Thanx a lot all of u!!!!! its really encouraging to read such sweet comments! im glad u like my work! Thanx again. I am posting Part 4 now, but I will only be able to post Part 5 on thursday or friday bcoz of exams. sry for the delay and thanx again!
PART 4
Huda could not take this anymore. "NAINA!!!" he said loudly. she jumped and stood upright, blushing. "tu theek to hai na?" he asked.
Naina- haan Huda. mein theek hoon. thanx to capt. sir
she looked at raj shyly. Raj winked at her
Raj- any time, cadet naina "ah" singh!
Huda grinded his teeth furiously. Aalekh, who along with yudi had been carrying all necessities and amunitions broke the silence.
Aalekh- abe o Huda. wahan peeche kya time pass kar raha hai. yahan aa aur apun ki madad kar uthane mein. yeh saala nautanki to nahin hone ke barabar hai.
Yudi rolled his eyes and Huda, completely unwillingly came forward. he wanted to keep an eye on raj and naina but had no option now. They walked on for wat seemed like hours, each one lost in their own thoughts. Pooja thinking of why rohit dumped her again and who she loved more, ali thinking of pooja and wether she actually loved him or Rohit, aalekh on wether alcohol was really now taking its toll on him, yudi on his decision to return to the academy, Naina on the strange sensation she was feeling now on being with raj, raj on his growing love for naina and huda on the suspicious behavior of naina and raj. soon it became dark and raj decided to stop for the day. they all set up their tents and aalekh and ali collected firewood. Raj started preparing the fire..
Naina- sir aap aaraam kijiye. aap thak gaye hoga. mein aag jalati hoon.
raj- nahin naina, mujhse zyaada tum thaki hui dikhti ho. plz rest
Naina (taking the match sticks from his hand)- i insist sir. and anyway, even i should learn, na?
raj smiled at her.
Raj- as you wish maam (bowing to her)
they laughed. but the other cadets looked at each other uneasily at their behaviour. Huda was becomming redder every minuite. Raj went to wash up and naina started lighting the bonfire. she lit it but burnt her hand a lil.
Naina- aaaaah!!! mera haat!
raj left the water and went 2 her and tok her hand
Raj- r u ok?
they loooked at each other and started drowning in each others eyes all over again forgetting their surroundings, nainas hand in raj's. ayeshacassim39172.3906134259
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Anuradha @diya7000
+ 3
17 years ago
Wow last 2 epi's...greaaaaaaat ayesha...just gr88..I am srry that I missed it earlier..but do post soon..this time I'll not be late..
KSG_qubool_hai @KSG_qubool_hai
17 years ago
jus read all the parts in one go.. realy nice story.. hope it comes alive like that on the show too.. cant wait for the next part, unexpected twist, and the spicy romance.. lolz..
Neha @miss_neha
+ 3
17 years ago
Awesome part... n kool... cnt wait for da spicy twist... loll
swati @sweta2005
+ 6
17 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon fast asap now only.
Patjhar @Patjhar
17 years ago
Oooohhhh can't wait to see what happens in the real LRL.
You are wonderful Please keep continuing!!!
Ayesha @ayeshacassim
17 years ago
I 4got 2 mention..... the next part will contain a very "unexpected twist". its gotta do with Huda. And I will surely be making it more spicy!!!! hope you enjoy! i will be awaiting ur comments!!!