Thanx a lot guys! As usual your awsum response has me flying!!!! I hope I keep entertaining u guys!
PART 11
If this was dying, thought Raj, it was not bad at all. There was no pain and he could not feel any blood pouring out. But was this really dying? He was still on his feet. So tentatively he opened his eyes to see that it was not he who had been shot but the spy, who was now lying dead on the floor. But how? He had not shot, in fact he did not even have a gun. He turned back to see Aalekh and Huda, both holding guns and looking triumphant. Raj was stunned.
Raj- how….. how…..
Aalekh- kyun, chauk gaye na sir? Who actually jab aap gaye to who sab guard log wahan se haste haste chale gaye. Kuch theek nahin lag raha tha. Phir Naina ne dekha ki kuch log aap se pehele hi yahan par pahunch gaye hain. Use bahut dar laga. Is liye apun dono ne us arms and ammunitions ke dabbe se kuch guns liya aur yahan aa gaya. Ali aur Yudi thoda nicchu khade hai aur Naina aur Pooja unse bhi niccchu guns lekar. Lekin abhi apun ko jaldi karma hoga. Kya patta who jhoote guards waapas aa gaye to?
Raj quickly called up the reinforcements and soon helicopters with army men were hovering around .3620. the reinforcements acted quickly and were all around the hill searching for the spies. Meanwhile Raj made a complaint with Colonel Shakti about the way the situation had been handled so carelessly that spies mingled with the guards. He promised that the matter will be looked into and that such accidents wont happen in the future. Raj placed the triggers in the now heavily guarded .3620 (now with true high level officers). Other security measures (like swipe cards and passwords) were taken. Raj then turned to Aalekh and Huda.
Raj- You saved my life and I will always be grateful to both of you for that.
Huda- yeh to humara farz than a sir. Pehele to mein ne aap ko itni mushkil mein daala to uske baad to mujhe yeh karma hi tha na?
Aalekh- sir please, agar aap apun ko apna maante ho to phir yeh thank you jaisi baatein mat kaho. Apun ne kuch khaas nahin kiya. Agar aap apun ki jagah hote to aap bhi yehi karte.
Raj shook his head smiling.
Aalekh- Ab jaldi chalo varna Naina wahan fikar ke mare behosh ho jaayegi. Ya phir kya pata ho bhi gayee hogi. Jab apun usse chod kar aaya to who aadhi mareli thi. Jaldi chalo.
They all hurried back down only to find Naina in a shocked state. She looked as though she had seen a ghost. Pooja was trying to console her but in vain.
Raj- Naina……..
She turned to see him and her face broke into a huge relieved smile. She could not believe her eyes. She ran upto him and jumped into his ready arms. He carried her around happily. They were so happy…. They had thought they would never get to see each other again. They felt so relieved and comfortable in each other's arms. And this time No one around them seemed to have an objection, not even Huda. Because wordlessly, Raj and Naina had said a lot to them throught that tender, loving, long hug. They had all seen romance in tv shows and films. But now, for the first time in their lives they were seeing real life romance, true deep love before their eyes. And no one wanted to break such a tender moment. It was clear how much they loved each other…… they all understood it clearly……..
COMING UP NEXT- Raj's dark past…….
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Anuradha @diya7000
+ 3
17 years ago
Hey ayesha d video was really nice
Sarah @HPmaniac
+ 2
17 years ago
great job...plz continue soon..I wish I cud see the video,but something is wrong wid my comp....
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari
17 years ago
Please Post the next soon
andreamcl @andreamcl
17 years ago
Oooo what dark past? Naina already knows about Navin in your story, right? Is it an old girlfriend or something? I hope not!!! Please continue it soon!
Neha @miss_neha
+ 3
17 years ago
Awesome part.... glad huda has no prob now.... but i wonder wats rajs dark past... seems really interestin!!!!
Ayesha @ayeshacassim
17 years ago
thanx a million guys. oh ya i made this video of RN on the title track of kuch kuch hota hai. Plz check it out and comment on the video and fan-fic. alternate link: http://www.badongo.com/vid/342932download link: http://www.badongo.com/vid/342932/1Love Ayesha ayeshacassim39191.3481018519
pooja sohinda @mahek-e-gulab
17 years ago
cool yaar ayesha maza aa gaya....
kash huda-alekh real me bhi i mean lrl me bhi raj ko bach le aur naina aise hi use hug karti rahe, karti rahe
Anuradha @diya7000
+ 3
17 years ago
Short again!!! ...but really gr888 .
This time pls post very soon wid some R-N scenes.
Pls
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Dat was really nice Ayesha!!
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari
17 years ago
hey ayesha
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
well written and well presented
Keep up the good work
well waiting to read Raj's Dark Past.
update soon