Pyaar

Pyaar Completed M

Chapter 7

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KSG_qubool_hai
KSG_qubool_hai @KSG_qubool_hai 17 years ago hey ayesha.. another gr8 part.. but dude way too much suspense in the end.. i jus hope nothin spoils the moment.. that wud be soooo bollywood..anyways.. will wait for the next part to find out wat happpens.. update soon
andreamcl
andreamcl @andreamcl 17 years ago Yay, finally updated!! Sorry for not commenting before now, I've only just found the fanfiction section of IF, that was excellent, I love the Ali-Pooja jodi, now please let RN have some kissing as well!
yoginisahakari
yoginisahakari @yoginisahakari 17 years ago hey ayesha good part again well presented d. pl cont soon
koolkat
poonam @koolkat 17 years ago awsome part.. plz..continue soon..omg i m spousse to be doing my homework right now.. ..plz..continue soon koolkat39182.9184837963
pinka28
Pinka @pinka28 17 years ago
bilkul realty mein to sirf reverse action hone ki possiblity hai
miss_neha
Neha @miss_neha 17 years ago excellent part.... kool... but u ended it at the wrongest time possible... n ali n pooja passionately kissin... sumthin i wudnt have even imangined myself!!!! loll
ayeshacassim
Ayesha @ayeshacassim 17 years ago
hahaha!!!! it sounds so funny.... latke hue....i will try 2 update as soon as possible.... latak latak kar thak jaayege na! and fine.... i wont use heavy adjectives for u.... just 1.... U ROCK!!! simple na?
sanyamalhotra
sanyamalhotra @sanyamalhotra 17 years ago Point hai.......Suspense mein maza to aata hai bt think abt them...paas mein aa ke latke hue hain ki kab Ayesha aaayegi aur batayegi ki ab hamein kya karna hai!! & BTW mere liye itne heavy type k adjectives mat use kiya kar yaar!!Tooo heavy to handle u c!!!
mahek-e-gulab
pooja sohinda @mahek-e-gulab 17 years ago kya yaar bas aur thoda paas ane dena tha ok next part me dhyan rakhna awesome again truly gr888
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