Hey guys! thanx a lot for your valuable comments.... you dont know how much i treasure them. I know i am a bit early but i will be busy tmr.... thats why. here is Part 7. enjoy and pllzzzz do comment!
PART 7
Meanwhile Raj and Naina strolled around the woods.... Naina busy chattering away and raj busy staring at her and getting lost in her sweet voice.... her deep beautiful eyes....
DHAM! The next moment Raj was flat on the ground. he had tripped over a huge protruding root of a huge tree and had fallen face first on the ground. Naina knelt down as he was getting up, extremely worried.
Naina- sir, aap theek ho na... oh mu god...
raj- relax naina, im fine...
in reality he had hurt his knee but the concern in Naina's voice had made him numb to all pain.... she cared for him....
Raj (murmuring)- stupid tree
Naina- yes, its quite a peculiar tree, the roots are so high and branches so low.
and true enough, one of the branches was so low that it was blocking their path, Raj moved it to reveal a spectacle Naina would have not even seen in her wildest dream.... Ali and Pooja were sitting in one of those low branches in each others arms, Ali passionately kissing her cheeks........
Raj and Naina looked at each other horrified.... raj quickly lowered the branch, not disturbing the couple and taking a different route. there was a slight uncomfortable silence between them which Raj soon broke.
Raj- soooo.... we are not the only people awake, are we?
Naina giggled but seddunly screemed and ran behind raj hugging him. raj saw why. there was a huge snake in their path. He clutched nainas hand and pulled her away in a different path.
she was shivering out of fear. raj smiled.
Raj- tum bahut dar gayee na?
Naina- haan.... magar itna nahin (she held his hand tenderly) aakhir aap jo mere saath ho... hamesha... always with me
they stopped in their tracks and looked into each others eyes and came closer to each other.... and closer..... and closer.....
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KSG_qubool_hai @KSG_qubool_hai
17 years ago
hey ayesha.. another gr8 part.. but dude way too much suspense in the end.. i jus hope nothin spoils the moment.. that wud be soooo bollywood..anyways.. will wait for the next part to find out wat happpens.. update soon
andreamcl @andreamcl
17 years ago
Yay, finally updated!! Sorry for not commenting before now, I've only just found the fanfiction section of IF, that was excellent, I love the Ali-Pooja jodi, now please let RN have some kissing as well!
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari
17 years ago
hey ayesha
good part again
well presented d.
pl cont soon
poonam @koolkat
17 years ago
awsome part.. plz..continue soon..omg i m spousse to be doing my homework right now.. ..plz..continue soon koolkat39182.9184837963
Pinka @pinka28
+ 2
17 years ago
bilkul realty mein to sirf reverse action hone ki possiblity hai
Neha @miss_neha
+ 3
17 years ago
excellent part.... kool... but u ended it at the wrongest time possible... n ali n pooja passionately kissin... sumthin i wudnt have even imangined myself!!!! loll
Ayesha @ayeshacassim
17 years ago
hahaha!!!! it sounds so funny.... latke hue....i will try 2 update as soon as possible.... latak latak kar thak jaayege na! and fine.... i wont use heavy adjectives for u.... just 1.... U ROCK!!! simple na?
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra
17 years ago
Point hai.......Suspense mein maza to aata hai bt think abt them...paas mein aa ke latke hue hain ki kab Ayesha aaayegi aur batayegi ki ab hamein kya karna hai!!
& BTW mere liye itne heavy type k adjectives mat use kiya kar yaar!!Tooo heavy to handle u c!!!
Ayesha @ayeshacassim
17 years ago
thanx pooja! keep reading!
pooja sohinda @mahek-e-gulab
17 years ago
kya yaar bas aur thoda paas ane dena tha
ok next part me dhyan rakhna
awesome again truly gr888