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PART 5
THAT NIGHT..AFTER DINNER..
IN AVINASH'S HOUSE..
Avinash's Mom, and Avinash were talking..
AM: Avinash..kyun kiya tune aisa..kyun haath uthaya tune uspar..tu apna office ka gussa uspar kyun nikal raha hai..tu kab sudhrega avinash..kab??
A: im sorry mom..mujhe nahi pata tha..maine jaan booj ke aisa nahi kiya tha..im sorry mom..
AM: sorry mujhse kyun keh raha hai..tu kt ko jaa kar sorry keh..tune usko rulaya hai..iss ghar ki aane wali lakshmi ko..tu usse manale, warna itni derr na ho jaye ki..
A: ki..??
AM: kt..woh shaadi tod de..jaa..mana kar laa usse..abhi jaa..
A: ji mom..
He leaves and walks towards Laksh's house..
Laksh, Kt, and Rachna are seen sitting at the dinig table, eating food, and talking about their past "history"
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They hear a doorbell..and Laksh gets up, to go open the door..
K: laksh..ruko..
L: kya hua??
K: mai jaanti hoon jaun hai dawaze par..
L: kaun??
K: (angry face, and voice)..Avinash..tum darwaza nahi khologe..please laksh..
L: kt dekho agar woh hai bhi to..maafi--
K: nahi maaf karoongi mai usse..maine bahut sehen[tolerate] kar liya hai..ab aur nahi..laksh please, meri khatir, please darwaza mat kholo..
L: (sighs)..theek hai..tumhare liye..
Laksh sits back down..but the doorbell keeps ringing and ringing..riging and ringing..ringing and ringing..{oh..so annoying}..
After a couple of minutes..
Laksh gets up in anger..
L: bad..ab ami aur nahi sin sakta..mai darwaza kholne jaa raha hoon..woh saari raat aisa karta rahe ga..aur phir meri bell bhi kharab ho jayegi..kt..please..
K: theek hai..par mai usse nahi milungi..
L: par..
K: laksh..tum usse keh dena ki mai yaha nahi hoon..
L: sorry kt..par mai aisa nahi kar sakta..agar woh tumse really pyaar karta ho toh?? mai usse pareshaan nahi karna chahta..
K: nahi karta woh mujhse pyaar..aur nahi mai karti hoon usse pyaar..yeh shaadi sirf uski maa ne chahi hai..humne nahi..hum yeh sab uski maa ke liye kar rahe hai..humare liye nahi..aur mai us insaan se shaadi nahi kar sakti, jo apni wife to kya..apni mom ko bhi kahi bahar nahi leke jaata..woh hamesha out of town rehta hai..mai uss ghar mein nahi reh sakti saara din..(she yells it out)..(still yelling)..woh kabhi meri baat nahi maanta..jaise tum maante ho..woh kabhi mujhe pyaar se baat tak nahi karta..jaise tum karte ho..ab tumhi batao..kya karoongi mai us isaan ke saath reh kar..KYA KARU MAI LAKSH..KYA KARU MAI..................
L: (keeps her hands on her shoulder, and then shifts to her face)..kt..calm down..please..gussa mat ho..nahi kholoonga mai darwaza..tum..please..tum..rachna tum hi isse samjhao naa..mai iski aisi halat nahi dek sakta..(because she started crying with shouting in anger, at him)..
Laksh sadly leaves the dining table, and walks up to the storage room..(you'll find out later..why)..
R: kt sambhalo apne aap ko..dekho..isme laksh ki kya galti hai..woh to bas tumhe aur avinash ko..
K: im sorry rachna..mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..mai kya karu..mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai..
R: kuch nahi hoga kt..tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai..tum aisa karo..tum apne kamre mein jaake so jao..mai yaha clean up karti hoon..
K: par laksh..
