The responses for my previous part were at an all time low….. but I cant complain…. Maybe it just was not up to the mark. Sorry if I have been disappointing you. Thanx a lot to those who did write responses encouraging me like Diya, Yogi, Khnk_rox. This part is dedicated to you for not letting my morale go down! Its long and action packed so I hope you enjoy it. I have planned some very romantic and interesting parts ahead so I hope you guys enjoy them!
PART 17
Rajveer walked towards the old fort with a box in his hands. The kidnappers had called again 1 day later telling him to meet them here with the triggers (for which they had given him one day's time to get). The cold air, haunted feel and thundering would make you and me scared but not Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat. He walked confidently inside.
Raj- IM HERE WITH WAT YOU WANT!
Suddenly 5 spies rushed out. They looked at him with gleaming eyes.
1 of them- C'mon now captain. Give it here.
Raj- No. Not to you. I want to give this to your boss.
They laughed.
Spy- You are in no position to argue. Do as we are saying.
This time it was Raj's turn to laugh.
Raj- Why are you so scared then if you know that I am in no position to do anything? Just as you instructed, I am unarmed and completely at your mercy. Then why is your boss frightened of coming in front of me? You know that you have the upper hand now.
The spies growled.
Spy- Our boss is not scared of someone as low as you. He just does not consider meeting you important enough for him.
Raj- Then what does he do? Just sit around while you do the kidnapping, negotiations and everything else?
One of the spies almost jumped on him with anger. But a smooth voice suddenly interrupted.
"Wait Abay, don't let him aggravate you. He want to meet me huh? Then let him"
The head spy walked in surrounded by other spies. The other floor was suddenly filled with spies pointing guns at him. But instead of getting scared ow worried, Raj smiled- His plan was working!
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Yudi, and Pooja were standing guard outside the fort, unseen by others, so that if Raj was in any trouble they could run to his defence. Naina, Huda,Aalekh and Ali stealthily got into the fort from the huge hole in the broken wall when the spy boss had gone to Raj. They knew that now the attention of all other spies in the fort would be on Raj and their Boss. They had to get to Riya. It was not difficult knowing which room she was in- It was the most heavily guarded room on the ground floor. It was lucky that the fort had only 2 floors, with the top one devoid of any rooms. The crept slowly to the door, now that Rajveer had all the attention of the spies, saying things which could easily have him slaughtered. But the heated argument had kept the spies distracted so it worked for the cadets. Once they got Riya safely out of the fort, they along with reinforcements Which were waiting at a distance, carefully hidden would enter the fort to stun and capture the spies, which fortunately were not that many in number as they had expected. They neared the room. 3 spies were guarding it. Quickly, Naina, Huda and Aalekh moved in and killed them by snapping their necks. It was instant and silent and had not diverted the attention of the other spies.Aalekh and Ali Huda and Naina dragged their bodies into the rooms as silently as they could while Aalekh and Ali crept inside. Riya was gagged and tied up to a chair, but thankfully awake. Just like outside, they were successful in killing the 2 guards inside too. They went and untied Riya but she looked at them suspiciously.
Riya- Kaun ho tum? Kya chaahate ho?
Ali- Hum KMA ke cadets hai. Hum tumhe yahan bachane aaye hai.
Riya- Bhaiya kahan hai? Aur mein yeh kaise maan loon ki tim sach keh rahe ho?
Aalekh- Dekh, tera bahi bahar hai, un gundon ka dhiyaan apni aur kheench raha hai. Aur Apna uniform dekh ke tere ko pata nahin chalta hai kya ki apum KMA ka cadet hai?
Riya- Uniform nakli bhi to ho sakte hai
Aalekh looked annoyed- Dekh abhi dimag ka dahin nahin karne ka. Samjhi? Apun kya proof apne jeb mein lekar ghoomega kya?
Naina and Huda just entered the room and heard wat was being said.
Naina- Nahin Aalekh, yeh sahi keh rahi hai. Is waqt kisi bhi anjaan aadmi par yakeen karma bewakoofi hai. Lekin tum mujhe to pehechaanti ho na Riya?
Riya quickly went upto her, hugged her and broke into tears.
Naina- Riya kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho? Ab tak to tumne itne saahas se kaam liya hai to phir ab, jab jeet itni kareeb hai, tum kamzor kyun ho rahi ho.
Riya- B…Bhaabi at t…tak t…to apne aap ko roka hi hai l….lekin ab aur n….nahin….
Naina stroked her hai. Riya wiped away her tears.
Riya- But you are right bhaabi, jab jeet itni kareeb hai to phir hausla nahin haarna chaahiye.
Naina- That's it! Ab tum Raj ki behen lagti ho. Come….
They slowly got out of the for just as they had entered. They quickly ran to the reinforcements van and left Riya there. They hurried back with other soldiers. Raj and the spy head had been in the most intense battle of words and now things were getting too out of hands. Even the calm and composed spy boss was boiling with rage. Naina was getting worried. Was Raj overdoing it……They were all in position. Suddenly one soldier screamed- ATTACK!
They all rushed into the fort. The unsuspecting spies were taken by surprise and the battle which followed was intense. But the army had the upper hand. They outnumbered the spies 1:4 and were more prepared. The spies fell like a pack of cards. Raj was busy in fighting with the army boss. While fighting, Raj couldn't help but admire the way all the spies had fought, especially the spy boss. Although they were not as well armed or prepared as the soldiers they fought with unprecedented skill and had been able to keep the soldiers off for long. When the spy chief saw that his men were losing terribly and that very soon he would be caught and captured (since he was sure that he would not be killed as they would keep him for interrogation), he pulled something out of his pocket, with a mad gleam in his eyes. He would never bear the humiliation of being captured by his worst enemies. NEVER. Raj saw what he had taken out of his pocket and his eyes widened with shock. He paled when he realized what the spy chief was going to do…
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" he screamed!
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swati @sweta2005
+ 6
16 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon da next part soon fast asap now only.
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari
16 years ago
hey ayesha
too good
good going
keep it up
pl continue yr ff is not bad at all
it is just that may be the readers are not getting time to read it so may be you cannot expect instant replies.
but pl dont get disappointed
pl continue
Anuradha @diya7000
+ 3
16 years ago
Hey ayesha ur previous update was gud yaar ..
This one!!..what to say??awesome...really well potrayed..n of course a well desired longer one...but the last line..scares me..what is the thing??why raj got shocked??
I have a request..pls don't be late...this time
Prachi @fabremixed
16 years ago
hey. just caught up with ure ff. its mind blowin.
Ayesha @ayeshacassim
16 years ago
huh? dats it? is my fic dat bad?
thanx a lot andrea, sweta and khnk_rox.....
KSG_qubool_hai @KSG_qubool_hai
16 years ago
cliffhanger.. plz tell me the spy boss is unable to kill himself.. n raj captures him.. n gets info outta him.. nice part.. update soon ayesha..
andreamcl @andreamcl
16 years ago
Hey that's excellent, sorry for not replying to the last part I only manage to read fics every few days cause of uni work. It was good to have some action and I'm looking forward to the next part!
swati @sweta2005
+ 6
16 years ago
its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue da next part soon fast asap.