......
Avi starts punching him in the face, and kicking him in the stomach..while Laksh notices its Avi..
L: Avinahs..stop!!! mai laksh hoon........
He hits Avi, in self defence..and they both get into a massive fight..
Avi turns him around, and pushes him..
Laksh bashes his head into a tree..he then, holds his head tight, as it is bleeding,
He is unable to see anything, as everything is blacking out for him..
He falls to the ground and faints..
Meanwhile Rachna notices it's Laksh..and runs to him..
Avi comes to Kt..
A: tum theek ho na kt??
Kt slaps him hard...
K: (yelling) TUMHARI HIMMAT KAISE HUI LAKSH KO CHOT PAHUCHANE KI.....WOH MAZAAK KAR RAHA THA AVINASH...AGAR USSE KUCH HO GAYA NAA..TO MAI TUMHE NAHI CHODOONGI..
Avi turns around, and now notices it is Laksh..()
A: kt im sorr--
K: (yells) SHUT UP AVINASH!! CHALE JAO YAHA SE..AUR MERE PAAS BHI AANE KI KOSHISH MAT KARNA..NAHI TO MAI POLICE KO BATA DOONGI...CHALE JAO...ABHI....CHALE JAO....(she starts crying)......
Avinash leaves.....
Kt runs to Laksh..and Rachna...
K: (crying) Laksh..aanken kholo laksh...LAKSH!!!!.......................
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LATER THAT DAY.......
IN AVI'S HOUSE...............
Kt walks in the door, very angry, ready to hit someone hard....
A: kt....laksh kaise hai--
Kt slaps avi many times....
K: tumhari himmat kaise hui, usko itni chot pahunchane ki......tumhari wajay se woh aaj kisi ko nahi jaanta hai...uski yaadash kho gayi hai........
echo: uski yaadash kho gayi hai....
echo: uski yaadash kho gayi hai....
echo: uski yaadash kho gayi hai....
K: usse kuch yaad nahi hai....darta hai woh mujhse...rachna se......
She holds him by his collar....
K: KYUN KIYA TUMNE AISA AVINASH......BOLO KYUN...............USKA EK CHOTA SA MAZAAK KE LIYE...TUMNE USSE YEH BHULA DIYA...KI MAI KAUN HOON........AB TO MAI KYA....KOI BHI TUMSE SHAADI NAHI KAREGA AVINASH.....KOI NAHI.............TUMNE KYUN KIYA AISA.........
She starts slapping him like crazy [slap-o-meter]........saying "kyun kiya tumne aisa" (yelling).......
She finally breaks down into tears, and runs out of the house......and back to Laksh's room, in ihis house....and see's Rachna crying for him, and Laksh is still not awake......and the doctor, checking his Blood Pressure......................
D: oh my god...!!!!!....
K: kya baat hai doctor?? laksh theek to ho jayega naa.......
D: mai keh nahi sakta...inhe bahut badi chot aayee hai.....yeh to pakka hai ki yeh apni yaadash kho chuke hai...par agar inko agle 24 hours mein hosh nahi aaya...toh yeh coma mein jaa sakte hai..ya phir inki maouth bhi ho sakti hai.............
Meanwhile the nurse comes in..
N: doctor??
D: yes..
N: hospital se reports aa gayi hai..yeh lijiye...
The doctor goes over the reports, and comes up with the conclusion..
K: doctor..kya hai reports mein..??
D: jab inko hosh aayega..tab inko ek ya do log yaad honge..sirf ek ya do...
Kt nods...
D: ill leave now..
K: ji...
The doctor, and Nurse leaves..
Kt goes as sits on the floor, beside laksh, in a corner, and dosen't say anything..
Rachna is sitting beside her..
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AFTER A COUPLE OF HOURS............
Laksh starts to remember flashbacks, about someone hitting him, and him bashing his head into a tree...all the memories he spent with kt and rachna, and all of a sudden, he wakes up with a gasp......
Rachna notices him wake up..and come into his senses....
R: kt..kt...(shakes her)...KT...laksh ko hosh aa gaya hai..kt........
Kt is in a deep shock, she won't reply to anyone, but is just sitting there, in a corner....
Laksh is looking around..trying to find someone, but cannot...
L: Rachna.......(he sits up)......
Rachna stands up...
R: Laksh......(crying)....
L: Rachna...tum..tum ro kyun rahi ho??
R: (crying) Laksh..tum...
L: mai kya??
Voice in background: KT!!!!!!!!!
Water is sprayed on Kt's face....
Kt wakes up in a shock, and notices Laksh sitting right in front of her...
K: (crying) Laksh...tum theek ho naa...laksh tum mujhe pehchante ho naa...
L: kt..tum kiski baat kar rahi ho..??...tumne bura sapna dekha hai shayad...mai toh yahi tha..tumhare paas...kt kya hua..kya tha tumhare sapne mein...tum abhut pareshaan lag rahi ho...kt please, bolo naa.....
Kt tightly hugs him, crying....
Laksh keeps his hand, on her head...and hugs her back...........
After a while, they pull out...
L: kt ab batao..kya baat hai...
Kt explains her dream to Laksh..
L: kt..inko seriously mat liya karo..yeh sirf sapne hai...abhi dekho...11:00 baj rahe hai..tum jaldi se ready ho jao..mai tumhara intzaar karta hoon. neeche...okay....
Kt nods, but is still crying..
L: (wipes off her tears)..kt...please rona band karo..woh sapna tha naa..sachai nahi thi...sirf ek nightmare tha..usse bhool jao, aur ek naya din shuroo kare...shhh.....
Kt nods..and goes to the washroom...
Laksh leaves for downstairs....
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xoxNo0rxox
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-mango- @-mango-
16 years ago
you are so funny. Well I will still have patience. So she is gone out of town but you are not. Okay. That sounds not funny, but if you think about it for a minute than maybe it just gets mentally funny.
zinny.xo @zinny.xo
+ 2
16 years ago
LOL!! Uru, i mean, she's gone, out of town. I'm still in my town..
-mango- @-mango-
16 years ago
Thanks for letting us know Zinu di. We are all waiting for both of you to come back from your vacation. Have a great summer to both of you, and peez continue soon dis.
zinny.xo @zinny.xo
+ 2
16 years ago
Guys. Di won't be updating for a while. She's on a Vication. Sorry, i forgot to tell you this before.
I have too much on my mind LOL..My head's guna EXPLODE...
Okay .. So, she won't be continuing her FF, until she's back.
I hope she comes back soon. Coz, im waiting too!!
Love,
Zinu
Riyaa147 @Riyaa147
+ 2
16 years ago
I agree with everybody!! I was scared, I thought ahe would not remember anybody!!Great part!!Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!
Prachi Chopra @*{~PrachI~}* 16 years ago Please continue soon Noor. Waiting eagerly. Prachi❤️
Angelic_Pari @Angelic_Pari
+ 4
16 years ago
Holy Crap.....u must be kidding me....for a sec...i thought that he won't remember kt but rachna...but then it was a dream man.....
saira @.x.Saira.x.
16 years ago
i 4giu 4 makin me fall off the chair !
im so glad he didnt 4 get kt n the wedding is ova
gr8 part noor !plz post nxt part soon
xoxNo0Rxox @xoxNo0Rxox
16 years ago
Oops. Sorry for scaring But, no more comments
-mango- @-mango-
16 years ago
I totally agree with Zinu di..
You completly scared me in the part jut before the dream. But oh well, fictions stories always have twists and turns. Its okay. But I rea;;y love reading your parts.
Plz continue soon.