R: usse aise rehne ki aadat hai..jabhi london mein kisi se gussa hota tha ya, kisi ki yaad aati thi..woh kahin shaant jaga[a peaceful place]..pe jaa kar..waha par thodi derr rehta tha..aur phir wapas aa jata tha..tum uski chinta mat karo..woh aisa hi hai..
K: tumhe uske baare mein itna sab kuch pata hai..
R: haan..aur kuch kuch tumhare baare mein bhi..usko to mai poora jaan chuki hoon..par tumhe jaana baaki hai..poori tarha se..
Kt smiles, but is jealous
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R: chalo tum kamre mein jaake so jao..good night!!
K: good night!! thanks rachna..
R: kis baat ka..
K: jab waqt aayega bata doongi..
Kt leaves, and rachna is left there confused..
After a while Avinash goes back to his house, and tells her mom that no one would open the door, with a frown on his face..her mom asked him not to go to work for these couple of weeks, and spend time with kt..and win her over..he smiled and agreed, and promised that he would go somewhere with her tomorrow..and for all these days..he cancelled all his meetings, and posponed some..etc..etc..
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THE SCENE SWITCHES TO LAKSH..
Laksh was seen sitting in the storage room, crying, and thinking of all the moments him and kt spent together, befor he left for london..and now those moments will never come back..{aww..}..after a while..he got up, and walked back to his room..
He opened the door, but was looking down on the floor, with a frown on his face..
He finally looks up, and notices kt sitting on his bed..
L: Kt..
K: kya baat hai laksh..tum aise kyun chale gaye the..im sorry laksh..
L: nahi kt..isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai..
K: (she gets up) hai naa laksh..meri wajay se tum..
L: kt..
He walks towards her..
K: laksh kya hua..
L: shh.....(he covers her lips)..ab koi sawal nahi..
K: par..
L: maine kaha naa..koi sawal nahi..tum abhi apne kamre mein jaa kar so jao..mai bhi so jaata hoon..aur waise bhi..tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai..mujhe nahi..par tum jao naa..
K: kyun?? mujhe kuch hua hai kya..jo mujhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai..hmph..
L: chalo phir theek hai..tum saari raat yaha jaag ke jagrata karo..aur mai to yaha sota hoon..aahh..
He jumps flat on his bed..and rolls in his blanket
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L: (relaxed) aahh...(relieved)..
K: Laksh..tumhe sharam nahi aati..
L: arre?? isme sharam ki kya baat??
K: apni dost ke saamne tum..aise..acha nahi lagta..
L: (sits on his bed) excuse-me..yeh mera kamra hai shayad..toh sharam kaise..hahahaha...
K: ohh...well..good night!! kal baat karenge..
L: (laughs)..okay..
Kt leaves..
L: (to himself) mai intzaar karoonga..
K: (to herself) mai intzaar karoongi..
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so guys..this was the next part..please tell me how it was
xoxNo0rxox
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saira @.x.Saira.x.
16 years ago
gr8 update noor!
the 'mai intezaar karoonga/gi' was sweet
update asap!
abhinaya @ktandlakshyalov
16 years ago
gr8 update just waiting for laksh-kt to realise their feelings!!! n ya only laksh-kt plzzzzzzzzzzzz
-abhi
-mango- @-mango-
16 years ago
Who dosen't hate Avinash here? He is soo evil! He dosen't liston anyone and does what he thinks is right. OMG! Someone needs to stop this evil guy, or else he will kill me too. jus joking.
But I am reaallly waiting for your next part di.
Plz continue soon.
Angelic_Pari @Angelic_Pari
+ 4
16 years ago
gr8 part.....plzz dont let avinash get smarry with kt...i want laksh kt....
zinny.xo @zinny.xo
+ 2
16 years ago
Great Job Di!! Please continue soon. Waiting eagerly for your next part
Love,
Zinu
Aliya @VirMan4lyfe
+ 2
16 years ago
great parT!! i was reallYY desperate!! plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss continue soon!!
love,aliya